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Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  09 May 2023

Jonathan L. Payne*
Affiliation:
Department of Earth and Planetary Sciences, Stanford University, Stanford, CA, USA
Jood A. Al Aswad
Affiliation:
Department of Earth and Planetary Sciences, Stanford University, Stanford, CA, USA
Curtis Deutsch
Affiliation:
Department of Geosciences, Princeton University, Princeton, NJ, USA
Pedro M. Monarrez
Affiliation:
Department of Earth and Planetary Sciences, Stanford University, Stanford, CA, USA
Justin L. Penn
Affiliation:
Department of Geosciences, Princeton University, Princeton, NJ, USA
Pulkit Singh
Affiliation:
Department of Earth and Planetary Sciences, Stanford University, Stanford, CA, USA
*
Corresponding author: Jonathan L. Payne; Email: jlpayne@stanford.edu
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Abstract

A central question in the study of mass extinction is whether these events simply intensify background extinction processes and patterns versus change the driving mechanisms and associated patterns of selectivity. Over the past two decades, aided by the development of new fossil occurrence databases, selectivity patterns associated with mass extinction have become increasingly well quantified and their differences from background patterns established. In general, differences in geographic range matter less during mass extinction than during background intervals, while differences in respiratory and circulatory anatomy that may correlate with tolerance to rapid change in oxygen availability, temperature, and pH show greater evidence of selectivity during mass extinction. The recent expansion of physiological experiments on living representatives of diverse clades and the development of simple, quantitative theories linking temperature and oxygen availability to the extent of viable habitat in the oceans have enabled the use of Earth system models to link geochemical proxy constraints on environmental change with quantitative predictions of the amount and biogeography of habitat loss. Early indications are that the interaction between physiological traits and environmental change can explain substantial proportions of observed extinction selectivity for at least some mass extinction events. A remaining challenge is quantifying the effects of primary extinction resulting from the limits of physiological tolerance versus secondary extinction resulting from the loss of taxa on which a given species depended ecologically. The calibration of physiology-based models to past extinction events will enhance their value in prediction and mitigation efforts related to the current biodiversity crisis.

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Figure 1. Extinction patterns in the fossil record. (A) Graph of marine animal diversity across the past 600 million years, illustrating the diversity declines associated with the five major mass extinction events (modified from Raup and Sepkoski, 1982). (B) Extinction selectivity with respect to geographic range, illustrating the preferential survival of broadly distributed genera during background intervals and the greatly reduced selectivity during mass extinction events (modified from Payne and Finnegan, 2007). (C) Principal components analysis of logistic regression coefficients of ecological traits and body size selectivity of the Big Five mass extinction events and the modern oceans, demonstrating the unique selectivity of the modern extinction threat (modified from Payne et al., 2016b). (D) Extinction selectivity during the end-Permian mass extinction, illustrating the preferential extinction of heavily calcified marine animal classes with less complex respiratory and circulatory systems (modified from Knoll et al., 2007; Knoll and Fischer, 2011). (E) Extinction selectivity with respect to body size for major classes of marine animals, illustrating the general bias of background extinction against smaller-bodied genera versus the variable direction of selectivity for classes that exhibit distinct patterns during mass extinction (modified from Monarrez et al., 2021).

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Figure 2. Workflow illustrating the use of geological and geochemical data to constrain Earth system models (ESMs), physiological experiments to constrain parameters used to populate models with species of different ecophysiotypes, and fossil occurrence data to conduct model-data comparison. Ecosystem structure remains to be incorporated into such models and can be used to predict extinction cascades. Calibration of models against selectivity patterns in ancient extinction events will improve their use in forecasting biotic response to current and future environmental change. Panels on right showing CO2 emissions curves and future biodiversity projections are from Penn and Deutsch (2022).

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Figure 3. Graphs illustrating the key species traits of the Metabolic Index (ɸ) along with how ɸ relates to temperature and oxygen partial pressure. (A–C) Frequency distributions of the Metabolic Index parameters for marine animals. (D, E) Graphs of variation in ɸ as a function of temperature and oxygen for species with negative (D) and positive (E) temperature sensitivities (Eo) of hypoxia tolerance (Ao), which is the inverse of the critical oxygen threshold (red circle) at a reference temperature (Tref), as derived from respirometry experiments. For species in a resting state, the aerobic habitat limit occurs when ɸ = 1, but in the environment a species’ activity level or sustained metabolic scope (SMS) elevates the habitat limit to ɸcrit. For species with negative Eo, aerobic habitat availability increases with temperature, whereas for those with positive Eo (i.e., most species; panel B), aerobic habitat declines with warming. Changes in PO2 has the potential to lower aerobic habitat availability, and thus the amount of warming a species can withstand, as exemplified for two scenarios of with different fractions of present atmospheric levels of O2 (PAL; yellow dots and arrows). A change in CO2 also has the potential to alter hypoxia tolerance, but the magnitude and direction of this effect is unknown across marine biota and is illustrated here from experimental data for a single species under ∆ pH = +0.5 (Rosa et al., 2013). Arrows in A–C denote species traits in D and E.

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Figure 4. Hypothetical progression of a mass extinction highlighting sources of trait-based and geographic selectivity and potential ecological amplification. (A) An initial distribution of species (or “ecophysiotypes”) defined by traits under selection by large-scale environmental conditions will likely result in systematic correlations between traits and geographic range. The range metric here can be considered overall range size (area and volume), or centroid (e.g., low-latitude versus high-latitude, shallow versus deep). (B) The initial biota are subjected to climate perturbation that poses a direct stress through a reduction in fitness whose magnitude depends on species traits and on local climate trends. The resulting change in available habitat (ΔH; contours) presents an ecophysiological extinction risk that is geographically selective because it is trait selective (but may also be caused by climate patterns themselves). In this hypothetical case, habitat loss (ΔH < 0) selects against species with high values of two traits (habitat “Losers”) and may even benefit species with low values of those traits (habitat “Gainers”; ΔH > 0). (C) Physiological extinction poses further ecological risks (or advantages) depending on the mutualistic or adversarial interactions with ecophysiotypes (nodes in graph) that are under trait-selective risk. Ecological risk is complex and for any particular species will depend on the physiological risk faced by the other species with which it interacts, which may be positive (green lines) or negative (brown lines), and strong (thick lines) or weak (thin lines). The results of these associations, which may be multiple and indirect, could alter extinction risk by either preserving ecological fitness (“+” symbol) or reducing it (“−” symbol). Changes in extinction risk are likely to be most pronounced for those in the neutral zone whose antagonists go extinct or who are buoyed by prey/mutualists that are under positive selection. (D) Post-extinction ecosystem, equal to the initial one (A) minus the ecotypes that have gone extinct from either primary (B) or secondary (C) effects.

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Figure 5. Geographic patterns of extinction and ocean changes in Earth system model simulations of the end-Permian climate transition (left column) and under anthropogenic greenhouse gas forcing (C) to 2300 C.E. (middle column). Line plot comparisons of end-Permian and potential future environmental changes versus latitude are shown in panels on the right (F, I, L, O). Model extinctions (A, B) are driven by ocean warming (D, E) and O2 loss (G, H), as quantified through the Metabolic Index, and in (A) reproduce the latitudinal pattern from the fossil record of the end-Permian (red points). These primary extinctions have the potential to be amplified by other environmental stressors like changes in net primary productivity (NPP) (J, K) or pH (M, N) or through secondary extinctions via the food web. Shaded region in (A) shows uncertainty in end-Permian extinction magnitudes across a range of potential extinction threshold parameters. Solid line in (B) shows future extinction risk averaged across Earth system models, using an extinction threshold calibrated from the end-Permian (same as the solid line in A) (see Penn et al., 2022 for calibration details), while the shading in (B) shows the inter-model range. Future changes are projected under a high greenhouse gas emissions scenario, leading to a net radiative forcing of 8.5 W m−2 in 2100 C.E. (C) and are relative to the pre-industrial era (1850–1900). Model fields are averaged over the upper 500 m, and for the future projections, they are averaged across Earth system models (n = 5). Model details are provided in Penn et al. (2018, 2022). Panels A–C are modified from Penn et al. (2018, 2022), respectively.

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September 15, 2022

Dear Profs. Alroy and Brook,

Please find attached a manuscript entitled Selectivity of mass extinction: patterns, processes, and future directions, submitted for publication in Cambridge Prisms: Extinction. This manuscript is submitted in response to your invitation and is intended as a review of the topic with a focus on progress over the past two decades. To produce the review, I have collaborated with several advisees in my research group as well as two scientists at the forefront of applying Earth system models to the study of biological response to climate change in the modern and ancient worlds. We have addressed, in particular, the use of Earth system models and data from physiological experiments as quantitative bridges between geochemical constraints on environmental change and paleontological data on extinction selectivity during mass extinctions. We have briefly addressed the use of the fossil record for calibrating model forecasts of future extinction in response to climate change. We have attempted to write the manuscript in a way that will be accessible to the broad readership of this new journal. We hope that you will find it acceptable for publication and appreciate the opportunity to contribute.

Best,

Jonathan Payne and co-authors

Review: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R0/PR2

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Comments to Author: Review of the article by Payne et al. entitled “Selectivity of mass extinctions: patterns, processes, and

future directions”

The work by Jonathan L. Payne, Jood A. Al Aswad, Curtis Deutsch, Pedro M. Monarrez, Justin L. Penn and Pulkit Singh is really interesting y, and will make a significant contribution to the research field of extinctions, but also to the fields of global change ecology and biology. However, the article requires some work before to be ready for publication. Particularly, provide a more balanced discussion of the existing evidence and limitations of the approach proposed, verify semantics in few cases, and consider to integrate existing references and concept I highlight below. I believe you can relatively easy deal with the points I raise, and whilst the comments may lead to minor or major revision. I selected major only to enable you have more time if you require so.

Major Comments

Line 149-151. In my opinion, here, you are only skimming the surface. You correctly mention the simple Bauplans of heavy calcified marine invertebrates can in part explain the extinction patterns described in the fossil record for the end-Permian. The point is valid and interesting. I could argue, however, that Bauplan “simplicity” can be an advantage, enabling an organism to be less impacted directly by (at least some) environmental drivers, and indirectly possess the advantage to have lower metabolic-energetic requirements. In this sense, organisms with more complex, high-performance cardio-circulatory and respiration, systems may possess greater homeostatic abilities (see for example Melzner et al. 2009 for ocean acidification), but they will not be able to sustain high homeostatic activities for extended periods of time. Complexity requires more energy for maintenance and repair. Modern ecosystem collapse, such as in the North Sea following a switch of a keystone copepod species (from more to less nutritional), the loss in high level predators was documented. In addition, you seem to (I say this respectfully and with the best of intention to help you further improving your excellent work) miss the importance of the effects of other drivers, which can act along different pathways. For example, here specifically, you are not discussing of the direct (i.e. corrosion of carbonated structure) and indirect (e.g. increase in energetic cost for compensatory calcification to maintain a positive net mineralisation in light of passive dissolution) effects of ocean acidification conditions on marine heavy calcifiers. Please ref. to the literature on this topic. It is vast, but it needs to (even if synthetically) be acknowledged, as it is super relevant. I can refer to my own work to help, but the choice of ref. to use sits entirely with you: please see Calosi et al. 2019 Ann. Rev. Mar. Sc. for the discussion of putative mechanisms-pathways of action (see summary Figure 4), and to Calosi et al. 2017 Nat. Comms. and Findlay et al. 2011 Mar. Biol. Res. where differences in passive corrosion-net mineralisation in different population of the same species and different species are reported. but as I suggest, the literature on this topic is extensive.

Line 193. I feel that in the paper, “ecological-ecosystemic” aspects of mass extinction should be discuss even more thoroughly. The authors do so, but more thinking and work should go into this to push the work and the MS to where it can, and deserved to be. Ensure to bring this as forward as possible in the MS. The method you propose is great to paint a picture on the direct (physiological) impacts of temperature and oxygen (not all drivers characterising current global change for example) but cannot be used to depict the indirect (ecological) impacts. You recognise the issue, but this can be stated even more clearly. You need to discuss in greater depth how best the tool you propose can be used, to what advantage, and where it cannot be used or used recognising the presence of limitations. In line 280 and following you could integrate the work by Reddin et al. 2020 NCC (which you cite) to the discussion, related to early extinctions being caused primarily by direct physiological effects, and later extinctions being caused by indirect ecological effects. All considered, I suggest to enhanced the discussion, and I fully recognise the authors’ effort in the intellectual integration of “physiological” and “ecological” extinctions …. and figure 4 is excellent by the way!!

Line 110, 203-204, 280 and elsewhere. Please the first time you mention “tolerance” and “resilience” ensure to provide a definition in parenthesis: 110 and 204, respectively. I have the impression that in most cases you use it “correctly” but in other not (ex. line 282. Tolerance is the ability of a biological system to resist change following or under a perturbation, and resilience is the ability of a biological system to come back to the original stable state it was in after a perturbation (i.e. resilience is the inverse of the time needed to get back to the starting status).

Line 266. Pre-adaptation does not exist. It is an erroneous concept. An organism cannot be adapted to something it has not experienced before. And if it is adapted to be able to face a certain challenge, it is because it has already experienced it in his phylogenetic history, or it has been selected to be tolerant to another stressor which grants it “protection” to the stressor we are investigating. In either of these cases, we talk of “exaptation” (i.e. existing adaptation), please see Gould’s seminal work on this topic.

For your interest, we have recently published a work on the diversity and evolution of thermal limits, testing for the presence of paleo signals on these traits, and we found one. It was not the strongest of signals of the evolutionary drivers we investigated, but it was non the less significant. In short, the era of emergence of a taxonomic group has a significant influence of defining its thermal limits. See Bennet et al. 2021 Nat. Comms. “The evolution of critical thermal limits of life on Earth”.

Line 287-289. Consider to integrate here and elsewhere some discussion of the importance of extreme and intense, but temporary, climatic-environmental events. These are primary drivers for local and regional extinction, helping shaping physiological diversity (see for example (1) for the CEH Bozinovic et al. 2011 Ann. Rev. Ecol. Evol. Syst. and references within, and (2) for extreme drivers as evolutionary driver for thermal limits Bennet et al. 2021 Nat. Comms.) participating to global extinctions. I think for example to Marine Heat Waves, intense salinity changes, intense upwelling events, etc.

Minor Comments

Line 19. Specify “differences” in what to make the statement explicit and clearer to readers.

Line 20. << .. has advanced .. >>

Line 26. Add after << … in this way, .. >> something along the line of << ..the integration of information emerging from .. >>

Line 26. Change << … the ask ... >> to something more descriptive << .. to help us in the arduous task .. >>

Line 31, 46, 158, 306 and elsewhere. Give Latinisms in Italics << .. versus .. >>.

Line 128-145. Here consideration to the fact that not the same mechanisms often apply to terrestrial and aquatic (marine-freshwater) organisms should be given. Oxygen for example is 20 times lower in water than in air. The same point must be considered for body plans and body plans’ complexity, which differ greatly between terrestrial and aquatic organisms. This applying not only across phyla, but also within phyla, see for example body plan and physiological differences between terrestrial (reptiles, birds, mammals) and aquatic chordates (fish, and secondarily marine mammals), and also between terrestrial (insects and arachnids) and aquatic (crustaceans).

Line 153. “bake”?

Line 157. Unclear what << .. poorly buffered taxa … >> means. Do you mean << … organisms with poor homeostatic abilities .. >>?

Line 190-191. This is obvious! Conceptually tautological.

Line 242. What about intra and interspecific competition?

Line 320-329. I see the challenge here to integrate data that have a different “grain”, considering that physiological and ecological processes occur at different time scales, and are studied at different time scales and level of biological complexity.

Line 341. Incorrect terminology. We cannot say that seawater become more acidic, in fact it is less alkaline, but even so it is always best to refer to the phenomenon of “ocean acidification” or to talk about “a reduction in pH”, but to avoid to say “more acidic seawater”. It would be semantically incorrect. Also note that a reduction in pH it is but one of the symptoms of ocean acidification, as the increase in seawater pCO2 and the reduction in carbonate ions and omega values are also important element to mention. Finally remember that 0.44 an estimate for the global ocean, locally and regionally conditions vary greatly.

Line 351-355. I am not convinced of this point. Based on physiological abilities, rare species should be sensitive (more sensitive) in the early stage of extinction based on the fact that they possess narrower physiological windows of tolerance: based on extant organisms’ physiology of course, as we cannot define empirically that of extinct species. To provide an example, I have shown, and I am not the only one, that there is a thermal limit physiology of rare versus common species (Calosi et al. 2008 J. Biogeog., Calosi et al. 2008 Biol. Letts.), and that the breadth and central position of the latitudinal range of extent of modern species, as well as their southern and northern most geographical limits, are predicted by the breadth of their thermal window and their CTmax and CTmin, respectively. I bring this as an example among many.

However, I do not know whether in secondary phases of extinction, what were before rare versus common species, are more or less favoured.

All consider the term “long-term” confuses me, as I think here it is more relevant to state in which “phases” of the extinction we are: the early or primary stage when direct physiological effects are more relevant, or the later or secondary phases when indirect ecological effects matter more? Consider to change the discussion in this direction. Apologise if the “binary” view of an extinction I used here does not make justice to a far more-complex phenomenon.

Line 363-379. I agree fully with the statement, but what about other major drivers? Ocean acidification, changes in salinity, etc?

More in general your discussion only focuses on temperature and oxygen, and whilst I recognise the primary impacts of these major drivers, they are not the only one, and they do not occur in isolation: see for example works by Côté, Piggot, Carrier-Belleau and others on multi-stressors occurrence and non-linear effects on aquatic organisms.

Review: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R0/PR3

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Comments to Author: Review of the manuscript ”Selectivity of mass extinctions: patterns, processes, and future directions” submitted to Cambridge Prisms: Extinction by Payne et al.

This manuscript seeks to address mainly intrinsic processes governing the selectivity of mass extinction events. The manuscript is nicely written and in clear language. There are many good examples highlighting the different mass extinctions and I think therefore that this manuscript will serve as an excellent instalment within the field of mass extinctions as it reviews past research highlighting many relevant references in the field in a nice way while at the same way calls out specific directions within this research field that may of particular relevance for the current Anthropocene biodiversity crisis.

While I do not have any ‘objections’ to anything written I do have a few comments that the authors might find relevant. Firstly, it stumbled upon the statement in the abstract (l. 34 and again l. 108–126) that ‘geographic range matters less during mass extinction’. While this may be true, I just note that in the case of the Late Ordovician crisis, we do actually see a lot of selectivity with respect to geographic ranges (see, for instance, Finnegan et al., 2016, Proc. Roy. B, http://dx.doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2016.0007). This reference would also be relevant for lines 268–272 (aerobic habitat loss).

l. 132. Regarding body size, it could perhaps be of relevance to throw in a few references on the ‘lilliput-effect’ during mass extinctions. From the top of my head, I recall Huang Bing had a paper on the end-Ordovician and Richard Twitchett one on the end-Permian, but there are quite a few more.

Also, perhaps of relevance to the discussion in l. 222–388 (latitudinal extinction patterns), I think the authors might find a new preprint by Ontiveros et al: ‘Cooling Oceans Did Trigger Ordovician Biodiversifcation’ (it should be on Research Square) interesting as it models the latitudinal biodiversity gradient during the Middle Ordovician cooling, showing how cooling climate affected biodiversity accumulation positively (i.e. the opposite scenario than what is seen during extinctions where warming reduces biodiversity levels).

Minor pedantic edits:

l. 20: add ‘d’ after ‘advance’ ->’advanced’

l. 153: change ‘b’ to ‘m’ so that it reads ‘make’ instead of ‘bake’ :-)

To sum up, I enjoyed reading this very comprehensive and interesting manuscript and I, therefore, encourage publication almost as is.

-Christian Rasmussen.

Review: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R0/PR4

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Comments to Author: This is a concise and well-written review discussing patterns of extinction selectivity in the fossil record. A particular emphasis is placed on mass extinctions and how fossil data--when combined with Earth system models--may help to provide constraints on likely patterns of extinction stemming from anthropogenic global change. The paper provides an admirable overview of a diverse field and condenses the topic into a manageable size perfect for a general audience, student seminars, and so on. My only suggestions to the authors concern a few minor edits (issues of consistency, typos, parts that the authors themselves have flagged as needing an update) indicated below. I look forward to seeing the final version of this contribution.

Line 20: advance -> advanced

Line 31: changing -> change

Line 56: be sure to include social media summary

Line 153: bake -> make

Line 192: “marine” is indicated here, but is the approach potentially more general?

Line 212-213: condense this line. could read “a way for more unified marine and terrestrial studies” or similar.

Line 232: replace “-” with “:” given that it sets off a list of items?

Line 241 (and elsewhere): check that “2” is in subscript for O2

Line 399: replace “), (” with “;”

Lines 686, 689: subscript “2” for O2

Line 701: write out “low latitude vs high latitude”

Figure 1, panel B: Chondrichtyes -> Chondrichthyes

Figure 1 (and elsewhere): use shared conventions for axis labels; currently a mix of first word capitalized, all words capitalized, no words capitalized

Recommendation: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R0/PR5

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Comments to Author: Dear Dr. Payne and coauthors,

Thank you for your submission on selectivity of mass extinctions. It was an enjoyable read and will make a fine contribution with some minor revision. Of the three reviewers, two had very minor comments, mostly typological that should be easy to address. Reviewer #1 had more substantial comments reflecting minor disagreement on some points, clarification on others, and additional references that should be considered for citation to better reflect the literature. I encourage you to carefully consider their comments. With this last point about literature citation, I would agree that in some sections (the K/Pg terrestrial section, an area that I study) the coverage of the literature could be increased. I don’t mean to suggest that you need to cite my work but there are a number of relevant papers on extinction selectivity across the K/Pg in terrestrial biota (Field et al. 2018 Curr Biol; Hughes et al. 2021 Ecol & Evol; Wilson 2013 Paleobiology) that you should consider to bolster your survey of the literature.

We look forward to your revisions so that we can move this contribution to accepted.

Sincerely,

Greg Wilson Mantilla

Decision: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R0/PR6

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Author comment: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R1/PR8

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March 2, 2023

Dear Dr. Brook and Dr. Alroy,

We appreciate the opportunity to submit a revised version of our manuscript. We have addressed each of the reviewer and editor comments and hope that you will find the revised manuscript acceptable for publication. We append a point-by-point response below for your reference. We have accepted and adopted most of the suggestions. Some comments from reviewer 1 ask for substantially more detail or depth on certain topics. We have added content where possible but found that the edits required to fully accommodate many of these comments are beyond the scope of what we can accomplish within the length limits available.

Sincerely yours,

Jonathan Payne and co-authors

Handling Editor’s Comments to Author:

Handling Editor: Wilson Mantilla, Gregory

Comments to the Author:

Dear Dr. Payne and coauthors,

Thank you for your submission on selectivity of mass extinctions. It was an enjoyable read and will make a fine contribution with some minor revision. Of the three reviewers, two had very minor comments, mostly typological that should be easy to address. Reviewer #1 had more substantial comments reflecting minor disagreement on some points, clarification on others, and additional references that should be considered for citation to better reflect the literature. I encourage you to carefully consider their comments. With this last point about literature citation, I would agree that in some sections (the K/Pg terrestrial section, an area that I study) the coverage of the literature could be increased. I don’t mean to suggest that you need to cite my work but there are a number of relevant papers on extinction selectivity across the K/Pg in terrestrial biota (Field et al. 2018 Curr Biol; Hughes et al. 2021 Ecol & Evol; Wilson 2013 Paleobiology) that you should consider to bolster your survey of the literature.

Response: We have checked these papers. We note that the Hughes paper was already cited in the manuscript (line 85 of initial submission). We have added a reference to Wilson 2013, which we had missed, because it adds another trait (diet) that was not part of the list but is of obvious relevance and interest. As noted elsewhere, length limitations on this manuscript prevent fully comprehensive review of prior work or exhaustive citation lists on any given topic addressed here.

We look forward to your revisions so that we can move this contribution to accepted.

Sincerely,

Greg Wilson Mantilla

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Reviewer: 1

Comments to the Author

Review of the article by Payne et al. entitled “Selectivity of mass extinctions: patterns, processes, and

future directions”

The work by Jonathan L. Payne, Jood A. Al Aswad, Curtis Deutsch, Pedro M. Monarrez, Justin L. Penn and Pulkit Singh is really interesting y, and will make a significant contribution to the research field of extinctions, but also to the fields of global change ecology and biology. However, the article requires some work before to be ready for publication. Particularly, provide a more balanced discussion of the existing evidence and limitations of the approach proposed, verify semantics in few cases, and consider to integrate existing references and concept I highlight below. I believe you can relatively easy deal with the points I raise, and whilst the comments may lead to minor or major revision. I selected major only to enable you have more time if you require so.

Major Comments

Line 149-151. In my opinion, here, you are only skimming the surface. You correctly mention the simple Bauplans of heavy calcified marine invertebrates can in part explain the extinction patterns described in the fossil record for the end-Permian. The point is valid and interesting. I could argue, however, that Bauplan “simplicity” can be an advantage, enabling an organism to be less impacted directly by (at least some) environmental drivers, and indirectly possess the advantage to have lower metabolic-energetic requirements. In this sense, organisms with more complex, high-performance cardio-circulatory and respiration, systems may possess greater homeostatic abilities (see for example Melzner et al. 2009 for ocean acidification), but they will not be able to sustain high homeostatic activities for extended periods of time. Complexity requires more energy for maintenance and repair. Modern ecosystem collapse, such as in the North Sea following a switch of a keystone copepod species (from more to less nutritional), the loss in high level predators was documented. In addition, you seem to (I say this respectfully and with the best of intention to help you further improving your excellent work) miss the importance of the effects of other drivers, which can act along different pathways. For example, here specifically, you are not discussing of the direct (i.e. corrosion of carbonated structure) and indirect (e.g. increase in energetic cost for compensatory calcification to maintain a positive net mineralisation in light of passive dissolution) effects of ocean acidification conditions on marine heavy calcifiers. Please ref. to the literature on this topic. It is vast, but it needs to (even if synthetically) be acknowledged, as it is super relevant. I can refer to my own work to help, but the choice of ref. to use sits entirely with you: please see Calosi et al. 2019 Ann. Rev. Mar. Sc. for the discussion of putative mechanisms-pathways of action (see summary Figure 4), and to Calosi et al. 2017 Nat. Comms. and Findlay et al. 2011 Mar. Biol. Res. where differences in passive corrosion-net mineralisation in different population of the same species and different species are reported. but as I suggest, the literature on this topic is extensive.

Response: We agree with the reviewer that we are only scratching the surface here, and have only limited ability to do more given length limitations. Regarding direct and indirect acidification effects on heavy calcifier fitness, we have included a reference to Calosi et al., 2017. To the reviewer’s point about being able to argue the opposite – we do exactly that later in the paragraph, noting that the end-Cretaceous mass extinction shows an opposing direction of selectivity. We agree that body plan complexity can be an advantage or disadvantage depending on the circumstances and have noted that metabolic differences among higher taxa should be taken into account in future studies of taxonomic extinction selectivity. From our point of view, the key value of this review is showing that different events play out in different ways.

Line 193. I feel that in the paper, “ecological-ecosystemic” aspects of mass extinction should be discuss even more thoroughly. The authors do so, but more thinking and work should go into this to push the work and the MS to where it can, and deserved to be. Ensure to bring this as forward as possible in the MS. The method you propose is great to paint a picture on the direct (physiological) impacts of temperature and oxygen (not all drivers characterising current global change for example) but cannot be used to depict the indirect (ecological) impacts. You recognise the issue, but this can be stated even more clearly. You need to discuss in greater depth how best the tool you propose can be used, to what advantage, and where it cannot be used or used recognising the presence of limitations. In line 280 and following you could integrate the work by Reddin et al. 2020 NCC (which you cite) to the discussion, related to early extinctions being caused primarily by direct physiological effects, and later extinctions being caused by indirect ecological effects. All considered, I suggest to enhanced the discussion, and I fully recognise the authors’ effort in the intellectual integration of “physiological” and “ecological” extinctions …. and figure 4 is excellent by the way!!

Response: As noted in our response to the reviewer’s prior comment, we are constrained in terms of how much depth we can use to address these points by the length limit on the manuscript. We appreciate the desire for more depth but believe that this is generally beyond the scope available to us. We have already made the point that the reviewer is emphasizing here in the preceding paragraph. We added another citation to Reddin’s work earlier in that paragraph, where it was warranted, but have chosen to otherwise leave the text unchanged. We agree with and understand the reviewer’s desire to see more depth in the discussion of these factors but find ourselves constrained by the length limit of the manuscript.

Line 110, 203-204, 280 and elsewhere. Please the first time you mention “tolerance” and “resilience” ensure to provide a definition in parenthesis: 110 and 204, respectively. I have the impression that in most cases you use it “correctly” but in other not (ex. line 282. Tolerance is the ability of a biological system to resist change following or under a perturbation, and resilience is the ability of a biological system to come back to the original stable state it was in after a perturbation (i.e. resilience is the inverse of the time needed to get back to the starting status).

Response: We have provided greater specificity to our use of these terms where relevant in the text.

Line 266. Pre-adaptation does not exist. It is an erroneous concept. An organism cannot be adapted to something it has not experienced before. And if it is adapted to be able to face a certain challenge, it is because it has already experienced it in his phylogenetic history, or it has been selected to be tolerant to another stressor which grants it “protection” to the stressor we are investigating. In either of these cases, we talk of “exaptation” (i.e. existing adaptation), please see Gould’s seminal work on this topic.

Response: We agree with the reviewer and regret the poor phrasing here. We were not arguing for pre-adaptation in this sense but rather for the fact that some species were already adapted to the conditions that become more widespread after the extinction. We have edited to the text to read “…species previously occupying the tropics would already have been adapted to warm, low-O2 conditions that became more widespread”.

For your interest, we have recently published a work on the diversity and evolution of thermal limits, testing for the presence of paleo signals on these traits, and we found one. It was not the strongest of signals of the evolutionary drivers we investigated, but it was non the less significant. In short, the era of emergence of a taxonomic group has a significant influence of defining its thermal limits. See Bennet et al. 2021 Nat. Comms. “The evolution of critical thermal limits of life on Earth”.

Response: This is an interesting finding. We have added a citation to this study within the paragraph on climate warming within Section 3.2.

Line 287-289. Consider to integrate here and elsewhere some discussion of the importance of extreme and intense, but temporary, climatic-environmental events. These are primary drivers for local and regional extinction, helping shaping physiological diversity (see for example (1) for the CEH Bozinovic et al. 2011 Ann. Rev. Ecol. Evol. Syst. and references within, and (2) for extreme drivers as evolutionary driver for thermal limits Bennet et al. 2021 Nat. Comms.) participating to global extinctions. I think for example to Marine Heat Waves, intense salinity changes, intense upwelling events, etc.

Response: We added an example of a regional extirpation connected to fluctuating aerobic habitat at a relevant location in the text. Given that the focus of this review is on patterns of global extinction selectivity and their drivers, and due to space constraints, we refrain from discussing short-term, regionalized extreme events in further detail, which have a strong influence on patterns of local diversity and extirpation.

Minor Comments

Line 19. Specify “differences” in what to make the statement explicit and clearer to readers.

Response: Excellent point. We have rephrased as: differences in morphological, ecological, and physiological traits

Line 20. << .. has advanced .. >>

Done

Line 26. Add after << … in this way, .. >> something along the line of << ..the integration of information emerging from .. >>

Done

Line 26. Change << … the ask ... >> to something more descriptive << .. to help us in the arduous task .. >>

Done

Line 31, 46, 158, 306 and elsewhere. Give Latinisms in Italics << .. versus .. >>.

Done

Line 128-145. Here consideration to the fact that not the same mechanisms often apply to terrestrial and aquatic (marine-freshwater) organisms should be given. Oxygen for example is 20 times lower in water than in air. The same point must be considered for body plans and body plans’ complexity, which differ greatly between terrestrial and aquatic organisms. This applying not only across phyla, but also within phyla, see for example body plan and physiological differences between terrestrial (reptiles, birds, mammals) and aquatic chordates (fish, and secondarily marine mammals), and also between terrestrial (insects and arachnids) and aquatic (crustaceans).

Response: This is a great point that was not made clearly enough in the manuscript. We have rephrased the second sentence of this paragraph to draw this distinction out explicitly. Due to length limits, we have not been able to incorporate a more extensive discussion of this issue.

Line 153. “bake”?

Corrected to “make”

Line 157. Unclear what << .. poorly buffered taxa … >> means. Do you mean << … organisms with poor homeostatic abilities .. >>?

We rephrased to “taxa thought to be more sensitivity to ocean acidification”

Line 190-191. This is obvious! Conceptually tautological.

Fair enough. Sentence has been removed.

Line 242. What about intra and interspecific competition?

Feeding, growth, motion, etc, are all activities that may be part of this intra and interspecific competition. Therefore we have not edited the text here.

Line 320-329. I see the challenge here to integrate data that have a different “grain”, considering that physiological and ecological processes occur at different time scales, and are studied at different time scales and level of biological complexity.

Good point. We have added a sentence paraphrasing this point from the reviewer.

Line 341. Incorrect terminology. We cannot say that seawater become more acidic, in fact it is less alkaline, but even so it is always best to refer to the phenomenon of “ocean acidification” or to talk about “a reduction in pH”, but to avoid to say “more acidic seawater”. It would be semantically incorrect. Also note that a reduction in pH it is but one of the symptoms of ocean acidification, as the increase in seawater pCO2 and the reduction in carbonate ions and omega values are also important element to mention. Finally remember that 0.44 an estimate for the global ocean, locally and regionally conditions vary greatly.

We have rephrased to say “pH is expected to decrease, on average, by 0.44 pH units by the end of the 21st century” to make the phrasing accurate with respect to acidity/alkalinity and spatial complexity.

Line 351-355. I am not convinced of this point. Based on physiological abilities, rare species should be sensitive (more sensitive) in the early stage of extinction based on the fact that they possess narrower physiological windows of tolerance: based on extant organisms’ physiology of course, as we cannot define empirically that of extinct species. To provide an example, I have shown, and I am not the only one, that there is a thermal limit physiology of rare versus common species (Calosi et al. 2008 J. Biogeog., Calosi et al. 2008 Biol. Letts.), and that the breadth and central position of the latitudinal range of extent of modern species, as well as their southern and northern most geographical limits, are predicted by the breadth of their thermal window and their CTmax and CTmin, respectively. I bring this as an example among many.

However, I do not know whether in secondary phases of extinction, what were before rare versus common species, are more or less favoured.

All consider the term “long-term” confuses me, as I think here it is more relevant to state in which “phases” of the extinction we are: the early or primary stage when direct physiological effects are more relevant, or the later or secondary phases when indirect ecological effects matter more? Consider to change the discussion in this direction. Apologise if the “binary” view of an extinction I used here does not make justice to a far more-complex phenomenon.

Response: We appreciate the reviewer’s comment here and have edited to remove the sentence regarding the IUCN Red List. Instead, we have added a final sentence to the paragraph highlighting the challenge noted so nicely by the reviewer, about connecting the primary and secondary (physiological and ecological) phases of extinction within predictive models.

Line 363-379. I agree fully with the statement, but what about other major drivers? Ocean acidification, changes in salinity, etc?

Response: Good point. We have added a sentence to make this more explicit for the readers: Further work to integrate the effects of changes in pH, pCO2, salinity, and other key environmental variables into physiological performance models has the potential to make these models more general and accurate in reconstructing the causes of past extinction and predicting the consequences of future global change.

More in general your discussion only focuses on temperature and oxygen, and whilst I recognise the primary impacts of these major drivers, they are not the only one, and they do not occur in isolation: see for example works by Côté, Piggot, Carrier-Belleau and others on multi-stressors occurrence and non-linear effects on aquatic organisms.

Response: Although we have focused on oxygen and temperature in the description of the Metabolic Index, the revised text acknowledges the importance of other stressors for more complete understanding of physiological stresses leading to extinction. Due to limits of space, we have not been able to address each of these in detail.

Reviewer: 2

Comments to the Author

Review of the manuscript ”Selectivity of mass extinctions: patterns, processes, and future directions” submitted to Cambridge Prisms: Extinction by Payne et al.

This manuscript seeks to address mainly intrinsic processes governing the selectivity of mass extinction events. The manuscript is nicely written and in clear language. There are many good examples highlighting the different mass extinctions and I think therefore that this manuscript will serve as an excellent instalment within the field of mass extinctions as it reviews past research highlighting many relevant references in the field in a nice way while at the same way calls out specific directions within this research field that may of particular relevance for the current Anthropocene biodiversity crisis.

While I do not have any ‘objections’ to anything written I do have a few comments that the authors might find relevant. Firstly, it stumbled upon the statement in the abstract (l. 34 and again l. 108–126) that ‘geographic range matters less during mass extinction’. While this may be true, I just note that in the case of the Late Ordovician crisis, we do actually see a lot of selectivity with respect to geographic ranges (see, for instance, Finnegan et al., 2016, Proc. Roy. B, http://dx.doi.org/10.1098/rspb.2016.0007). This reference would also be relevant for lines 268–272 (aerobic habitat loss).

Response: We have added the citations suggested here. We believe our characterization of selectivity as present during both mass extinction and background intervals but generally more pronounced during background intervals remains an accurate description of comparative results.

l. 132. Regarding body size, it could perhaps be of relevance to throw in a few references on the ‘lilliput-effect’ during mass extinctions. From the top of my head, I recall Huang Bing had a paper on the end-Ordovician and Richard Twitchett one on the end-Permian, but there are quite a few more.

Response: The Lilliput Effect is an interesting observation, describing size reduction within (and sometimes among) species across extinction events. However, it is often documented by showing changes in size distributions before and after extinction events. Such changes result from the combined effects of extinction and origination. Consequently, many studies documenting the Lilliput Effect do not provide an explicit analysis of extinction selectivity and so are difficult to cite as evidence in this context. The Huang et al. (2010) study on the Ordovician and the Twitchett (2007) study on the end-Permian both fall into this category.

Also, perhaps of relevance to the discussion in l. 222–388 (latitudinal extinction patterns), I think the authors might find a new preprint by Ontiveros et al: ‘Cooling Oceans Did Trigger Ordovician Biodiversifcation’ (it should be on Research Square) interesting as it models the latitudinal biodiversity gradient during the Middle Ordovician cooling, showing how cooling climate affected biodiversity accumulation positively (i.e. the opposite scenario than what is seen during extinctions where warming reduces biodiversity levels).

Response: We thank the reviewer for highlighting this new study. As it is not yet peer reviewed and the focus of this review is on extinction selectivity, as opposed to broader evolutionary processes, we have chosen not to cite it in this review.

Minor pedantic edits:

l. 20: add ‘d’ after ‘advance’ ->’advanced’

Done

l. 153: change ‘b’ to ‘m’ so that it reads ‘make’ instead of ‘bake’ :-)

Done

To sum up, I enjoyed reading this very comprehensive and interesting manuscript and I, therefore, encourage publication almost as is.

-Christian Rasmussen.

Reviewer: 3

Comments to the Author

This is a concise and well-written review discussing patterns of extinction selectivity in the fossil record. A particular emphasis is placed on mass extinctions and how fossil data--when combined with Earth system models--may help to provide constraints on likely patterns of extinction stemming from anthropogenic global change. The paper provides an admirable overview of a diverse field and condenses the topic into a manageable size perfect for a general audience, student seminars, and so on. My only suggestions to the authors concern a few minor edits (issues of consistency, typos, parts that the authors themselves have flagged as needing an update) indicated below. I look forward to seeing the final version of this contribution.

Line 20: advance -> advanced

Done

Line 31: changing -> change

Done

Line 56: be sure to include social media summary

Done

Line 153: bake -> make

Done

Line 192: “marine” is indicated here, but is the approach potentially more general?

Response: It is more general. We have revised by removing the specification about marine species.

Line 212-213: condense this line. could read “a way for more unified marine and terrestrial studies” or similar.

Response: We agree with the reviewer and have adopted their suggested phrasing.

Line 232: replace “-” with “:” given that it sets off a list of items?

Done

Line 241 (and elsewhere): check that “2” is in subscript for O2

We have rechecked and fixed these cases.

Line 399: replace “), (” with “;”

Done

Lines 686, 689: subscript “2” for O2

Done

Line 701: write out “low latitude vs high latitude”

Done

Figure 1, panel B: Chondrichtyes -> Chondrichthyes

Done

Figure 1 (and elsewhere): use shared conventions for axis labels; currently a mix of first word capitalized, all words capitalized, no words capitalized

Done

Review: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R1/PR9

Conflict of interest statement

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Comments

Comments to Author: Thank you for addressing previous comments. I caught only a few issues here, all of them very minor and easily sorted:

Throughout: there are variable abbreviations with the same meaning (Ma, Mya).

Line 141: fish -> fishes.

Line 165: sensitivity -> sensitive.

Lines 352-3: is it redundant to indicate oceans experienced change to “ocean biogeochemistry”?

Recommendation: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R1/PR10

Comments

Comments to Author: Dear Authors,

Thank you for the careful revisions made to your manuscript “Selectivity of mass extinctions: patterns, processes, and future directions.” We are happy at this time to accept this excellent contribution to the journal. The reviewer made a few very minor suggested corrections that we would like you to address before publication. Again, we greatly appreciate the attention to your revision process and the excellent resulting product.

Sincerely,

Greg Wilson Mantilla

Decision: Selectivity of mass extinctions: Patterns, processes, and future directions — R1/PR11

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