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Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  19 November 2025

Jingyi Ding
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Yi Han
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China Key Laboratory of Poyang Lake Wetland and Watershed Research (Ministry of Education), School of Geography and Environment, Jiangxi Normal University, Nanchang, China
Wenwu Zhao*
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Jian Hu
Affiliation:
Sichuan Zoige Alpine Wetland Ecosystem National Observation and Research Station, Southwest Minzu University, Chengdu, China
Xuan Gao
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Yue Yan
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Earth Surface Processes and Disaster Risk Reduction, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
Yijin Wang
Affiliation:
School of Natural Resources, Faculty of Geographical Science, Beijing Normal University, Beijing, China
David Eldridge
Affiliation:
Centre for Ecosystem Science, School of Biological, Earth and Environmental Sciences, University of New South Wales, Sydney, Australia
*
Corresponding author: Wenwu Zhao; Email: zhaoww@bnu.edu.cn
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Abstract

Grasslands are one of the major ecosystem types in drylands. Encroachment of shrubs into grasslands affects the functioning of drylands by altering community structure, with impacts exacerbated under greater intensity of encroachment. Yet, we have a limited understanding of how ecosystem structure responds to the degree of shrub encroachment. Here, we describe a field-based study designed to examine changes in ecosystem structure beneath shrub patches (patch condition) and between patches (spatial distribution pattern of patches) along a gradient in encroachment in a semiarid grassland in Inner Mongolia, China. We found that greater encroachment was associated with wider and taller shrubs with more branches. As shrub encroachment intensified, the area beneath shrubs had more litter and was less exposed to grazing. The landscape was characterized by more discontinuous patches of vegetation and more bare ground as encroachment intensified. Either the patch condition or the patch spatial pattern was shaped mainly by the magnitude of shrub encroachment rather than by the structure of individual shrubs (e.g., height and canopy width). Our study highlights the idiosyncratic response of ecosystem structure (patch condition and patch spatial pattern) to intensifying encroachment, reinforcing the importance of considering the degree of shrub encroachment when managing encroached grasslands.

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Figure 1. Hypothetical relationships between the magnitude of shrub encroachment (indicated by shrub cover) and ecosystem structure. (a) Ecological condition of patches (e.g., herbaceous biomass beneath patches and soil surface properties); (b) spatial distribution pattern of vegetation patches (e.g., distance between patches and patch brokenness).

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Figure 2. (a) Sampling sites across Xilingol, Inner Mongolia, China, and photos of different levels (none, low, medium and high) of encroachment; (b) shrub cover range of sampling sites across the rainfall gradient; and (c) the relationship between shrub abundance and shrub cover.

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Table 1. Attributes used to assess the 13 soil surface condition (SSC) indices

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Figure 3. Variation in the shrub community characteristics (the mean, variance, kurtosis and skewness of shrub branch abundance, canopy cover [CD], DBH and shrub height [Ht]) of shrubs along shrub encroachment gradient (square root of shrub cover) and (b) the visualized summary diagram of variation in community characteristics with only significant results shown. * in (a and b) indicates significant (P < 0.05) linear relationships (Supplementary Table S2).

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Figure 4. (a) Difference in patch condition between shrub patches (green) and interspaced grass patch (yellow) and (b) variation of patch condition in shrub patch (green) and the interspaced grass patch (yellow) along shrub encroachment gradient (square root of shrub cover) fitted with linear regression (solid line). * in (a and b) indicates significant (P < 0.05) linear relationships. Results of linear regression are shown in Supplementary Table S3.

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Figure 5. Variation in the spatial distribution pattern of patches along the gradient in shrub encroachment (square root of shrub cover) fitted with linear regression (solid line) and quantile regression (dotted line, 5th and 95th) for vegetation patches (blue) and bare patches (red). AREA SD, standard deviation of patch area. Results of linear regression are shown in Supplementary Table S4.

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Figure 6. (a) Mechanisms associated with patch condition and spatial distribution pattern of patches and (b) the standardized total effect. Factors are climate (aridity [AI] and mean annual temperature [TEMP]), encroachment magnitude (shrub cover [COVR] and shrub abundance [ABUN]), shrub community (shrub height [HT] and shrub canopy [CANO]), patch condition (surface roughness of soil under shrubs [SURF], grazing intensity indicated by total livestock dung under shrubs [GRAZ] and niche dissimilarity between shrubs and grasses [DISSI]) and spatial distribution pattern of patches (large patch index and landscape division index). The detailed a priori model structure is shown in Supplementary Figure S1. Model fit: χ2 = 2.34, degrees of freedom (df) 10, P = 0.13, R2 = 0.26 (patch dissimilarity), 0.39 (grazing), 0.67 (surface roughness), 0.38 (large patch index) and 0.36 (landscape division index), RMSEA = 0.22, N = 30.

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R0/PR1

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Cambridge Prisms: Drylands

Dear Editor

We would like you to consider the manuscript “Does scale matter: the response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with spatial scale in a semiarid grassland” as a Research paper contribution to Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

Grasslands are a major biome in drylands, supporting forage production and multiple ecosystem functions. However, under global climate change and intensified human activities, expansion in shrubs are encroaching grasslands worldwide. Shrub encroachment can largely alter ecosystem structure from multiple scales such as the structure of plants, communities and landscape patterns, which will change the function and services of grassland. However, the mechanisms by which ecosystem structure responds to shrub encroachment from finer to coarser scales remain poorly understood. Such a knowledge gap makes it more challenging to manage grasslands under different levels of encroachment, particularly during the early stages of encroachment when treatment is more effective.

To solve this issue, we sampled niche conditions beneath individual shrubs (plant scale) and the size distribution of shrubs (community scale) and extracted landscape indices (landscape scale) using drone data along an extensive shrub encroachment gradient in a semiarid grassland in Inner Mongolia, China. Our results show that as shrub encroachment intensifies, the soil surface beneath shrubs supported more litter, was exposed to less grazing, the shrub community became more variable in size, and the landscape comprised larger bare patches. Moreover, landscape pattern was shaped mainly by the magnitude of shrub encroachment (cover, abundance) rather than either community structure or the condition of the soil surface beneath shrubs.

Together, these data provide novel evidence that the response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment depends on the spatial scale under consideration, indicating that shrub management need to be cognizant of the scale at which encroachment is operating. This makes our work highly appealing to ecologists, land managers and policy makers involved in the management of shrub encroachment and restoration of drylands, and therefore readers of Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

All authors have read and agree with the contents of the manuscript, and there are no any actual or potential conflict of interest among all authors. We certify that this submission is an original work, and it is not under review at any other publication.

Yours sincerely

Jingyi Ding

August, 31th 2024

Review: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

This is an interesting and potentially useful paper. It is clear that the data were carefully collected and that the results were chosen with care and are ecologically and logically relevant. However, there are important problems which render the results and conclusions difficult to accept and which I list below:

The authors state (from title and results to discussion) that the response of ecosystem structure to encroachment varies with spatial scale. Therefore, scale matters. There is some confusion with what they exactly mean with “spatial scale”: hierarchical levels of organization (individuals, population, community, ecosystem levels) or spatial extent (local or landscape levels)?. To understand changes in ecological processes related with spatial scale, there is a need to evaluate key components of scale, i.e. grain and extend, and how they can create context dependent results. And sometimes measuring the same variables at different scales. However, I do not see that this is the case in this manuscript because all the data collection and analysis are framed in a very similar level of grain and extent.

I suggest they can better define what spatial scale means in the context of the manuscript and what are the potential caveats of their framework. For example, they state: “Our study highlights the idiosyncratic response of plant-, community-, and landscape-scale structure to intensifying shrub encroachment, reinforcing the importance of considering scale effects …” (lines 21-24). However, the variables used to evaluate each of these scale (?) levels are completely different and therefore explain different ecological processes.

The authors claim they evaluate the structural responses of drylands from finer to coarser scales (from a point level to landscape level). However, the variables obtained from the landscape level is restricted to data from 30 areas of 100*100 m. All the landscape metrics are calculated within this very small extent and this does not seems a significant change from the plots of 30*30 m. Perhaps this spatial extent seems too restrict and it does not shed light on how encroachment drives structural responses at “coarser” scales. Is 100*100 m really coarse? Do the authors expect changes on the relative importance of landscape metrics when changing from 100*100 m to landscapes with 1,000*1,000 m? Would the effects of encroachment on vegetation structure change by increasing spatial extent? To address these caveats, the authors could include some additional analysis on larger spatial extents or deeply discuss its implications.

Other comments:

Line 165: Shrub cover at the 30 study sites ranged from 0.5% (grassland) to 37% (high encroachment). 37% of shrub cover is more likely to be an intermediate level of encroachment instead of a high level of encroachment. The authors should discuss the representativeness of this cover range for the study system and for other regions in the globe.

Lines 52-55: double check the message of this phrase because it is not always the case that drier climates and more intensive livestock grazing lead to encroachment.

Review: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Ding et al. analyzed the variation in ecosystem structure of Inner Mongolia grassland at three spatial scales: 1) plant (individual shrubs), 2) community (aggregations of shrubs), and 3) landscape (10,000 m2 site) along an extensive shrub encroachment gradient representing low, medium and high encroachment across different steppe types (temperate, meadow, desert).

To me that is a tough job. They revealed that response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment depends on the spatial scale. At finer scales, the soil surface beneath shrubs is rougher, has more litter, and the shrubs are typically larger as encroachment expands. Conversely, aggregations of shrubs patches break down the connectivity among vegetation, leading to a more broken landscape at larger scale. Overall, this manuscript is well written, careful tight, and strict in logic, which is interesting and give us lots of information about how shrubs encroachment changes the structure of grassland ecosystems and thus has potential effects on ecosystem functions and services.

I don’t have any major revision suggestions. However, other small suggestions are as follows:

Line 11 I think niche conditions are not appropriate,please correct it as abiotic and biotic conditions.

Line 22 reinforcing the importance of considering scale effects when evaluating the role of encroachment as encroachment increases---->reinforcing the importance of scale effects of encroachment processes.

Line 63 relative ecosystem benefits or disbenefits of shrublands ---->relative benefits or disbenefits of shrublands for ecosystems.

Line 65 soil and environmental conditions for plants.

Line 76 the formation of fertile islands and biogeochemical hotspots

Line 86 coarser ---->larger

Line 89 when treatment is more effective---->What are the treatments? Please make it as clear as possible.

Line 97 a larger canopy cover and deeper root system of shrubs

Line 118 We used landscape indices, shrub size distribution, and the condition of the soil surface

Line 357 Grazing could be the driver of shrub encroachment.

Line 360 community structure ---->structure of shrub communities

Line 372 dominance of a less stable soil crust as shrubs encroachment intensifies

Line 390 vector ---->driver

Line 391 giving ---->benefitting

Line 397 for seedlings survival

Line 408-Line 420 What is the self-sustaining cycling ? Please give more information about how shrub encroachment reduce landscape

connectivity at larger scale.

Line 437 increased---->changed

Line 441 operate---->move and feed

Line 447 Plant communities with diverse structures

Line 450 wider species pool of spiders

Line 468 Please remove “under consideration”.

Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R0/PR4

Comments

I have now received two reviews of the ms DRY-2024-0021. Whereas one is fairly positive, other reviewer raises critical concerns that I agree with.

The authors have overall collected a relevant dataset on encroachment attributes based on field work, and covering a climatic and encroachment (shrub cover) gradient. With that data the authors claim to address the scale-dependency of vegetation structure patterns in encroachment. However the analyses hardly do that. I see two major issues.

First, as the reviewer 1 points out, the authors do not show how a number of patterns varies with scale, but they select different patterns at different scales. That study design makes very difficult to address scale-dependency. If the authors want to study scale-dependency they could for example analyse how patterns at the smallest scale (i.e. soil properties) change when observed at the three scales considered in this work.

Second, even if the authors aim to explore and relate different patterns observed at different scales, the patterns selected at each scale do not follow a clear rationale and give the impression to be arbitrarily selected, without much relationship among them. Why were soil properties selected at the shrub scale, but shrub size distribution at the “community scale”? Similarly, the landscape metrics selected at the landscape scale suffer from the same problem (which is very common when using landscape metrics): why were these nine metrics chosen, and what is the ecological meaning or the hypotheses behind them? The lack of a clear rationale behind the selected patterns is also reflected in the SEMs, which lack a proper overarching hypothesis, and are the result of simply juxtaposing variables and relationships. To address this overall weakness of the design, the authors should find clear links among patterns occurring at the three different scales (likely ecological processes) and, if necessary, redefine some of the patterns examined (e.g. those at the landscape scale), so that the study tells a more cohesive story.

Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R0/PR5

Comments

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R1/PR6

Comments

Cambridge Prisms: Drylands

Dear Editor

We would like you to consider the manuscript “Does scale matter: the response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with spatial scale in a semiarid grassland” as a Research paper contribution to Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

Grasslands are a major biome in drylands, supporting forage production and multiple ecosystem functions. However, under global climate change and intensified human activities, expansion in shrubs are encroaching grasslands worldwide. Shrub encroachment can largely alter ecosystem structure from multiple scales such as the structure of plants, communities and landscape patterns, which will change the function and services of grassland. However, the mechanisms by which ecosystem structure responds to shrub encroachment from finer to coarser scales remain poorly understood. Such a knowledge gap makes it more challenging to manage grasslands under different levels of encroachment, particularly during the early stages of encroachment when treatment is more effective.

To solve this issue, we sampled niche conditions beneath individual shrubs (plant scale) and the size distribution of shrubs (community scale) and extracted landscape indices (landscape scale) using drone data along an extensive shrub encroachment gradient in a semiarid grassland in Inner Mongolia, China. Our results show that as shrub encroachment intensifies, the soil surface beneath shrubs supported more litter, was exposed to less grazing, the shrub community became more variable in size, and the landscape comprised larger bare patches. Moreover, landscape pattern was shaped mainly by the magnitude of shrub encroachment (cover, abundance) rather than either community structure or the condition of the soil surface beneath shrubs.

Together, these data provide novel evidence that the response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment depends on the spatial scale under consideration, indicating that shrub management need to be cognizant of the scale at which encroachment is operating. This makes our work highly appealing to ecologists, land managers and policy makers involved in the management of shrub encroachment and restoration of drylands, and therefore readers of Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

All authors have read and agree with the contents of the manuscript, and there are no any actual or potential conflict of interest among all authors. We certify that this submission is an original work, and it is not under review at any other publication.

Yours sincerely

Jingyi Ding

August, 31th 2024

Review: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R1/PR7

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors made a great effort to redefine the main concepts used in the manuscript, making a more cohesive story. In addition, they reanalyzed part of the data. This new version of the manuscript seems to have a more straightforward message.

A few minor comments:

Lines 10-11: However, we have a limited understanding of how ecosystem structure respond to the degree of shrub encroachment.

Lines 304-311: In these lines, the text refers to Figure 3. However, the correct figures are Figure 4a and 4b.

Line 361: missing parenthesis

Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R1/PR8

Comments

Dear Jingyi Ding,

I have received the review of one of the former reviewers and I have also reviewed the revised manuscript myself. While the reviewer acknowledges the improvement of the work, I have identified some aspects that needs to be improved.

Overall, the authors have made a commendable effort to revise the manuscript and address the key comments raised by the reviewers. In my view, their approach—shifting the focus of the study from how properties change with scale to how they vary along the encroachment gradient—is appropriate. This change has resulted in a much more solid and coherent manuscript.

This revision represents a major overhaul, but there are still aspects that require further refinement. In particular, the authors should improve the alignment between the objectives and hypotheses stated in the Introduction and the analyses conducted, as well as the content of the Discussion. At present, the objectives—and especially the hypotheses—only partially encompass the results presented. Notably, the structural equation modelling (SEM) includes variables such as “climate” and “community characteristics,” which are not explicitly mentioned in the stated objectives or hypotheses. Similarly, the current formulation of the objectives and hypotheses does not adequately address the direct and indirect effects among the various factors considered, which are central to the SEM approach. I therefore encourage the authors to revise the manuscript accordingly, ensuring that the objectives and hypotheses reflect the full scope of the patterns examined in the analyses.

There is a second reflection on the objectives and hypothesis of the work. Increasing Increasing shrub encroachment will, by definition, alter patch size and spatial distribution. Therefore, the second and third hypotheses may be somewhat trivial. The relevant question is not whether these patterns change, but how they change. One could, for instance, construct a null model simulating increased encroachment through random assignment of new shrub locations, or another model where cover increases concentrically from existing shrubs, and then assess whether the observed patterns align with, or deviate from, these expectations. While I understand that the authors do not intend to explore this direction, this reflection might help them interpret and discuss their results more critically, and possibly adopt a more cautious or nuanced interpretation.

Other comments:

L10. Correct “structural”

L14. “We found that greater encroachment was associated…” It would be good to indicate how the degree of encroachment is measured, because it is not trivial, it can be cover but also biomass, and it can also vary with scale itself. So I would say We found that greater shrub cover at 30x30m ….

L19. This means “more” discontinuous patches

L22: cover is also a characteristic of shrub communities, here one could be more precise and indicate for example composition

L49: “Predicted more varied climates are supposed to….” Please rephrase like “Predicted increases in climate variability are expected to …”

L76-77. “However, current encroachment studies have focused mainly on finer level of responses, such as changes beneath patches.” This needs supporting references.

L97-102. “However, as most studies to date have tended to focus on a particular degree of encroachment (e.g., low, medium, or heavy).” This sentence needs supporting references.

L108-111. In this first hypothesis is not clear that you are addressing how ecosystem structure varies along an encroachment gradient. It gives the impression that you are comparing beneath and outside shrubs. (In L218-219 it is clearer but it is buried in the methods)

L113-114 The second hypothesis is very clearly worded regarding testing along an encroachment gradient. However, the explanation after L115-117 is difficult to understand.

L117. Add “level” or any indication of encroachment gradient. “We expect that the level of shrub encroachment would…”. Break the sentence in two, one for the expectation, and another for the underlying process. The expectation is also not clearly articulated, as spatial distribution of patches is very vague. You should be some more precise with what pattern you expect to change.

L294-300. Is the variation of the community characteristics part of any hypothesis or objective? It looks like it comes out of the blue. It might be informative but it should be better integrated in the rationale of the work.

L313-321. Present the results according to your three hypotheses (or another set of hypotheses if you change them). In this paragraph you present the results for Hypothesis 2 and 3 , but it is not stated as such, which makes it confusing.

L393-395. As this result is presented, there is no mention to the encroachment gradient, but on the effect of patch condition on the spatial distribution of patches.

Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R1/PR9

Comments

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R2/PR10

Comments

Cambridge Prisms: Drylands

Dear Editor

We would like you to consider the manuscript “Does scale matter: the response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with spatial scale in a semiarid grassland” as a Research paper contribution to Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

Grasslands are a major biome in drylands, supporting forage production and multiple ecosystem functions. However, under global climate change and intensified human activities, expansion in shrubs are encroaching grasslands worldwide. Shrub encroachment can largely alter ecosystem structure from multiple scales such as the structure of plants, communities and landscape patterns, which will change the function and services of grassland. However, the mechanisms by which ecosystem structure responds to shrub encroachment from finer to coarser scales remain poorly understood. Such a knowledge gap makes it more challenging to manage grasslands under different levels of encroachment, particularly during the early stages of encroachment when treatment is more effective.

To solve this issue, we sampled niche conditions beneath individual shrubs (plant scale) and the size distribution of shrubs (community scale) and extracted landscape indices (landscape scale) using drone data along an extensive shrub encroachment gradient in a semiarid grassland in Inner Mongolia, China. Our results show that as shrub encroachment intensifies, the soil surface beneath shrubs supported more litter, was exposed to less grazing, the shrub community became more variable in size, and the landscape comprised larger bare patches. Moreover, landscape pattern was shaped mainly by the magnitude of shrub encroachment (cover, abundance) rather than either community structure or the condition of the soil surface beneath shrubs.

Together, these data provide novel evidence that the response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment depends on the spatial scale under consideration, indicating that shrub management need to be cognizant of the scale at which encroachment is operating. This makes our work highly appealing to ecologists, land managers and policy makers involved in the management of shrub encroachment and restoration of drylands, and therefore readers of Cambridge Prisms: Drylands.

All authors have read and agree with the contents of the manuscript, and there are no any actual or potential conflict of interest among all authors. We certify that this submission is an original work, and it is not under review at any other publication.

Yours sincerely

Jingyi Ding

August, 31th 2024

Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R2/PR11

Comments

After a major and very well-executed revision of the manuscript in the first round of review, which completely changed the direction of the work, in the second round the authors were asked to ensure proper alignment between objectives/hypotheses, methods, and results. In the submitted version, the authors have implemented some of the requested adjustments, but there remain substantial issues that require attention. For instance, soil properties are not mentioned in Hypothesis 1, yet they play a highly relevant role in the methods, results, and discussion. Conversely, climate is central to Hypothesis 3 (and its associated SEM), but it is not discussed in the results or discussion sections. I therefore ask the authors to revise the manuscript again, with the main specific aim of achieving consistency between the questions formulated and the answers provided. Every question raised must be addressed, and every answer reported must correspond to a previously stated question. On a positive note, all necessary elements are already present in the manuscript, but adjustments are required to ensure coherence throughout the text.

A more detailed list of comments and suggestions is provided below.

Abstract

Check english language, eg. L 17:” The degree of shrub encroachment had contrast effect on ecosystem structure.” This is worded wrong.

L15-17, “found that ….” This results refers to patch condition or spatial distribution pattern of patches? After this sentence you address both, so this previous result is not clear where its fits within the objectives described previously.

L19, “The spatial distribution of patches …” It is not clear along what gradient you are referring.

L23 ”structure of individual shrub(s)” I guess it needs an “s”.

Introduction

L69-70 Drivers of encroachment are highly debated and complex. Instead of indicating just two, I would rather say that is due multiple interacting drivers including ….. and include two or three references.

L136-159. The authors have make a great effort in identifying hypotheses or expected patterns, but there are misalignments with the abstract.

For example in the abstract it says “As shrub encroachment intensified, conditions beneath shrubs were characterized by more litter and lower exposure to grazing” however in L141 142 only height and canopy are indicated, and nothing is said on litter or exposure to grazing. The factors addressed on each Hypothesis should be more explicitly described, particularly if they yield relevant results (that are indicated in the Abstract).

So, the patch condition is addressed by means of one hypothesis and spatial distribution by means of two hypotheses (2 and 3). This is a little confusing and could be described more clearly.

L155. It would be good to have an expectation on the climate modulation regarding the climatic factor (i.e. is it temperature or precipitation) and the direction of the effect. Do you expect more or less change in height or canopy along the considered climatic gradient?

L154. In H3, it is confusing that you use height an canopy as variables to address changes in spatial distribution of patches (L153-154) because these variables has been used to describe ecosystem structure beneath patches on H1.

Methods

L202. You devote a section to soil characterization but “soil” does not appear on the Objectives. This has to be fixed and include it in the Objectives accordingly.

L239. In the Statistical Analysis section, it woudlbe good if you link the different analyses to the Hypotheses. (In order to test our fist hypothesis …). Or for example in L278: To assess the spatial distribution pattern of patches (Hypothesis 2)…

Results

Merge sections 3.1 and 3.2 so that there are as many section as Hypotheses (i.e. 3). Please relate explicitly each one of the results sections to their hypotheses.

Section 3.1. Figure3: * are very difficult to see. Maybe you can use continuous and dashed lines for significant and not significant linear relationships.

L343-345. Is p<0.09 significant (on so many variables)?. Obviously depends on the decision of the researcher, but needs a little explanation. The same for L355-360 where all responses are above 0.05

L365-374 This objective or hypothesis is suppose to explore how responses in patch distribution is modulated by climate, but climate does not appear son the test. Please be sure that in the manuscript, Hypotheses, Methods and Results are completely aligned.

Discusion

L412-415. To what extent does a greater number of smaller, fragmented and widely-spaced vegetation patches lead to reduced landscape connectivity. Bare/grass patches will be more connected. I would clarify that landscape connectivity refers to connectivity of the shrub cover at the landscape scale.

L421-422. The dominance and coalescence of fertile islands is opposite to “smaller, fragmented and widely-spaced vegetation patches”, that is what you are trying to discuss. If I understood it right. Needs clarification.

L432-444. Again, there is no reference here to climate, that was of the third question or hypothesis.

Fig. 1. This figure is probably necessary but needs some more information. Fo example, it is not known what means patch condition, or that connectivity refers to shrubs.

Plots in Figs 3 and 4 are very small and difficult to see. The plots could be arranged in a different form. For example, in Fig 3 plots could be arranged 2x3 instead of 5x1 (single row) or alternatively only show the three plots where there are significant differences (mean, median and variance). Or I would suggest to show just two, mean and variance since mean and median are very similar. Same for Figure 4. You can show only where there are significant differences.

Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R2/PR12

Comments

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R3/PR13

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Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R3/PR14

Comments

The authors have made a great effort in addressing the comments made in the previous round. They were mostly related to make the manuscript coherent between Introduction, Objetives, Methods and Results. In this last version there are only a few issues that remain to be solved in this regard.

L121. Hypothesis 1 now includes soil surface condition, but it actually means the 13 variables described in Section 2.2.2. This is not soil surface condition, but rather something much more broad, that includes, soil, crust and vegetation. The authors should look for a name describing this. Maybe Soil-Vegetation condition.

L126. Structure of what? species composition, size, etc

L127. The reference to Island Biogeography is unexpected and obscure. It is not clear what points out, since the argument is not developed. I would suggest expanding or, better, removing it.

L186. This is the first time you name productivity as part of the work, but I t is not clear what you measure it for, since it was not included as a target process in the objectives or introduction. I see it used for the landscape scale, but it is not described in section 2.3.3. In the Methods it is meant that response variables for this scale are those resulting from landscape metrics.

L289. What is “plant niche condition”? It needs an explanation, particularly if it is related to measures made for Objetive 1.

L289. Because in the objective the only driver addressed is encroachment level, in the text I would frame or introduce the other factors (climate, etc.) in the SEM as covariates included in the SEM to take into account other confounding factors.

L326. Productivity is unexpected here as a response variable. See also comment for L186

L335. This section 3.4. is interesting but needs some reframing so it fits with the structure of the work. I would merge it with section 3.3. and name it Landscape scale patterns and processes, or something along these lines. The objectives should also make at least some reference to this analysis (that comes from including in the SEM different explanatory co-variables, not only encroachment).

L354. The authors start their Discussion with the old idea of the first version of the manuscript: how responses change with scale. But in the first round of reviews, both reviewers agreed that this could not be the main goal of the manuscript because the work does not study the same pattern across different scales. Rather different patterns on different scales. Please, I would urge the authors to update the Discussion with the results obtained in the present version of the work.

L368-370. How—and where—do the authors compare the responses across different scales to determine which ones are “greater”? Any claim about the magnitude of responses across scales requires a much more nuanced analysis and explicit data support. In contrast, the authors remain on safer ground when discussing patterns within each scale, which is what they have actually done.

L422-424. This objective should be more explicitly described in Objective 3. See also comment for L335.

L435. Implications, with s.

L467. See comment for L354. I would suggest not focusing on the scale dependency. Rather on how at different scales, one can observe different patterns that all vary along encroachment levels

Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R3/PR15

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R4/PR16

Comments

Editor-in-Chief

Prisms: Drylands

Dear Prof. Maestre

Thank you for the opportunity to address the comments of the Editor and we really appreciated the effort of the editor in improving our manuscript.

Below we address each of the comments and indicate in the manuscript where changes have been made. We have also re-done the figures to make it clearer. Some of the comment were not exist for our last version (R3) and we think the Editor might refer to an old version. However, we are more than happy to further change if the Editor have more nuanced comments on our latest version.

To make it easier for you to see where we have made changes in the manuscript, we have used red text to show where major changes have been made.

Yours sincerely

Jingyi Ding

for the authors

October 02, 2025

Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R4/PR17

Comments

The authors have addressed most of the comments raised in previous review rounds, and the manuscript presents a more coherent narrative. Only a few minor comments, mostly related to language, have been added. The authors are advised to carefully proofread the text, review the overall English flow, and use the Word language tool (spelling and grammar check) to correct minor errors throughout the manuscript.

L6. Check English in: Grassland is the major ecosystem that supports multiple ecosystem functions and human livelihood in drylands. I would suggest “Grassland supports multiple ....”

L34. The first sentence of the Plain Summary sounds circular. I would suggest changing it for something like: Our study shows how ecosystem properties change along the encroachment gradient.

L41-47. If animals have not been studied in the work, it is misleading to include them here.

L62. Is “grazing livestock” better than “pastoral industry”? Industry does not correctly describe most of livestock production globally.

L144. “Accumulation of resources” instead of “the resource accumulation”?

L150-160. This third objective can be explained in a less convoluted way. Something like: Third, we aimed to assess whether increasing shrub encroachment modifies the spatial organization of vegetation patches, either directly or through changes in patch-level structure (e.g., shrub height, canopy width, or patch condition), and whether these effects intensify under drier and warmer climatic conditions. Just a check anyway if some points are missing, and complete it if needed.

L709. Figure 1. There is something missing in the first two lines around the (a). Is a colon “:” missing before “(a)”? Check, please.

Figure 4. Legend. L732. Should be between shrub patches, in plural. L736. Results “are” shown, plural.

Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R4/PR18

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R5/PR19

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Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R5/PR20

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Please label the Plain Summary as the Impact Statement section, as requested by the journal. The first sentence of the Impact Statement remains somewhat circular and should be refined for clarity. I refer the authors to my previous comments, where I suggested an alternative phrasing that they may use if they find it helpful. In addition, as requested in the previous comment, references to animals should be minimized, as they now occupy a substantial part of the Plain Summary-Impact Statement despite not being included in the study, which could be misleading.

Once this revision has been addressed, I would be pleased to recommend the manuscript for acceptance.

Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R5/PR21

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Author comment: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R6/PR22

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Recommendation: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R6/PR23

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Decision: Response of ecosystem structure to shrub encroachment varies with the degree of encroachment — R6/PR24

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