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Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  23 February 2023

Minhan Dai*
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China Fujian Institute for Sustainable Oceans, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yangyang Zhao*
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Fei Chai
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Mingru Chen
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China China-ASEAN College of Marine Sciences, Xiamen University Malaysia, Sepang, Malaysia
Nengwang Chen
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of The Environment and Ecology, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China Fujian Provincial Key Laboratory for Coastal Ecology and Environmental Studies, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yimin Chen
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Danyang Cheng
Affiliation:
Department of Earth System Science, Ministry of Education Key Laboratory for Earth System Modeling, Institute for Global Change Studies, Tsinghua University, Beijing, China
Jianping Gan
Affiliation:
Thrust of Earth, Ocean and Atmospheric Sciences, Department of Ocean Science, and Department of Mathematics, The Hong Kong University of Science and Technology, Kowloon, Hong Kong SAR, China Southern Marine Science and Engineering Guangdong Laboratory (Zhuhai), Zhuhai, China
Dabo Guan
Affiliation:
Department of Earth System Science, Ministry of Education Key Laboratory for Earth System Modeling, Institute for Global Change Studies, Tsinghua University, Beijing, China
Yuanyuan Hong
Affiliation:
School of Biological Sciences, Area of Ecology and Biodiversity, Swire Institute of Marine Science, Institute for Climate and Carbon Neutrality, Musketeers Foundation Institute of Data Science, and State Key Laboratory of Marine Pollution, The University of Hong Kong, Hong Kong SAR, China
Jialu Huang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yanting Lee
Affiliation:
Fujian Institute for Sustainable Oceans, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Kenneth Mei Yee Leung
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Pollution and Department of Chemistry, City University of Hong Kong, Hong Kong SAR, China
Phaik Eem Lim
Affiliation:
Institute of Ocean and Earth Sciences, University of Malaya, Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
Senjie Lin
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China Department of Marine Sciences, University of Connecticut, Groton, CT, USA
Xin Lin
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Xin Liu
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of The Environment and Ecology, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Zhiqiang Liu
Affiliation:
Department of Ocean Science and Engineering, Southern University of Science and Technology, Shenzhen, China
Ya-Wei Luo
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Feifei Meng
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Chalermrat Sangmanee
Affiliation:
Marine and Coastal Resources Research and Development Institute, Department of Marine and Coastal Resources, Bangkok, Thailand
Yuan Shen
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Khanittha Uthaipan
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Wan Izatul Asma Wan Talaat
Affiliation:
Institute of Oceanography and Environment, Universiti Malaysia Terengganu, Kuala Terengganu, Malaysia
Xianhui Sean Wan
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China Department of Geosciences, Princeton University, Princeton, NJ, USA
Cong Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Dazhi Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of The Environment and Ecology, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Guizhi Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Shanlin Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yanmin Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yuntao Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Satellite Ocean Environment Dynamics, Second Institute of Oceanography, Ministry of Natural Resources, Hangzhou, China
Zhe Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Zhixuan Wang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yanping Xu
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Jin-Yu Terence Yang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Yan Yang
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China College of Ocean and Earth Sciences, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Moriaki Yasuhara
Affiliation:
School of Biological Sciences, Area of Ecology and Biodiversity, Swire Institute of Marine Science, Institute for Climate and Carbon Neutrality, Musketeers Foundation Institute of Data Science, and State Key Laboratory of Marine Pollution, The University of Hong Kong, Hong Kong SAR, China
Dan Yu
Affiliation:
College of The Environment and Ecology, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China Fujian Provincial Key Laboratory for Coastal Ecology and Environmental Studies, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Jianmin Yu
Affiliation:
State Key Laboratory of Satellite Ocean Environment Dynamics, Second Institute of Oceanography, Ministry of Natural Resources, Hangzhou, China
Liuqian Yu
Affiliation:
Thrust of Earth, Ocean and Atmospheric Sciences, Department of Ocean Science, and Department of Mathematics, The Hong Kong University of Science and Technology, Kowloon, Hong Kong SAR, China Southern Marine Science and Engineering Guangdong Laboratory (Zhuhai), Zhuhai, China
Zengkai Zhang
Affiliation:
College of The Environment and Ecology, Xiamen University, Xiamen, China
Zhouling Zhang
Affiliation:
GEOMAR Helmholtz Center for Ocean Research Kiel, Kiel, Germany
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Authors for correspondence: Minhan Dai, Email: mdai@xmu.edu.cn and Yangyang Zhao, Email: yyzhao@xmu.edu.cn
Authors for correspondence: Minhan Dai, Email: mdai@xmu.edu.cn and Yangyang Zhao, Email: yyzhao@xmu.edu.cn
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Abstract

Coastal eutrophication and hypoxia remain a persistent environmental crisis despite the great efforts to reduce nutrient loading and mitigate associated environmental damages. Symptoms of this crisis have appeared to spread rapidly, reaching developing countries in Asia with emergences in Southern America and Africa. The pace of changes and the underlying drivers remain not so clear. To address the gap, we review the up-to-date status and mechanisms of eutrophication and hypoxia in global coastal oceans, upon which we examine the trajectories of changes over the 40 years or longer in six model coastal systems with varying socio-economic development statuses and different levels and histories of eutrophication. Although these coastal systems share common features of eutrophication, site-specific characteristics are also substantial, depending on the regional environmental setting and level of social-economic development along with policy implementation and management. Nevertheless, ecosystem recovery generally needs greater reduction in pressures compared to that initiated degradation and becomes less feasible to achieve past norms with a longer time anthropogenic pressures on the ecosystems. While the qualitative causality between drivers and consequences is well established, quantitative attribution of these drivers to eutrophication and hypoxia remains difficult especially when we consider the social economic drivers because the changes in coastal ecosystems are subject to multiple influences and the cause–effect relationship is often non-linear. Such relationships are further complicated by climate changes that have been accelerating over the past few decades. The knowledge gaps that limit our quantitative and mechanistic understanding of the human-coastal ocean nexus are identified, which is essential for science-based policy making. Recognizing lessons from past management practices, we advocate for a better, more efficient indexing system of coastal eutrophication and an advanced regional earth system modeling framework with optimal modules of human dimensions to facilitate the development and evaluation of effective policy and restoration actions.

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Figure 1. Global distributions of (a) the human footprint index in 2018, (b) N loads in 2020 (kg N yr−1), (c) log(Chl-a) concentration (μg L−1), and (d) hypoxic sites. Data on the human footprint are from Mu et al. (2022); data on N loads are from Beusen et al. (2022); data on Chl-a concentrations are derived from the remote sensing satellite images from the Climate Change Initiative-European Space Agency project (http://www.esa-oceancolour-cci.org/); Data of hypoxic sites (where the dissolved oxygen (DO) concentration is less than 2 mg L−1) were downloaded from World Resources Institute (https://www.wri.org/data/eutrophication-hypoxia-map-data-set) (Diaz et al., 2011).

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Table 1. Global sources of anthropogenic nitrogen and phosphorus

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Figure 2. Conceptual diagram of the drivers of and interactions between eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean. Increasing amounts of anthropogenic nutrients sourced from agricultural and aquacultural runoffs, and domestic and industrial waste discharge are exported into the coastal ecosystems. The terrestrial organic matter (Terr-OM) and inorganic nutrients directly stimulate microbial respiration (Terr-OM remin) and nitrification, leading to oxygen depletion in the tidal rivers and upper estuary. Excess riverine nutrients with nitrogen to phosphorus (N:P) molar ratios above the Redfield ratio of 16 are further transported to the lower estuary and inner shelf regions, causing eutrophication and outbreaks of harmful algal blooms (HABs). The abundant autochthonous OM induced by eutrophication eventually sinks to the bottom and is remineralized, contributing to bottom hypoxia in most coastal regions. In addition, allochthonous OM from land and marine-sourced OM induced by wind-driven upwelling can, to some extent, enhance the formation of hypoxia. With the various sources of OM and complicated physical and topographical features in coastal regions, spatiotemporal heterogeneity between surface eutrophication and bottom hypoxia is often observed (see text). Coupled nitrification–denitrification and anammox in hypoxic waters and sediments remove bioavailable nitrogen from the system. On the other hand, the hypoxic/anoxic environment facilitates the desorption of phosphorus (P) and the dissolution of P–Fe complexes in sediments. Release of bioavailable phosphate (PO4) into the overlying waters and subsequent mixing into the euphotic layer further stimulates primary production.

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Figure 3. Bathymetry of selected coastal systems: Baltic Sea, Chesapeake Bay, Changjiang Estuary, Pearl River Estuary, Upper Gulf of Thailand, and Xiamen Bay. The color shows depth (m).

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Figure 4. The heat map of relationships between eutrophication/hypoxia and their socioeconomic drivers. (a) Changjiang Estuary, (b) Pearl River Estuary, (c) Baltic Sea, (d) Upper Gulf of Thailand, (e) Chesapeake Bay and (f) Xiamen Bay. The numbers in each cell indicate the coefficient of correlation (R). The subscripts denote the results of significance test, i.e., * denotes p < 0.05, ** denotes p < 0.01, and *** denotes p < 0.001. Only the observed data of Chl-a concentration (not included the extremely high values in 2003) are used for CJE. Abbreviation: Popul., total population; GDP, gross domestic product; Fuse, total fertilizer use; NFuse, N fertilizer use; PFuse, P fertilizer use; Urate, urbanization rate; TNwaste, total N loads in wastewater discharge; TPwaste, total P loads in wastewater discharge; Wwaste, wastewater discharge; DINconc, concentration of dissolved inorganic nitrogen (DIN); DIPconc, concentration of dissolved inorganic phosphorus (DIP); DINload, DIN loads; DIPload, DiP loads; TNload, total N loads; TPload, total P loads; TNrload, riverine total N loads; TPrload, riverine total P loads; DINpool, DIN pool; DIPpool, DIP pool; Harea, hypoxic area; Hvol, hypoxic volume; DOmin, minimum DO concentration; Chl-a, chlorophyll-a concentration.

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Table 2. Characteristics of the six selected coastal systems (Baltic Sea, Chesapeake Bay, Changjiang Estuary, Pearl River Estuary, Upper Gulf of Thailand, and Xiamen Bay) in terms of GDP, total fertilizer use, N load, regional characteristics, water residence time, annual average surface DIN concentration, summer surface Chl-a concentration, seasons of hypoxia occurrences, maximum hypoxic area/volume from the historical records and average frequency of HABs in the past 5 years

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Figure 5. Schematic of socioeconomic forcing and ecological response in coastal ecosystems. (a) Driven by the population aggregation in coastal areas, the development of agricultural modernization, industrialization and urbanization brings about plenty of goods and services as well as environmental forces, such as excessive fertilizer, sewage and manure, river discharges and land use change. These socioeconomic forces stress the health of the ecological system (b), causing enrichment of nitrogen (N) and phosphorus (P) and changes in N:P ratios in coastal waters, which subsequently enhances eutrophication and subsequent harmful algal blooms and hypoxia. The degradation and disruption of the coastal ecosystem also restrict the economic outputs of the socioeconomic system. (c) Through the development of agriculture, industrialization and urbanization with intensifying socioeconomic forces, ecosystem disruption occurs after passing a tipping point unless great efforts are taken and control management strategies are applied for oligotrophication.

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Figure 6. Schematic view of a regional earth system-human activity modeling platform for diagnosing and prognosing eutrophication and hypoxia.

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Figure 7. Schematic of the economic-human dimension modeling system for coastal zones. Human demands and activities for food, energy, construction, and transportation have increased nutrient loads to the coastal ocean, causing eutrophication and associated environmental damage. To disentangle the complex links between socioeconomic system and ecosystem, the multi-disciplinary model integrating nutrient inventory method and marine input–output model can accurately quantify the direct and indirect nutrient discharge by sectors and sources, and identify the priority control areas for efficient decisions on eutrophication and hypoxia management. A comprehensive assessment framework based on Inclusive Wealth Index can also make trade-offs between resource use and economic prosperity and support the realization of conserving and sustainably using the oceans, seas, and marine resources for sustainable development. The photos in the right column under "Coastal Ocean" were from image courtesy of NOAA and websites (https://serc.carleton.edu/microbelife/topics/redtide/general.html; http://61.178.55.253/kpbl/stbh/swbh/content_118700), respectively.

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Comments to Author: This manuscript reviews the up-to-date status and mechanisms of eutrophication and hypoxia in the global coastal ocean, and examines the trajectories of long term changes in six model coastal systems with varying socio-economic development statuses and different levels of eutrophication. This review also examines lessons from past eutrophication management practices, and advocates for a better, more efficient indexing system of coastal eutrophication and an advanced regional earth system modeling framework to facilitate the development and evaluation of effective policy and restoration actions. In general, the review of coastal eutrophication and hypoxia in the manuscript is comprehensive and appropriate, of certain novelty and a board international interest. Therefore, I recommend this manuscript to be accepted for publication after minor revision.

Specific comments:

1. Despite that fertilizer application is the main source of global anthropogenic nitrogen, sources of nitrogen may vary considerably from one coastal area to another depending on human activity patterns. It would be better to understand the socioeconomic-ecological drivers if the authors could state explicitly the main sources of nitrogen and phosphorus for each of the six model coastal ecosystems. Please note that you could not identify the main source of nutrients based on the results of correlation analysis in Figure 4.

2. The authors divided the evolution of coastal eutrophication and hypoxia into three stages based on the development of socioeconomics and the duration of human forces on the system. This classification, however, did not reflect the nature of the evolution of coastal eutrophication. A highly developed social economy and long duration of human forces do not necessarily lead to a high level of coastal eutrophication, and vice versa. Similarly, a long duration of coastal eutrophication does not mean a highly coastal eutrophication. Therefore, the evolution of coastal eutrophication may not be a progressive process as shown in Figure 5. Comparisons among different coastal systems should be carried out in terms of specific pressures (e.g. nutrient loads), symptoms-based evaluation of state, etc.

3. The supplement materials (e.g., Figure S1 to Figure S6) are not available, these materials are important for this manuscript and should be provided.

4. The authors state that the phytoplankton communities off the Changjiang Estuary has shifted from diatom-dominated to dinoflagellate-dominated since the 2000s. This is not in line with the general understanding and should be carefully verified.

Review: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R0/PR3

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Comments to Author: The manuscript provides a comprehensive review regarding coastal eutrophication and the complex interactions responsible for the development of hypoxia. The authors' are commended on a well-written and compiled article that addresses a highly topical subject that will be of interest to a wide readership.

Kindly see below for some detailed comments on the manuscript (*page/line numbers according to PDF version):

- Page 3, Line 76-77: These issues are already commonplace in these regions; however, their extent may be underrepresented in databases/literature.

- Page 4, Line 90-96: The last sentence of the abstract is too verbose. Consider rephrasing as separate sentences.

- Page 6, 2nd paragraph: Wastewater inputs from treatment plants and stormwater conduits are also an important contributor to N and P enrichment globally, particularly in developing regions.

- Page 7, 2nd paragraph: The concept of "regime shifts" should be contextualised with "ecosystem resilience", i.e., the ability of ecosystems to absorb disturbances and preside in multiple stable states that maintain critical functionality. The following article provides a viewpoint on these topics: doi:10.1016/j.marpolbul.2007.02.003

- Page 8, Lines 211-215: This may be true of developed regions (e.g., North America, Europe), however, wastewater inputs are an important contributor to eutrophication in many developing regions globally. Additionally, the continued discharge of wastewater into estuarine and coastal waters remains a key driver of eutrophication even in developed regions where wastewater treatment is more advanced and effectively managed (i.e., relative volumes/loads are still high).

- Section 2.1: How were these contributions estimated? I'd imagine the loads from less well-researched and/or developed areas of the globe may be underestimated. I realise this is not an "easy fix", but it would be worth noting such limitations.

- Page 13, Lines 351-357: These in situ observations of DIN may be skewed in regions of coastal upwelling, i.e., not necessarily indicative of anthropogenic enrichment.

- Section 2.2: It may be useful to provide some examples of where extensive HABs are frequently recorded, and the impacts thereof.

- General comment: When referring to a single system name, "estuary" should be capitalised, e.g., Pearl River Estuary. This comment applies throughout the manuscript.

- Page 20, Lines 582-585: This is a good point. In such instances, what mitigation measures would serve as suitable alternatives to prevent/reduce hypoxia?

- Section 3.3: Would the production of ammonium via the anaerobic process of dissimilatory nitrate reduction to ammonium (DNRA) not also be an important contributor of regenerated DIN that supports primary productivity in hypoxic zones?

- Figure 4: The x- and y-axis labels (socioeconomic drivers) are not easy to distinguish and should be enlarged.

- Section 4.2: What trend has been observed for Chl-a since the regulation of nutrient inputs? Discuss accordingly.

- Page 28, Lines 776-777: If possible, include the HAB species that have been documented.

- Page 30, Lines 817-818: What mitigation measures were implemented (if any) to achieve this?

- Page 30, Lines 821-824: Have the species responsible for these HAB outbreaks been identified? If so, this may be a useful addition.

- Page 32, Line 894-895: Provide examples of how groundwater discharges can be managed.

- Page 36, Lines 983-987: Sentence is too long. Consider rephrasing.

- Section 4.4: It is important to highlight that recovery typically requires a greater reduction in pressure compared to that which initiated degradation in order to reduce or remove negative feedback loops (e.g., internal nutrient loading, altered food webs). Additionally, complex trajectories of ecosystem recovery often means that achieving past norms may not be possible/feasible. Therefore, policies and mitigation measures should be geared towards achieving the attainable objectives/outcomes.

- General Comment: The authors' should consider including a schematic diagram that summarises the physical, geomorphological, chemical, and biological factors that influence the likelihood of hypoxia formation. This would be useful to highlight the nuances that should be considered when interpreting/utilising dissolved oxygen data.

Recommendation: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R0/PR4

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Comments to Author: From Handling Editor

Thank-you to the authors for a well written article that contains a succinct analysis of historical water quality changes in the case studies presented. Future responses to climate change are discussed and valuable perspectives on eutrophication and management solutions presented.

Please provide some detail in the Introduction on how “coastal ocean” is defined. This is in the title and referred to in the first sentence of the Introduction but thereafter coastal ecosystems are referred to. For example – the coastal ocean was considered as that area of the coast influenced by land-based run-off.

Figure 5 - please change ecosystem abruption to ecosystem disruption

Line 1160 “we need to consider regional ocean-land-atmosphere Earth systems, and human activities as an integrated system” Please check if you can refer to this as a socio-ecological system.

Both reviewers have minor comments to address. In particular the first reviewer asks for detail on the sources of nutrients and the second reviewer on the species causing the HABs.

Decision: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R0/PR5

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Re: “Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean” by Minhan Dai et al.

February 1st, 2023

Dear Editor,

Thank you for your time in handling our paper. Enclosed please find our response to editor and reviewers and revised MS entitled “Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean” by Minhan Dai et al.

During the revisions, we have fully considered the comments and suggestions from the editor and reviewers. Briefly, we explicitly stated the major sources of nutrients for each model system based on previous studies and compiled data. Following the reviewers’ suggestions, we further summarized the lessons by comparing the evolution of the interaction between human socioeconomic activities and environmental degradation/restoration through changes in anthropogenic nutrient loads and mitigation efforts based on symptoms of eutrophication and hypoxia. Additionally, we have improved the quality of the figures for better illustrations. More detailed revisions are explained in the enclosure.

Finally, we would like to take this opportunity to thank the reviewers for their constructive comments and suggestions, which significantly improved the quality of the paper. We sincerely hope that our revision will meet the standards of Coastal Futures.

Sincerely,

Minhan Dai

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State Key Laboratory of Marine Environmental Science

Xiamen University

Xiamen 361005, China

Phone: 86-592-218-2132

Fax: 86-592-218-0655

E-mail: mdai@xmu.edu.cn

Review: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R1/PR7

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Comments to Author: The authors have provided detailed and adequate responses to all the questions, requests and comments from the reviewer. Therefore, the revised manuscript is appropriate for publication in the present form.

Review: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R1/PR8

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Comments to Author: The authors have addressed all comments satisfactorily. I only have one minor correction, as below:

Page 28, Line 755: The incorrect unit has been reported for Chl-a. Please change this from "25 µmol L-1" to "25 µg L-1".

Recommendation: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R1/PR9

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Comments to Author: The reviewer comments have been thoroughly addressed; thank-you authors for the comprehensive responses. The manuscript is acceptable for publication

Decision: Persistent eutrophication and hypoxia in the coastal ocean — R1/PR10

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