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Associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender and queer persons in Bangkok, Thailand and Mumbai, India: Cross-sectional survey findings

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  29 February 2024

Carmen H. Logie*
Affiliation:
Factor Inwentash Faculty of Social Work, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, Canada United Nations University Institute for Water, Environment, and Health, Hamilton, ON, Canada Women’s College Research Institute, Women’s College Hospital, Toronto, ON, Canada Centre for Gender & Sexual Health Equity, Vancouver, BC, Canada
Peter A. Newman
Affiliation:
Factor Inwentash Faculty of Social Work, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, Canada
Zerihun Admassu
Affiliation:
Factor Inwentash Faculty of Social Work, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, Canada
Frannie MacKenzie
Affiliation:
Factor Inwentash Faculty of Social Work, University of Toronto, Toronto, ON, Canada
Venkatesan Chakrapani
Affiliation:
Centre for Sexuality and Health Research and Policy (C-SHaRP), Chennai, India
Suchon Tepjan
Affiliation:
VOICES-Thailand Foundation, Chiang Mai, Thailand
Murali Shunmugam
Affiliation:
Centre for Sexuality and Health Research and Policy (C-SHaRP), Chennai, India
Pakorn Akkakanjanasupar
Affiliation:
Department of Educational Policy, Management, and Leadership, Faculty of Education, Chulalongkorn University, Bangkok, Thailand
*
Corresponding author: Carmen H. Logie; Email: carmen.logie@utoronto.ca
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Abstract

Background

Water insecurity disproportionally affects socially marginalized populations and may harm mental health. Lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender and queer (LGBTQ) persons are at the nexus of social marginalization and mental health disparities; however, they are understudied in water insecurity research. Yet LGBTQ persons likely have distinct water needs. We explored associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among LGBTQ adults in Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand.

Methods

This cross-sectional survey with a sample of LGBTQ adults in Mumbai and Bangkok assessed associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes, including anxiety symptoms, depression symptoms, loneliness, alcohol misuse, COVID-19 stress and resilience. We conducted multivariable logistic and linear regression analyses to examine associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes.

Results

Water insecurity prevalence was 28.9% in Mumbai and 18.6% in Bangkok samples. In adjusted analyses, in both sites, water insecurity was associated with higher likelihood of depression symptoms, anxiety symptoms, COVID-19 stress, alcohol misuse and loneliness. In Mumbai, water insecurity was also associated with reduced resilience.

Conclusion

Water insecurity was common among LGBTQ participants in Bangkok and Mumbai and associated with poorer well-being. Findings signal the importance of assessing water security as a stressor harmful to LGBTQ mental health.

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Table 1. Characteristics of study participants in Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand (N = 650)

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Table 2. Sociodemographic factors associated with water security among participants in Mumbai and Bangkok (N = 650)

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Table 3. Water insecurity and sociodemographic factors associated with depression symptoms and anxiety symptoms among study participants in Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand (N = 650)

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Table 4. Water insecurity and sociodemographic factors associated with alcohol misuse and COVID-19 stress among participants in Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand (N = 650)

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Table 5. Water insecurity and sociodemographic factors associated with resilience and loneliness among participants in Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand (N = 650)

Author comment: Associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender and queer persons in Bangkok, Thailand and Mumbai, India: Cross-sectional survey findings — R0/PR1

Comments

July 15, 2023

Editor-in-Chief

Professor Gary Belkin

New York University, USA

RE: Submission of an original research article: “Associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, and queer persons in Bangkok, Thailand and Mumbai, India: cross-sectional survey findings”

Dear Dr. Belkin and the Global Mental Health Editorial Board:

On behalf of my co-authors I am submitting the enclosed original manuscript for review by the Global Mental Health Editorial Board. We thank you for the opportunity.

Two billion people are affected by water insecurity—constrained access to reliable, safe, and sufficient water. While water insecurity is associated with poorer mental health outcomes across diverse global regions, and disproportionately affects socially marginalized populations, there is a dearth of research on LGBTQ persons and their experiences of water insecurity and any linkages with their mental health. This is particularly important to understand in urban low- and middle-income contexts (LMIC) such as Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand where LGBTQ persons are at elevated risk for mental health challenges due to larger social contexts of marginalization, and where each place is affected by water insecurity. Notably, there is an urbanization of LGBTQ persons globally as well as in LMIC, thus better understanding water insecurity and related health challenges can inform both LGBTQ health research and practice and the water and sanitation hygiene field.

To address this important knowledge gap, in this manuscript we examine the linkages between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among a sample of LGBTQ adults in Mumbai (n=290) and Bangkok (n=360). We present cross-sectional survey findings of the associations between water insecurity and mental health indicators: anxiety symptoms, depression symptoms, loneliness, alcohol misuse, COVID-19 stress, and resilience. Water insecurity prevalence was higher in Mumbai (28.9%) than Bangkok (18.6%). In adjusted analyses, socio-demographic factors associated with water insecurity in Mumbai were transgender identity and COVID-19 job loss, and in Bangkok, lower education. In both sites, water insecurity was associated with higher likelihood of reporting: depression symptoms, anxiety symptoms, COVID-19 stress, alcohol misuse, and loneliness. In Mumbai, water insecurity was also associated with reduced resilience. To our knowledge this is the first study that identifies water insecurity as a social determinant of mental health among LGBTQ persons. Findings can inform how we assess and address ecosocial drivers of mental health with LGBTQ persons in water insecure locales, and can inform water and sanitation hygiene research to be inclusive of LGBTQ persons.

We believe that this manuscript is well suited for publication in Global Mental Health. It targets a broad audience that will be interested in its findings, including researchers focused on LGBTQ persons in low and middle-income contexts, mental health disparities, social-ecological contexts of health, and mental health and climate change.

We look forward to your review and comments.

Sincerely,

Carmen Logie, PhD

Professor, Factor-Inwentash Faculty of Social Work , University of Toronto, Canada

Canada Research Chair in Global Health Equity & Social Justice with Marginalized Populations

Recommendation: Associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender and queer persons in Bangkok, Thailand and Mumbai, India: Cross-sectional survey findings — R0/PR2

Comments

Thank you for this manuscript, which begins to elucidate and connect several interrelated concepts: mental health, sexual and gender minority populations, and water insecurity.

I concur with Reviewer 1, especially in requesting that a bit more attention be paid to the relationship between LGBTQ+ identity and water insecurity. Understanding, as well, that this was a cross-sectional study (with no comparison group), many readers will anticipate a deeper exploration/explanation of how LGBTQ+ groups may be different than other people in the same settings where water is scarce. The discussion may, therefore, benefit from more explicit reasoning. As Reviewer 1 states, “My overarching question/concern is this: I recognize that the study design cannot determine causation, but I am not sure if the authors are claiming that LGBTQ people have specific water needs that are not being met, or that their position in marginalized communities is associated with water insecurity (but that their insecurity might be an effect of being in communities that are economically precarious, inter alia, as opposed to a direct association).”

If you feel like you can address that overarching issue, I invite a manuscript revision.

Many thanks,

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Comments

We thank the Editor and reviewers for their thoughtful and constructive feedback and feel the manuscript is greatly improved, and are grateful for the opportunity to revise and resubmit. We hope the paper is now ready for publication. We have addressed the reviewer comments below and in the text.

Response to reviewers

Comment from Editor 1: Comments to the Author:

Thank you for this manuscript, which begins to elucidate and connect several interrelated concepts: mental health, sexual and gender minority populations, and water insecurity.

I concur with Reviewer 1, especially in requesting that a bit more attention be paid to the relationship between LGBTQ+ identity and water insecurity. Understanding, as well, that this was a cross-sectional study (with no comparison group), many readers will anticipate a deeper exploration/explanation of how LGBTQ+ groups may be different than other people in the same settings where water is scarce. The discussion may, therefore, benefit from more explicit reasoning. As Reviewer 1 states, “My overarching question/concern is this: I recognize that the study design cannot determine causation, but I am not sure if the authors are claiming that LGBTQ people have specific water needs that are not being met, or that their position in marginalized communities is associated with water insecurity (but that their insecurity might be an effect of being in communities that are economically precarious, inter alia, as opposed to a direct association).”

Reply to Editor: Thank you for your encouraging feedback on the innovation and importance of this paper. We look forward to addressing this important comment on LGBTQ+ identity and water insecurity raised by reviewer 1 below. This has actually generated great discussion with the teams in India, Thailand and Canada.

Comment from Editor 2:

Please also ensure your manuscript complies with the following formatting points (a copy of our author guidelines is included for reference):

Response: We have reviewed and ensured we comply with the formatting points. We also added a graphic abstract:

Reviewer 1 Comments

Comment 1: This article explores the association between water insecurity and membership in the LGBTQ+ community. These data were collected as part of a larger RCT testing the efficacy of an eHealth intervention aimed at increasing health seeking behaviors and decrease psychological distress among LGBTQ adults in Mumbai, India and Bangkok, Thailand. The authors found a prevalence of water insecurity of almost 30% in Mumbai and almost 20% Bangkok. In line with previous studies, they found that water insecurity is associated with a range of negative psychoemotional symptoms including anxiety, depression, COVID-19 stress, loneliness, and lowered resilience as well as related behavioral sequelae including alcohol misuse. They also found in Mumbai higher odds of being water insecure among people identifying as transgender.

Overall, I commend the authors for bringing attention to a much-needed topic: that LBGTQ individuals and communities may have higher incidence of wash and water insecurities owing to their marginalized social positions. The paper is well-written, with the methods and results laid out clearly.

Response 1: Thank you for your positive and encouraging feedback. We are grateful for the opportunity to respond to your thoughtful review.

Comment 2: My overarching question/concern is this: I recognize that the study design cannot determine causation, but I am not sure if the authors are claiming that LGBTQ people have specific water needs that are not being met, or that their position in marginalized communities is associated with water insecurity (but that their insecurity might be an affect of being in communities that are economically precarious, inter alia, as opposed to a direct association). In the justification section, specifically page 3, lines 127/128 on, they justify their research by pointing out that there are assumptions about gendered water behaviors (i.e. that women the world over are responsible for water procurement) and some studies point to specific wash insecurities for transgender persons. That there are gendered water expectations and wash insecurity among transgender persons is clear. But I’m left wondering about how LGBTQ+ identity relates to water insecurity. To put another way: is being LGBTQ a cofounder or effect modifier for other associations with water insecurity or is there a direct association, i.e. that LGBTQ people have either specific water needs or water challenges owing specifically to their gender identity. The sentence “Yet LGBTQ persons’ gender….” needs another sentence at least to really situate LGBTQ water needs in the water insecurity literatures.

Response 2:

Thank you for this question that raised a lot of lively discussion in our team of researchers spanning India, Thailand and Canada. We do not believe that LGBTQ persons have distinct water needs, rather that they are at the nexus of mental health disparities and social disparities (e.g., stigma, poverty) that elevate exposure to water insecurity. Social marginalization results in many LGBTQ persons a) living in less resourced urban areas, including slums with scarcity of clean water and toilet access; and b) stigma and discrimination increases the likelihood of engaging in sex work, a profession whereby place of work, and occupational health and safety standards, require access to water and sanitation hygiene services. We have tried to clarify this in the abstract as well as the text. For instance, we add a few sections to address your query:

“Structural violence is a conceptual framework that describes how the social world and its structures (e.g., political, economic, legal) are organized in ways that cause harm, injury and ultimately prevent persons from realizing their potential (Farmer et al. 2006; Galtung 1969). This framework was applied to understand how direct and indirect violence experienced by sexually diverse men in India, in legal, community, family, and healthcare contexts, shape HIV vulnerability (Chakrapani et al. 2007). Structural violence may be relevant to contextualizing water insecurity risk and harms with LGBTQ persons. For instance, LGBTQ stigma and discrimination limits access to education, employment, and housing opportunities, resulting in an overrepresentation of LGBTQ persons living in poverty (Badgett, M.V et al. 2019; Badgett 2012a; SOGI Task Force and Dominik Koehler 2015), often in resource-constrained environments such as in slums and informal settlements with WASH insecurity in India (Barik and Pattayat 2022; Jadav and Chakrapani 2023) and Thailand (Ojanen et al. 2019b, 2019a). Better understanding how water insecurity, an indicator of social marginalization and thus a form of structural violence, affects mental health among LGBTQ persons can inform health research, policy, and practice at structural levels to advance LGBTQ persons’ WASH needs as a human right (Heller 2019) and individual levels to address immediate mental health needs.”

“While LGBTQ persons in LMIC do not have distinct water needs, they may be at the nexus of LGBTQ stigma-related barriers to accessing WASH (Heller n.d.) and water insecure living conditions. For instance, LGBTQ-related stigma may result in the denial of basic needs such as drinking water and hygiene kits in emergency situations (Wolf 2019) and constrained access to sanitation services at large (Brewis et al. 2023; Farber 2023; Heller n.d.), while also being more likely to live in slums and informal settlements with limited WASH access (Goel 2016, 2020; Newman et al. 2021b; Reid et al. 2022).”

“Due to structural violence in education and employment (Chakrapani et al. 2007), LGBTQ persons are overrepresented in sex work (Platt et al. 2022), including in India (Chakrapani et al. 2022b, 2022a) and Thailand (Farber 2023; Newman et al. 2021b; Ojanen et al. 2019a, 2019b; Reid et al. 2022). Sex work is itself an occupation that requires WASH access for optimal health (Grittner and Sitter 2019; Sherman et al. 2023), thus sex workers (regardless of LGBTQ identity) have occupational WASH needs that require additional attention.”

Comment 3: In my own research, I’ve been challenged to outline how water (and/or food) insecurities are distinct from economic insecurity more broadly and drive poorer mental health outcomes directly. I think a similar task falls upon these authors, but to think through the pathways through which LGBTQ identity manifests as water insecurity.

Response 3: Thank you for the opportunity to consider this. We have now added the minority stress model as a framework to understand how water insecurity is a specific stressor in the environment that can exacerbate other minority stress processes and can produce additional stigma. We now add:

“Thus LGBTQ-related social marginalization can constrain WASH access in work, community, healthcare, and home environments, in turn producing water-related stress—this may interact with and exacerbate distal minority stress processes (e.g., violence, discrimination) and proximal minority stress processes (e.g., rejection expectation, identity concealment) central to the minority stress model’s conceptualization of how minority stress harms LGBTQ persons’ mental health (Meyer 2003). While pathways from water insecurity can directly affect mental health via psychosocial stress and worry, future research with LGBTQ persons could also study indirect pathways identified in other populations and contexts, such as food insecurity and sanitation insecurity (Brewis et al. 2019) and stigma linked with insufficient water access (Young et al. 2019b).”

We also add the importance of an intersectional lens:

“For instance, a Nigerian study with LGBTQ persons found water insecurity was associated with living with a man, transactional sex, and food insecurity (Hamill et al. 2023), and Brewis et al. describe how this study “highlights the intersectional nature of gender and sexual identities in creating risks for water insecurity” (p. 6) (Brewis et al. 2023).”

“Third, findings suggest differences in experiences within and between LGBTQ communities, whereby water insecurity most affected transgender persons in Mumbai than cisgender counterparts, those with lower education in Bangkok and COVID-19 job loss in Mumbai, and participants in India vs. Thailand. This reflects the need articulated by Brewis et al. (Brewis et al. 2023) for an intersectional analysis on water-related insecurity that accounts for sexuality and gender as well as other socio-economic and contextual factors.”

Comment 4: Given the study did not assess these outcomes among the general population, there’s no way of knowing whether there’s differential risk among LGBTQ vs. cis hetero and/or cis gender people. Not to minimize these numbers, but the study design can’t speak to higher odds for LGBTQ persons, just that there is notable prevalence of water insecurity among people identifying as LGBTQ.

Response 4: We agree and reviewed the language regarding this, and added as a limitation:

“It is not possible with the study design to assess if there is differential risk for water insecurity among LGBTQ persons vs. non-LGBTQ persons in each site.”

Comment 5: While the authors can’t use their own data to demonstrate causal relationships or pathways, I nonetheless think the paper needs stronger justification/clarification about the theoretical assumptions about gender identity and water insecurity. The discussion begins this (pg 7, lines 348 on) but I think the paper could still be strengthened in this regard.

Response 5: Thank you for helping us think through this. Collectively, our team feels that structural violence is a useful framework to situate LGBTQ persons experiences of water insecurity and add this to the intro, and we better detail the minority stress model in the background and discussion to clarify how water insecurity could be considered in the ‘environmental factors and context' in this model. For instance, in the intro we added:

“Structural violence is a conceptual framework that describes how the social world and its structures (e.g., political, economic, legal) are organized in ways that cause harm, injury and ultimately prevent persons from realizing their potential (Farmer et al. 2006; Galtung 1969). This framework was applied to understand how direct and indirect violence experienced by sexually diverse men in India, in legal, community, family, and healthcare contexts, shape HIV vulnerability (Chakrapani et al. 2007). Structural violence may be relevant to contextualizing water insecurity risk and harms with LGBTQ persons. For instance, LGBTQ stigma and discrimination limits access to education, employment, and housing opportunities, resulting in an overrepresentation of LGBTQ persons living in poverty (Badgett, M.V et al. 2019; Badgett 2012a; SOGI Task Force and Dominik Koehler 2015), often in resource-constrained environments such as in slums and informal settlements with WASH insecurity in India (Barik and Pattayat 2022; Jadav and Chakrapani 2023) and Thailand (Ojanen et al. 2019b, 2019a). Better understanding how water insecurity, an indicator of social marginalization and thus a form of structural violence, affects mental health among LGBTQ persons can inform health research, policy, and practice at structural levels to advance LGBTQ persons’ WASH needs as a human right (Heller 2019) and individual levels to address immediate mental health needs.”

We also, as per your comment 3 above, bring in the minority stress model.

Comment 6: I think the strongest conclusions have been made about transgender people and hypothesizing how and why this is the case (discussion, line 339 on). Alex Brewis and colleagues have a new paper out that should prove useful in better setting up their argument:

Brewis, A., DuBois, L. Z., Wutich, A., Adams, E. A., Dickin, S., Elliott, S. J., ... & Korzenevica, M. Gender identities, water insecurity, and risk: Re‐theorizing the connections for a gender‐inclusive toolkit for water insecurity research. Wiley Interdisciplinary Reviews: Water, e1685.

Response 6: Thank you for this very helpful article which we now reference and attempt to build on.

Comment 7: Small comments:

Can you please explain what eHealth is briefly for those not familiar.

Response 7: We have now added the following:

“eHealth refers to the ways that digital technologies (e.g., mobile phones) are used to: monitor and track health and provide health information; communicate with health professionals; and collect and manage health data (Shaw et al. 2017).”

Reviewer: 2

Comment 8:

Dear authors, Thank you for such a well-written article. The topic is of utmost relevance and the research design is well-thought-out and clearly described. The paper is also backed up by recent literature on the topic, which indicates care in the literature review. I recommend the publication of the paper. I am highlighting only a few points for revision, which I think could strengthen your work:

Response 8: Thank you for your kind and encouraging feedback, we appreciate you seeing the value in the paper.

Comment 9: - Line 86 - The article could benefit from a short explanation of why mental health challenges among LGBTQ groups were exacerbated during the COVID-19 pandemic.

Response 9: Thank you for this point. We now add a few new references and describe as per below:

Mental health challenges among LGBTQ persons in India and Thailand were exacerbated in the COVID-19 pandemic due to a constellation of factors, including: pandemic-related closures of LGBTQ support services; loss of employment, including among persons engaged in sex work; increased poverty and subsequent food and housing insecurity; and mobility restrictions that reduced access to social support systems (Chakrapani et al. 2022b, 2022a; Newman et al. 2021b).

Comment 10: - Line 105 - Is there space for expanding on the explanation for why LGBTQ persons in India and Thailand are disproportionately affected by poor mental health outcomes? How is the ‘stigma and discrimination’ faced by these groups different in these locations (or in LMICs) than in other parts of the world?

Response 10: We now add a reference to the minority stress model that posits how distal and proximal stressors, a lack of legal protections from discrimination, and constrained access to mental health care (particularly competent on LGBTQ issues) harm mental health among LGBTQ persons in India and Thailand:

LGBTQ persons experience pervasive stigma and discrimination in these contexts, as in other global regions, that contributes to these mental health disparities (Chakrapani et al. 2019; Ojanen et al. 2019b) through distal (e.g., discrimination) and proximal (e.g. internalized stigma) stressors, as conceptualized in the minority stress model (Kittiteerasack et al. 2021; Logie et al. 2012; Meyer 1995). India and Thailand both lack: broad protection against discrimination based on sexual orientation; criminal liability for offences committed on the basis of sexual orientation; prohibition of incitement to hatred, violence, or discrimination based on sexual orientation; same-sex marriage recognition; and partnership recognition for same-sex couples (“Home | ILGA World Database” n.d.; Mendos and ILGA World 2019)—limiting access to legal or other recourse in the face of stigma and discrimination and constraining access to relational benefits with partners (Newman et al. 2021b; Reid et al. 2022). This lack of legal protection converges with the limited access to broad mental health services and trained mental health providers competent with LGBTQ issues in these contexts (Chakrapani et al. 2020; Ojanen et al. 2019a).

Comment 11: - Line 155 - ‘knowledge gaps’ should be ‘knowledge gap’.

Response 11: Thank you, we have corrected this.

Comment 12: - Recruitment and Limitations - The paper would benefit from a discussion on the limitations of an online recruitment strategy given that the target population is more likely to live in poverty. Could this limit their ability to access smartphones, computers and the internet? Could this strategy miss some of the most disadvantaged members of this group who are more likely to face water insecurity?

Response 12: Thank you for raising this important point. We have addressed in the limitations, and added a relevant reference:

“The online recruitment strategy itself has limitations due to the fact that, as discussed throughout this manuscript, LGBTQ persons may be more likely to live in poverty than heterosexual and cisgender counterparts, and in turn may experience more barriers to accessing mobile devices and internet data. Hence, the online recruitment strategy could potentially miss LGBTQ persons who are the most marginalized and most likely to face water insecurity, reflecting the digital divide of inequitable access to technology and in turn inequitable access to digital clinical trials (Wirtz et al. 2022).”

Comment 13: - Line 198 - ‘11-20 time’ should read ‘11-20 times’.

Response 13: Thank you, we have corrected this.

Comment 14: I am looking forward to seeing this manuscript published.

Response 14: We appreciate your thoughtful and encouraging feedback.

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Comments

Dear Authors - this is a great revision and I am prepared to recommend this manuscript for publication; however, Reviewer 2 had a few remaining minor points that I invite you to address first.

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Author comment: Associations between water insecurity and mental health outcomes among lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender and queer persons in Bangkok, Thailand and Mumbai, India: Cross-sectional survey findings — R2/PR7

Comments

Thank you for the helpful feedback and opportunity to revise the manuscript.

Please find below our response to reviewers that is reflected in the manuscript:

Comment 1: Editor: Dear Authors - this is a great revision and I am prepared to recommend this manuscript for publication; however, Reviewer 2 had a few remaining minor points that I invite you to address first.

Response 1: Thank you for this wonderful news. We have addressed the remaining points as detailed below.

Comment 2: Reviewer: 1 : Comments to the Author

I am satisfied with the changes made by the authors and I highly recommend the publication of this important piece.

Response 2: Thank you for your helpful feedback and encouraging words.

Comment 3: The response to reviewers indicates that the authors gave thought to the reviewer comments and tried to incorporate those changes they thought would improve the paper. On the whole, the paper reads very well and pending minor changes recommended, it is ready for publication.

Response 3: Thank you for your helpful feedback that has greatly strengthened the paper.

Comment 4: I appreciate that the authors clarified LGBTQ water needs but I think in clarifying, they might have gone too far in the other direction: In the abstract I would say “LGBTQ persons may not have specific water needs” or even “LGBTQ persons likely have specific water needs” instead of do not, since they may but future research is needed. It’s not that they don’t, this study just doesn’t have those data. The rest of the abstract reads very well and I think is a much better representation of the study/findings.

Response 4: Thank you for this helpful feedback. Per your suggestion we have changed it to the latter in the abstract and manuscript text: “LGBTQ persons likely have specific water needs”.

Comment 5: Related small point: I don’t think it’s a reach to say water insecurity is a potential social determinant of health, but as it’s phrased as an “additional minority stressor” is fine. I see that the authors are instead using structural violence, which is an appropriate framework, instead of social determinants and may want to avoid using two separate framings here.

Response 5: Thank you for this comment. We reviewed the paper and confirm we are no longer referring to the social determinants of health framework.

Comment 6: Good clarification of the specific effects of the COVID-19 pandemic.

Response 6: Thank you.

Comment 7: The authors removed “and signals the urgent need to consider LGBTQ persons experiences…” but the original text read well and I do think that’s needed. If it’s moved elsewhere in the paper, ok.

Response 7: Thank you, we went back and replaced this text in the Discussion.

Comment 8: Re: my point about water needs: on page 12, line 389 the authors state: “While LGBTQ persons in LMIC do not…” but then list ways that they do have specific water needs, for example they were denied basic services. Also, the authors elsewhere discussed transgender persons inability to access toilets, part of a larger WASH security but nonetheless related to water. (As an aside: in future research/publication the authors could consider using Bethany Caruso’s work on gendered WASH insecurity which might be useful, though I can’t recall if she discusses LGBTQ needs specifically).

Response 8: We have reviewed the text and replaced per comment 1 to state throughout that LGBTQ persons likely have specific water needs due to their experiences of social marginalization. Thank you for pointing us to Caruso’s work, we now reference her in the Discussion and add her 2022 PLOS Water review as a reference.

Comment 9: Re: study limitations: It was the other reviewer who noted the issue of internet connectivity and I like what the authors have written here but I think it’s also worth noting that this limitation suggests that you are actually underappreciating the association, i.e. that the problem is likely larger than you measured because you may not have reached the most at-risk folks and that might be worth mentioning.

Response 9: Thank you for this great point. We have now added this point:

“In fact, if the most marginalized are not included in this study, the issues of water insecurity among LGBTQ persons may be larger than what we have measured.”

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