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Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  05 October 2023

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Author comment: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R0/PR1

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Review: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R0/PR2

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In reviewing this manuscript I have considered it as thought piece reflecting on key issues underlying the challenges of water management and the responses being developed. As such I think it is of significant interest to the journal’s readers. I would suggest some revisions, the main one is that the conclusions are just two bullet lists. In each of these I think a number could be grouped together thereby giving fewer broad areas in which conclusions can be drawn in a more narrative way.

More specific suggestions are:

- Line 45-47: incomplete sentence.

- Line 50: given events since the paper was submitted, reference to heatwaves in the Mediterranean region might be appropriate.

- In the Mansfield example the location is mentioned in the title, but it would help for this to be mentioned in the text along with a few details of the town’s exposure to flooding. It would also be interesting to know what stakeholder engagement took place in the project.

- The figure on Page 7 is not discussed. Some discussion of this figure would draw out the details of the multi-capitals total value approach.

- The overview at the start of the conclusions repeats a lot of what is said earlier. I would suggest having a much shorter introductory paragraph, with the narrative on conclusions as suggested above.

Recommendation: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R0/PR3

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I agree with the reviewer that this paper from an experienced practioner provides a very interesting perspective to readers.

I also agree that the main area that could be strengthened is the conclusion. I recommend that the barriers and areas for further research sections are more positively reframed in a section called « recommendations and opportunities » (or similar) that comes before the conclusion (since these elements have not been mentioned previously in the text). I also agree with the reviewer that it would be beneficial to identify fewer key points, or groups of points, and to explain them so that the reader understands what changes are being recommended by the author based on their experience.

In terms of describing opportunities, there are several key developments that have occurred since 2020 (the last date mentioned in the paper), directly related to the listed barriers/areas of further research, that are not mentioned in the text. This gives an incomplete picture of the starting point, how barriers are already being tackled and opportunities for future work. For example:

• UK Natural Capital Accounts (published and refined since 2014)

• publication of the British Standard BS 8632:2021 Natural Capital Accounting for Organisations https://www.bsigroup.com/en-GB/standards/bs-86322021/

• Agreement of the Kunming-Montreal Global Biodiversity Framework in Dec 2022 – targets 8 and 11 relate directly to nature-based solutions, tackling climate change, and nature’s contributions to people. https://www.cbd.int/gbf/targets/

• The UK’s biodiversity net-gain (BNG) approach and recent launch of statutory biodiversity credits scheme (particularly relevant given the author is writing from a UK perspective).

I would recommend relevant elements are mentioned to give a more rounded, up-to-date perspective of the basis for future action, particularly in relation to total value economic approaches and nature-based solutions.

Is there also a recommendation on gaining a different perspective by seeing issues through the eyes of other disciplines, like art? How has this helped? This would help integrate what is currently the epilogue and a significant part of the paper, into the overall story being told.

I have the following recommendations for revisions within the text:

P1 line 35 – Very long sentence. Suggest rephrasing to aid readability.

P1 line 46 – reframe as recommendations and opportunities (as described above)

P1 line 49 (and epilogue) – I was interested by the engagement of the artist but was left wondering what the output was and how it was used by Arup or beyond. Was this just the visioning of the “fragile band of gas” (mentioned on the radio) as similar to the Ironbridge reflection? Were there paintings / drawings / presentations or other artwork produced by the artist? How did this make a difference to the consultancy work being done at Arup or with clients? This link would be of interest and I think would sit better as a section before recommendations and opportunities are identified.

P2 line 48 – recommend that the list of extreme events includes reference to extreme heat events. Important as nature-based solutions (particularly in urban areas) can address extreme heat risks as well as water-related risks like flooding and drought.

P3 section on “Systems thinking and climate change”. This section would benefit from referencing the importance of watershed-scale management – i.e. the need to manage natural processes at a natural systems scale (currently the need for catchment management is mentioned only as a potential barrier). Integrated water resource management approaches and watershed / catchment / river basin management of issues such as flood risk (catchment flood management plans), ecological integrity (Water Framework Directive river basin plans and action toward good condition or potential), are more advanced in the UK and Europe that many other countries. Watershed governance could also lead into the case study examples – urban areas should be considered in a watershed context.

P5 line 58 – Recommend that reference to financial systems is included here – our human, social and financial systems are also struggling to provide a resilient and equitable social and economic foundation. The failure of financial systems to recognise or account for the value of services provided by nature or natural capital (natural assets) has led to the loss, degradation and management of nature that is described.

P6 line 21 – Recommend directly referencing the IUCN Global Standard for NbS https://portals.iucn.org/library/sites/library/files/documents/2020-020-En.pdf Many, but not all, of the criteria are cited here and should be referenced as the source, rather than the general website.

Decision: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R0/PR4

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Author comment: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R1/PR5

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Review: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R1/PR6

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Recommendation: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R1/PR7

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This version is much more positive and action-orientated - thank you for taking into account review comments.

Decision: Back to the future: A personal perspective on water and climate change — R1/PR8

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