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5 - Superfluous words

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  23 November 2009

Neville W. Goodman
Affiliation:
Southmead Hospital, North Bristol NHS Trust
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Summary

Some common examples

Scientific writing in general, and medical writing in particular, is muddied by superfluous words. These masquerade as part of convention but are actually just catch-phrases or padding: the literary equivalent of clearing the throat. We select as common culprits basis, case, conditions, essentially, feature, function, grounds, instance, nature, situation, type, very. These sorts of word usually add nothing; they are words for words' sake. When you can recognize them as such, delete them and restructure the sentence.

BASIS

The patients were examined on a daily basis means that patients were examined daily.

Samples of blood were taken on a regular basis means that samples were taken regularly.

These adverbial phrases (on a daily basis, on a regular basis) can usually be replaced by the simple adverbs (daily, regularly).

It should be possible to perform 25% of all operations on a day case basis by the year…

There is no adverb day-casely, but why not as day cases? (And incidentally why not a quarter for ‘25%’?)

A one-to-one basis is a fashionable phrase; it means individual(ly).

BASICALLY, see ESSENTIALLY

CASE

Searching for case is worthwhile; it can almost always be replaced or deleted (see p. 126). It is correct usage in We report 13 cases of diabetes or Atropine should be available in case a bradycardia occurs, although Atropine should be available to correct any bradycardia is better.

It is too early to judge if this is the case or not.

Replace the case or not with so.

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Medical Writing
A Prescription for Clarity
, pp. 95 - 103
Publisher: Cambridge University Press
Print publication year: 2006

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