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Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  02 March 2026

Sharon Hilarydoss*
Affiliation:
Energy Conversion and Utilization Team (ECU-T), Department of Mechanical Engineering, Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy (IIPE), India
Lakkoju Gowtham
Affiliation:
Energy Conversion and Utilization Team (ECU-T), Department of Mechanical Engineering, Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy (IIPE), India
Mansi Prasad
Affiliation:
Department of Mechanical Engineering, Andhra University College of Engineering, India
*
Corresponding author: Sharon Hilarydoss; Emails: hsharon1987@gmail.com; sharon.mec@iipe.ac.in
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Abstract

Ensuring easy access to clean and safe drinking water using low-cost technology is essential to mitigate the rising water scarcity in emerging economies. Commercial large-scale desalination technologies need significant investment, making them unsuitable for off-grid and small-scale applications. However, this operation can be carried out using a low-cost desalination technology based on renewable energy, known as the solar still. In this research work, a modified basin solar still (basin solar still + internal mirrors + 8 kg gravel + black ink (400 ppm per litre)) was developed and experimentally tested in Visakhapatnam (17.68°N, 83.22°E), India, to determine its appropriateness for sustainable seawater desalination. It produced 14% to 23% more desalinated water than a conventional basin solar still. In addition, its thermal efficiency was between 41% and 42%, which was significantly greater than other basin solar stills reported in literature. In addition, high-quality desalinated water was generated at a cost that was around three times less than the drinking water offered at Indian Railways kiosks. Moreover, the ability to mitigate significant CO2 emissions while also addressing water scarcity demonstrated that the modified basin solar still continues to contribute effectively to the United Nations Sustainable Development Goal 6 (Clean Water and Sanitation).

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Figure 1. Different configurations of solar stills.

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Figure 2. (a) Photograph of the experimental solar desalination setup (b) Photograph indicating components of the reference basin solar still (Case 1) (c) Photograph indicating components of the modified basin solar still (Case 2).

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Table 1. Details of the experimental plan formulated for this research work

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Table 2. List of instruments used along with their accuracy and maximum error percentage

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Table 3. Embodied energy estimation of various cases of solar still configurations (Sharon et al., 2017; WGTN, 2025)

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Figure 3. Variation of solar radiation intensity, desalinated water yield and solar still component temperature on experimental days in Case 1. (Sharon et al., 2025).

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Figure 4. Variation of solar radiation intensity, desalinated water yield and solar still component temperature on experimental days in Case 2.

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Figure 5. Variation of solar radiation intensity, desalinated water yield and solar still component temperature on experimental days in Case 3.

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Table 4. Compilation of solar radiation intensity data, yield, desalination process initiation time and post peak temperature yield percentage

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Table 5. Compilation of solar still component temperature data on experimental days

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Figure 6. Diurnal yield, nocturnal yield and thermal efficiency of the solar still under (a) Case 1, (b) Case 2 and (c) Case 3. (d) Variation of daily desalinated water yield of the solar still with solar radiation energy under various cases.

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Figure 7. Year-round predicted desalinated water production of the investigated solar still cases in Visakhapatnam.

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Figure 8. Characteristic curves of the solar still in Case 1, Case 2 and Case 3 operation scenarios.

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Table 6. Seawater and desalinated water quality analysis results

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Figure 9. Variation of desalinated water production cost per litre and quantity of desalinated water production per USD invested in the investigated solar still cases.

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Figure 10. Variation of finance payback time of the investigated solar still cases with lifetime and selling price of desalinated water (1 USD = 86 INR).

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Figure 11. Impact of (a) maintenance cost, (b) direct cost and (c) indirect cost on cost per litre of desalinated water produced by the synergized basin solar still (Case 3) under varying lifetime.

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Table 7. Performance and economics comparison of various solar stills

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Table 8. Environmental impacts of investigated solar still cases

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Author comment: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R0/PR1

Comments

To

The Editorial Board

Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal

Dear Editorial Board Members,

Please find enclosed the research work titled: “Exploring the Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of Basin Solar Still Desalting Seawater with the Aid of Internal Reflectors, Gravel and Black Ink” to be submitted as an original revised article to your esteemed “Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal” for consideration of publication. The revised research work has been approved by all the authors and has never been published, or under consideration for publication elsewhere. The authors declare that there is no conflict of interest and no ethics have been violated in this work. The authors thank the journal team for inviting us to submit an article.

Sustainable production of potable water is one of the important goals set by the United Nations for 2030 to achieve a sustainable global community. In this work, the techno-enviro-economic aspects of solar still desalination system in three cases have been analyzed and reported in detail. The results of the work seem encouraging and justifies the potential of sustainable solar desalination in addressing water scarcity. Moreover, the work will be useful to researchers, policy makers, renewable energy advocates who are enthusiastic in addressing water scarcity in a sustainable way. The article has been explained in a detailed way.

The corresponding author acknowledges “Start-Up Research Grant” funding from the Science and Engineering Research Board (SERB), Department of Science and Technology (DST), Government of India (Grant No: SRG/2023/000017) and “Institute Research Grant” (Grant No: IIPE/DORD/IRG/027) from the Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy, Visakhapatnam, India.

We hope that the editorial board will agree with the interest of the study. We are looking forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,

H. Sharon

Assistant Professor

Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy Visakhapatnam

Andhra Pradesh, India

Email: sharon.mec@iipe.ac.in; hsharon1987@gmail.com

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The paper tackles an interesting and rather specialised but a worthwhile and relevant topic but suffers from a tendency to focus on specific detail before fully setting the context and explaining the principles involved. It also lacks comparison with other forms of household level water treatment. The text would therefore benefit from some careful restructuring and considerable shortening. Diagrammatic representation of the types of solar still studied should be included The general influence of the prevailing daily and seasonal meteorological conditions at the location where the still was installed and studied is not discussed and the experimental period during which data was collected is limited to late May and early June 2024. Much important information is missing in relation to the number of people that could be served etc.

In its present form the paper is not acceptable and needs major revision addressing these points and the more detailed observations below and providing more background information throughout - as well as the operational context in which the still described would be expected to function (i.e to go beyond a narrow reporting of limited experimental results). Nothing is said on the scalability of the systems studied for practical use and the consequences of the results presented in the context of the operational limitations of these systems.

Long title

The Abstract jumps straight into reporting a summary of results without providing context or purpose of the paper or the methodologies used. It should also address issues raised in the impact statement such as the modifications made to improve production rates and the fundamental problem that is being solved.

Page 5 First para The topic is introduced as relating to the growing need for potable water but ends by introducing the extraction of groundwater for irrigation. This is misleading as the use of solar stills are intended principally for direct water consumption at a household.

Page 6 The towing of icebergs “is also vastly studied” – if so please provide references to the studies and note their conclusions. Is this relevant here?

Page 6 Desalination technologies are briefly listed but more could be said on the extent of their use and adoption ( eg in the Gulf region). These tend to operate at different scale to solar stills and that distinction is not made clear.

Page 6 Listing the configuration of solar stills should be supported by the inclusion of diagrams showing layouts etc.

Page 6-7 This part of the Introduction cites improvement made by various aspects of enhanced design which provides detail better suited to a literature review of current practice (e.g what has worked, what hasn’t, how have these challenges been addressed and what is the extent of improvements made etc). The Introduction should focus on defining the problem the paper is attempting to solve. There is a conflation of information here which is unhelpful. There is a reporting of specific results drawn from the literature with insufficient attention to the principles involved.

Page 7 Experimental System Description – it is unclear what scale the experimental rig was designed for and how much water it was intended to produced ( and the size of population it could serve). Was the experimental rig intended as a model or full scale prototype?

Page 9-10 explain why the specific modifications were made in Case 2 (internal reflectors) and Case 3 ( addition of black ink ) and what specific improvements were sought from these?

Page 8 line 25 _ How efficient would the still perform in other months of the year?

Page 11 Table 1 The period of operation for each configuration seems to be very short (3 days fore each set of results ). Is this sufficient to confidently draw any conclusions? To what extent are the results expected to be influenced by daily variation in meteorologic conditions.

Can the results apply if such variations existed at other times of the year?

Page 12 Table 2 Explain the significance of the instrument accuracy and error ranges presented ( is this necessary to include here)

Pages 12 – 14 Apart from the thermal efficiencies calculated how was the amount of water yielded measured and recorded? How many people could such an installation serve ?

Page 14 Economic Assessment – Again no context is provided such as how the costs involved compare with alternative sources of household water supply for example.

Page 15 Solar Environmental Impact assessment . This section hints at a Life Cycle Analysis approach but it is unclear how the figures have been derived as no calculation are shown (based on the quantities used). The embodied energy of the ink is dismissed based on small volumes but no consideration is given as to what this would represent over an extended period of continuous operation.

Page 27 line 25 To what extent are these yields scalable?

Page 34 Explain why Indian railways are used as the source of purified drinking water throughout; or are they the main water utility provider in this part of India?

Page 37 The Conclusion restates key results and does not make recommendations for further work needed or the suitability for the widespread uptake of this technology and how it could be achieved

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

This paper presents an experimental investigation of a basin-type solar still for seawater desalination under the coastal climate of Visakhapatnam, India. Three configurations were compared: (1) a reference still; (2) a still with internal mirrors and gravel; and (3) a still with mirrors, gravel, and black ink. The authors evaluate thermal performance, water quality, economics, and environmental indicators (embodied energy, CO₂-mitigation potential). Results show modest yield and efficiency improvements (up to ~23 %) and reduced cost per litre relative to a simple still. The study is motivated by the need for low-cost, sustainable desalination technologies in developing regions.

The paper addresses a timely and relevant topic and demonstrates solid experimental quality, aligning well with the journal’s mission to translate research into effective implementation and contribute to global water security. Moreover, it establishes a clear connection to the UN Sustainable Development Goals, particularly SDG 6: Clean Water and Sanitation. However, the manuscript currently falls short of the high-impact standards expected by Cambridge Prisms: Water, primarily due to limited novelty and issues related to experimental design, economic evaluation as well as structure and language quality. In my view, the paper could become suitable for publication only after major revisions, focusing on the following aspects:

• Novelty and Contribution

The individual enhancements (mirrors, gravel, dye) are well known. The paper should make clearer how their combined use yields new scientific insight, not merely additive improvement. Maybe, including a table comparing the present configuration with leading studies (2020–2025) on solar stills.

• Experimental Design and Validation

1) Only nine days of data are reported (3 days per case). Please discuss repeatability, seasonal variability, and uncertainty.

2) Add quantitative error bars for yield and efficiency.

3) Clarify whether experiments for the three cases were performed under comparable irradiance and ambient conditions.

• Environmental Assessment

1) Explain the derivation of CO₂ emission diminution and embodied-energy figures. Reference local grid emission factors and justify lifetime assumptions.

• Economic Evaluation

1) Justify assumptions of 5–25 year lifetime and maintenance percentage.

2) Include a comparison with costs from recent pilot or community-scale solar stills.

• Structure and Language

1) The manuscript (≈ 40 pp.) should be shortened by moving tables and daily data to Supplementary Material.

2) Extensive grammatical and stylistic editing is needed for fluency and clarity.

• Context and Impact

1) Strengthen the discussion on how this small-scale design could be up-scaled or integrated into local water-management systems.

2) Relate findings to UN SDG 6 and climate-resilient water supply strategies.

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R0/PR4

Conflict of interest statement

There is no competing interest.

Comments

Manuscript title: Exploring the Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of Basin Solar Still Desalting Seawater with the Aid of Internal Reflectors, Gravel and Black Ink

The manuscript presents an experimental investigation of three basin-type solar still configurations for seawater desalination under the climatic conditions of Visakhapatnam, India. The study aims to evaluate performance, water quality, and enviro-economic aspects when simple, low-cost design modifications, namely internal reflectors, gravel as sensible heat storage, and black ink as an optical enhance, are incorporated. The topic is highly relevant to decentralized water treatment and sustainable desalination, particularly for developing regions with limited access to high-cost technologies.

The paper’s strengths lie in its practical motivation, comprehensive set of measured variables, and multi-dimensional assessment (technical, economic, environmental). However, the current version requires substantial improvement in structure, analytical rigor, and clarity before it can be considered for publication.

Comments

1. The title is long and somewhat cumbersome. Please revisit and shorten it to make it self-explanatory and intuitively appealing. A concise and informative title will enhance readability and searchability.

2. The abstract presents detailed quantitative findings but lacks background, motivation, and broader implications. It fails to introduce readers to the importance of solar desalination or to highlight the novelty and significance of your specific contribution. Please restructure the abstract following a clearer logic: Motivation → Methods → Main findings → Implications. Avoid overloading it with numerical results; instead, emphasize more on why the study matters and what gap it fills in the literature.

3. The paper omits any discussion of how your proposed system compares to alternative or competing desalination technologies (e.g., reverse osmosis, multi-effect distillation) in terms of performance, cost, and environmental footprint. Please add one or two paragraphs, either in the Introduction or Discussion, positioning your approach relative to these technologies. This will help readers understand the system’s advantages and limitations in a broader context.

4. The manuscript would benefit from explicitly linking the research to UN Sustainable Development Goals, particularly SDG 6 (“Clean Water and Sanitation”). Doing so would strengthen the societal and policy relevance of the study.

5. Most citations are current, but there are instances of outdated sources used to describe present-day conditions. For example: “Groundwater extraction for irrigation has long been a common practice in many areas, but extensive groundwater mining is currently being debated again in light of the absence of proper planning, governance, and legal frameworks (UNWATER, 2006)”. This reference is nearly two decades old to use it as support to your argument that “groundwater mining is currently being debated again”. Please replace it with more recent literature.

6. While the introduction identifies a research gap, the claimed novelty, combining mirrors, gravel, and dye in a single system, is modest and not well justified. The authors should better explain the synergistic reasoning behind this combination (i.e., how each modification interacts thermally or optically) and why such integration adds new scientific value beyond existing studies.

7. Section 2 is excessively descriptive. Many construction details (dimensions, sealing tape, etc.) could be moved to the Supplementary Material.

8. The experiment was conducted for only three days per case, and not simultaneously. Weather conditions were not identical. This raises concerns about comparability among cases, as weather variability, even within short time spans, can bias yield and efficiency results. The authors should, at minimum, justify the choice of non-simultaneous testing and describe how they minimized or corrected for weather-induced differences. At minimum, include a basic error or uncertainty analysis and discuss repeatability of results. Ideally, extend testing or include additional runs under comparable conditions.

9. The cost analysis relies on assumed percentages from secondary literature, with no sensitivity or uncertainty assessment. Please provide a sensitivity analysis showing how cost per litre varies with system lifetime, component costs, maintenance, or indirect costs.

10. Tables in Section 3.1 (weather data) should be moved to the Supplementary Material, leaving only key descriptive statistics in the text.

11. The discussion in Section 3 is too descriptive. It restates numerical data without sufficient interpretation. Focus instead on quantitative reasoning, mechanistic explanations, and comparisons with prior literature.

12. Section 4 should be rewritten in paragraph format rather than bullet points. There is no discussion of upscaling potential or market applicability of the proposed system, nor any comparison with rival technologies. The authors state in the Introduction that limitations are presented in Section 4, but this is not the case.

13. The manuscript requires significant language and style improvement. Numerous grammatical and syntactical issues, and typographical errors affect readability.

Recommendation: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R0/PR5

Comments

Dear Authors

Thank you for submitting your timely and very interesting paper. We have sent the paper to 4 reviewers. They have submitted their comments. I would like to kindly invite you to revise your paper according to these comments.

I am looking forward to receiving your revised paper.

Kind Regards

Phoebe

Decision: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R0/PR6

Comments

No accompanying comment.

Author comment: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R1/PR7

Comments

Cover Letter

Date: 2nd December 2025

To

The Editorial Board

Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal

Dear Editorial Board Members,

Please find enclosed the research work titled: “Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of Synergized Basin Solar Still Desalting Seawater” (Previous title: Exploring the Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of Basin Solar Still Desalting Seawater with the Aid of Internal Reflectors, Gravel and Black Ink)” (Manuscript ID: WAT-2025-0003) to be submitted as an original revised article to your esteemed “Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal” for consideration of publication. The revised research work has been approved by all the authors and has never been published, or under consideration for publication elsewhere. The authors declare that there is no conflict of interest and no ethics have been violated in this work. The authors thank the journal team for inviting us to submit an article.

The corresponding author acknowledges “Start-Up Research Grant” funding from the Science and Engineering Research Board (SERB), Department of Science and Technology (DST), Government of India (Grant No: SRG/2023/000017) and “Institute Research Grant” (Grant No: IIPE/DORD/IRG/027) from the Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy, Visakhapatnam, India.

We hope that the editorial board will agree with the interest of the study. We are looking forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,

H. Sharon

Assistant Professor

Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy Visakhapatnam

Andhra Pradesh, India

Email: sharon.mec@iipe.ac.in; hsharon1987@gmail.com

Ph: +91-9994847986

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R1/PR8

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors have provided a very extensive response to the reviewers comments and indicated the changes that have been made. Despite this the paper still needs refining further and a number of changes made.

Pages 4 and 5 The Abstract is repeated in Tamil and should be removed. The Abstract is still in need of improvement to avoid just a summary of results

Overall at 49 pages the paper is too long and should be shortened to fit within the author guidelines. Research articles have a word Count of 5000 words (see author guidelines). English needs to be improved throughout and the points the authors are trying to make more succinctly expressed.

The authors claim “the scalability of the system has now been discussed in Section 6, Pg. 49”. This amounts to no more than two sentences at the end of the Conclusions simply asserting: “ Community scale desalination plant can be developed by sizing and arranging required number of synergized basin solar stills in rows and columns”

The authors seem to use the term “desalting” and “desalination interchangeably. Please be consistent or clarify the difference between these terms.

The title remains clumsily phrased. I suggest “ Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for the small scale desalination of seawater”

With regard to comments on groundwater on page 6, suggest rephrase as follows :”Groundwater accounts for nearly 99% of the total available liquid freshwater reserves of the globe and is a major source for drinking and irrigation in many rural regions. However, this resource is heavily mismanaged, undervalued, polluted and in many regions has been seriously depleted by over abstraction leading to irreversible consequences including water scarcity (United Nations, 2022)”

The paper would still benefit from revisiting the Introduction and separating the first section as follows: 1. Introduction into a short problem statement followed by 2 Literature review which assess a current practice and compares previous performance evaluation of different technologies/arrangements.

The authors provide a response to the following question “ How efficient would the still perform in other months of the year?” but do not indicate how this has been incorporated into the text?

Despite the authors response in Comment #13 concern remains over the veracity of the conclusions from the short period of operation for each configuration. The following comment is unclear in this context: “Figure 6. Diurnal Yield, Nocturnal yield and Thermal Efficiency of solar still under a) Case 1 b) Case 2 and c) Case 3 d) Variation of daily desalinated water yield of solar still with solar radiation energy under various cases”

In the additional text suggested under Comment #’17 is the percentage improvements reported to an accuracy of 2 decimal places justified? The additional text proposed here is lengthy and extensive and its readability (in better English) could be improved.

A further refinement and more incisive and concise reporting is required before the paper is ready for publication.

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R1/PR9

Conflict of interest statement

No competing interest.

Comments

The authors did a good job in addressing most comments/concerns raised by the reviewers. They added new analyses/sections (seasonal yield estimation, sensitivity analysis, broader comparisons, SDG linkage, etc.) and rewrote/expanded parts of the Results/Discussion and Conclusion.

However, a second-round revision is still warranted, because some points are only partly addressed, which are important enough to block acceptance in a journal like Cambridge Prisms: Water.

1. The authors acknowledge limited replication (e.g., a few days per configuration), fixed basin water, and unoptimized gravel mass. Acknowledgement helps, but the study remains vulnerable to day-to-day variability even with regression normalization.

2. The revision expands comparison to desalination technologies and solar still literature, but the specific request to compare to common household water options is not fully met.

3. Some wording continues to overreach (e.g., describing the approach as “cheap water production”), while other parts appropriately note that solar stills generally underperform mature commercial technologies on cost/performance; these parts should be aligned to avoid mixed messaging.

Overall, the core contribution is improved and the paper is closer to publishable, but it needs targeted fixes to (i) strengthen how uncertainty/variability is communicated, (ii) address household-alternative comparisons, and (iii) resolve formatting/reference issues.

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R1/PR10

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Overall Evaluation

The authors have made a substantial and largely constructive revision in response to first-round reviews. Many important concerns have been addressed through added analyses, expanded comparisons, improved environmental and economic calculations, clearer acknowledgment of limitations, and enhanced contextual framing (including SDGs and scalability).

The manuscript is now significantly stronger, more transparent, and closer to the standards expected by Cambridge Prisms: Water. However, a small number of substantive issues remain only partially resolved, particularly regarding claims of experimental variability, household-scale context, and presentation consistency.

Accordingly, while the paper is clearly publishable in principle, it still requires a short, targeted second-round revision before final acceptance.

2. Strengths: Issues Well Addressed

The following aspects have been adequately or well resolved:

Seasonality and meteorological context: Inclusion of supplementary weather data and a year-round yield estimation using regression correlations addresses the short experimental window reasonably well.

Economic analysis: Addition of maintenance assumptions, lifetime justification, and a sensitivity analysis (0–5%) improves robustness and credibility.

Benchmarking against literature:

The expanded Table 7, comparing 20 solar still configurations (2019–2026), is a major improvement and situates the work clearly within the field.

Environmental indicators:

Embodied energy methodology, CO₂ mitigation logic, and lifetime scenarios are now transparent and properly referenced.

SDG framing and limitations:

Addition of an explicit SDG-6 section and a “Limitations and Scope for Future Work” section aligns well with the journal’s interdisciplinary mission.

3. Remaining Issues Requiring Further Attention

These points are not fatal, but should be addressed before acceptance.

3.1 Novelty and “Synergy” Claim Remains Under-Demonstrated

The revised manuscript provides a qualitative rationale for combining mirrors, gravel, and black dye and shows improved performance at comparable solar input. However, it does not convincingly demonstrate non-additive synergy (i.e., that the combined effect exceeds the sum of individual effects).

At present, the evidence supports a combined enhancement, but not a rigorously demonstrated synergistic interaction.

Required clarification:

Either provide a quantitative or mechanistic justification (e.g., energy-balance reasoning, effect decomposition, or interaction analysis), or reframe the contribution more conservatively as an “integrated/combined enhancement approach” and soften claims of synergy throughout the manuscript.

3.2 Experimental Design and Variability

While limitations are now acknowledged, the study still relies on:

Few experimental days per configuration (Limited replication)

Modeled annual yield extrapolated from short-term measurements

Targeted improvements needed:

Explicit depiction of day-to-day variability (e.g., standard deviation or error bars across test days).

Clear distinction between measured outputs and modeled/estimated values, especially for annual productivity.

A short clarification of how confounding factors were controlled or mitigated.

3.3 Household Context and Alternatives

The manuscript frames the system as suitable for household or community use, but still lacks a direct comparison with common household water options, such as: Chlorination, Filtration, Boiling, Rainwater harvesting, Community kiosks or tanker supply

Suggested fix:

Add a short subsection or table comparing the proposed system with these alternatives in terms of cost, complexity, maintenance, reliability, and water-quality assurance.

3.4 Over-Strong or Inconsistent Claims

Some statements still overreach (e.g., “cheap water production”), while other sections correctly note that solar stills are not competitive with mature commercial desalination.

Required refinement:

Harmonize framing by restricting “low-cost” claims to off-grid, small-scale, niche contexts. Avoid absolute statements; ensure conclusions are consistent with acknowledged limitations.

4. Final Recommendation

Minor Revision Required

The manuscript is close to acceptance and clearly improved, but it still requires focused revisions to:

Substantiate or soften the synergy/novelty claim

Communicate experimental uncertainty and variability more clearly

Strengthen the household-scale contextual comparison

Tone down over-strong claims

Once these targeted points are addressed, the paper would meet the scientific, practical, and editorial standards of Cambridge Prisms: Water.

Recommendation: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R1/PR11

Comments

No accompanying comment.

Decision: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R1/PR12

Comments

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Author comment: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R2/PR13

Comments

Cover Letter

Date: 18th January 2026

To

The Editorial Board

Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal

Dear Editorial Board Members,

Please find enclosed the research work titled: “Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of a Modified Basin Solar Still for the Small-Scale Desalination of Seawater” (Previous title: Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of Synergized Basin Solar Still Desalting Seawater)” (Manuscript ID: WAT-2025-0003.R1) to be submitted as an original revised article to your esteemed “Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal” for consideration of publication. The revised research work has been approved by all the authors and has never been published, or under consideration for publication elsewhere. The authors declare that there is no conflict of interest and no ethics have been violated in this work. The authors thank the journal team for inviting us to submit an article.

The corresponding author acknowledges “Start-Up Research Grant” funding from the Science and Engineering Research Board (SERB), Department of Science and Technology (DST), Government of India (Grant No: SRG/2023/000017) and “Institute Research Grant” (Grant No: IIPE/DORD/IRG/027) from the Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy, Visakhapatnam, India.

We hope that the editorial board will agree with the interest of the study. We are looking forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,

H. Sharon

Assistant Professor

Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy Visakhapatnam

Andhra Pradesh, India

Email: sharon.mec@iipe.ac.in; hsharon1987@gmail.com

Ph: +91-9994847986

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R2/PR14

Conflict of interest statement

There are no competing interests.

Comments

The authors addressed all comments raised by the reviewers.

Review: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R2/PR15

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors have provided a detailed response to the numerous queries raised on their first revision, and many issues have been satisfactorily addressed. However the paper still does not reach a standard suitable for publication in Cambridge Prisms : Water. Throughout the authors adopt advocacy for their preferred solution supported by a limited evidence base. Moreover the paper remains excessively long and requires English improvements throughout. Specifically the following should be addressed.

1. The paper should be shortened to within the required Word Limit

2 . Whilst the Introduction is now a short separate section it does not identify what the paper is about in a clear problem statement or what key research question is being addressed.

3. Comments (page 11) such as “The results of this study were found to be interesting and the authors firmly believe that the findings will be useful to the researchers interested in developing sustainable desalination technology for real time deployment in areas of need.” are unnecessary and should be avoided.

4. The response to the query concerning scalability (Section 6, Pg. 48) remains vague

5. With reference to the variation in production over the year as estimated in Figure 7 on -page 34, what are the practical implications of this variability for the user?

6. I am still not convinced reporting results to an accuracy of 1 decimal place is justified.

A further refinement and more incisive and concise reporting is required before the paper is ready for publication

Recommendation: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R2/PR16

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Decision: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R2/PR17

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Author comment: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R3/PR18

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Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal

Dear Editorial Board Members,

Please find enclosed the research work titled: “Performance, Water Quality and Enviro-Economic Aspects of a Modified Basin Solar Still for the Small-Scale Desalination of Seawater” (Manuscript ID: WAT-2025-0003.R2) to be submitted as an original revised article to your esteemed “Cambridge Prisms: Water Journal” for consideration of publication. The revised research work has been approved by all the authors and has never been published, or under consideration for publication elsewhere. The authors declare that there is no conflict of interest and no ethics have been violated in this work. The authors thank the journal team for inviting us to submit an article. The total word count is about 7942 and number of figures is about 11. The authors humbly request the editorial board to allow this extension.

The corresponding author acknowledges “Start-Up Research Grant” funding from the Science and Engineering Research Board (SERB), Department of Science and Technology (DST), Government of India (Grant No: SRG/2023/000017) and “Institute Research Grant” (Grant No: IIPE/DORD/IRG/027) from the Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy, Visakhapatnam, India.

We hope that the editorial board will agree with the interest of the study. We are looking forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,

H. Sharon

Assistant Professor

Indian Institute of Petroleum and Energy Visakhapatnam

Andhra Pradesh, India

Email: sharon.mec@iipe.ac.in; hsharon1987@gmail.com

Ph: +91-9994847986

Recommendation: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R3/PR19

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Dear Authors

Thank you for submitting the revised version of your paper. I am happy to inform you that your paper is now accepted for publication in Cambridge-Prism: Water.

We do hope that you will continue to send your work to our journal.

Regards

Prof. Dr. Phoebe Koundouri

Decision: Performance, water quality and enviro-economic aspects of a modified basin solar still for small-scale desalination of seawater — R3/PR20

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