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Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  10 September 2025

Janus Wong*
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA Department of Psychology, University of Southern California, Los Angeles, CA, USA
Tina Xu
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA
Cheenar Shah
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA Center for Global Mental Health Equity, Department of Psychiatry and Behavioral Health, George Washington University, Washington, DC , USA
Liam Miccoli
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA
Josheka Chauhan
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA
Nora Garbuno Inigo
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA
Kendall Pfeffer
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA Icahn School of Medicine, Mount Sinai Hospital
Dana Ergas Slachevsky
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA
Arian Holman
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA
Eva Wong
Affiliation:
Office of Community Mental Health, New York City Mayor, New York, NY, USA
Heather Day
Affiliation:
Office of Community Mental Health, New York City Mayor, New York, NY, USA
Kala Ganesh
Affiliation:
Office of Community Mental Health, New York City Mayor, New York, NY, USA
Eliot Assoudeh
Affiliation:
Office of Community Mental Health, New York City Mayor, New York, NY, USA
Brandon A. Kohrt
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health Equity, Department of Psychiatry and Behavioral Health, George Washington University, Washington, DC , USA
Adam D. Brown*
Affiliation:
Center for Global Mental Health, Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY, USA Department of Psychiatry, New York University Grossman School of Medicine
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Corresponding authors: Adam D. Brown and Janus Wong; Emails: brownad@newschool.edu; januswon@usc.edu
Corresponding authors: Adam D. Brown and Janus Wong; Emails: brownad@newschool.edu; januswon@usc.edu
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Abstract

An increasing number of studies have sought to explore the applicability of scalable mental health interventions to bridge the adolescent mental health treatment gap. This study aimed to adapt the World Health Organization’s mental health intervention Early Adolescent Skills for Emotion (EASE) for urban communities in New York City (NYC). Following the mental health Cultural Adaptation and Contextualization for Implementation framework and in collaboration with three Brooklyn community-based organizations and the NYC Mayor’s Office of Community Mental Health, the intervention was intensively workshopped through eight weekly sessions with adolescents (n = 18) and caregivers (n = 12). Documentation of the process followed the Reporting Cultural Adaptation in Psychological Trials criteria. Surface adaptations involved revising the storybook to reflect key challenges faced by adolescents and caregivers of these communities, such as social media usage, economic stressors, and racial diversity. Deep adaptations addressed cultural concepts of distress by incorporating topics such as identity exploration, socioemotional learning, and the mind–body connection. Feedback from stakeholders indicated that the basic components of EASE are relevant for members in their communities, but additional changes would foster greater engagement and community building. These findings will inform upcoming program implementation across NYC and may guide adaptation work in other contexts.

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Figure 1. Process of adaptation guided by the mhCACI framework (Sangraula et al., 2021).

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Table 1. Sociodemographic characteristics of adolescents

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Figure 2. Adaptation of Feelings Pot to Feelings Canvas in Adolescent Activity 1.7 (Identifying personal feelings). (A) Feelings Pot in the original manual. (B) Feelings Canvas, which is the adapted version of the Feelings Pot, in the current manual. These images are reproduced and adapted from Early Adolescent Skills for Emotions. Geneva: World Health Organization and the United Nations Children’s Fund (UNICEF), 2023. License: CC BY-NC-SA 3.0 IGO. WHO is not responsible for the content or accuracy of this translation/adaptation.

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Figure 3. Slow Breathing infographic in Adolescent Activity 2.4 (Calming my body). The infographic provides in-depth information about how the Slow Breathing strategy is connected with the nervous system.

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Figure 4. Purpose Diagram in Adolescent Activities 3.4 and 4.3 (Changing my actions); 6.5 (Completing the Purpose Diagram); and 7.3 (Brighter Futures). Through several Purpose Diagram activities, adolescents complete a full Purpose Diagram.

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Figure 5. Adaptation of the Vicious Cycle Poster in Adolescent Activity 3.3 (Feelings and actions). (A) Vicious Cycle Poster in the original version. (B) Adapted version of the Vicious Cycle Poster in the current manual. These images are reproduced and adapted from Early Adolescent Skills for Emotions. Geneva: World Health Organization and the United Nations Children’s Fund (UNICEF), 2023. License: CC BY-NC-SA 3.0 IGO. WHO is not responsible for the content or accuracy of this translation/adaptation.

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Table 2. Average element ratings for core EASE elements

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Author comment: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R0/PR1

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Dear Professor Bass and Professor Chibanda,

My co-authors and I are writing to express our interest in submitting a manuscript to Cambridge Prisms: Global Mental Health.

We appreciate the opportunity to submit a manuscript for a recently completed study entitled, “Community-based adaptation of Early Adolescent Skills for Emotions for Urban Adolescents and Caregivers in New York City” co-authored by Janus Wong, Tina Xu, Cheenar Shah, Liam Miccoli, Josheka Chauhan, Nora Garbuno Iñigo, Kendall Pfeffer, Dana Ergas Slachevsky, Arian Holman, Eva Wong, Heather Day, Kala Ganesh, Eliot Assoudeh, Brandon A. Kohrt, and Adam D. Brown.

Despite the growing need for adolescent mental health services in the US, there remain significant barriers to care, with access to treatment especially inequitable for ethnic minorities (Agency for Healthcare Research and Quality, 2023; Alegría et al., 2008; Weersing, 2022). Globally, a growing volume of research has looked into how task-sharing interventions may be implemented to increase access to mental health services and build capacity in low-resourced settings (Jordans et al., 2021; Karyotaki et al., 2022; Purgato et al., 2021; Tol et al., 2020; Turrini et al., 2022; Zhang et al., 2020). However, this approach is somewhat newer in the US. Given the mental health burden and structural inequities faced by ethnically minoritized adolescents in the US, the current study aims to fill this services and treatment gap by introducing Early Adolescent Skills for Emotions (EASE), a recently-developed WHO psychological intervention for adolescents and caregivers, to the US context (WHO & UNICEF, 2023). As the first phase of a wider effort to implement and evaluate EASE in New York City (NYC), this manuscript reports on the cultural adaptation process of EASE. The adaptation process was a collaborative and iterative process between researchers at the New School for Social Research (NSSR), local government at the New York City Mayor’s Office for Community Mental Health (OCMH), three Brooklyn-based community organizations. Through a series of focus group discussions (FGDs) with adolescents (n=18) and caregivers (n=12) from the community organizations, the intervention was delivered by the NSSR research team, and feedback was collected from the stakeholders to inform subsequent intervention changes. We were guided by the mental health Cultural Adaptation and Contextualization for Implementation (mhCACI) framework (Sangraula et al., 2021) and the Reporting Cultural Adaptation in Psychological Trials (RECAPT) criteria (Heim et al., 2021), as well as Community-Based Participatory Research (CBPR) guidelines to recognize the expertise and strengths of community members.

The study found that both deep and surface adaptations were necessary to enhance EASE’s acceptability, relevance, and engagement for the NYC community. Notable cultural concepts of distress included a lack of understanding of distressing emotions, a lack of knowledge of how to respond to emotions, and the adolescents’ need to hide their emotions. We also identified community needs for inclusivity, knowledge-based explanation of psychological benefits, and building purpose and identity. Based on these findings, we made deep adaptation changes to the intervention, including the addition of activities such as the Purpose Diagram and a poster to emphasize the mind-body connection of the breathing strategy. Additionally, contextual information indicated the salience of NYC-specific themes such as gender norms, digital technology, and economic pressures, which were incorporated in the intervention’s storybook and guided discussions. We also aligned framing of the intervention to the goals of social and emotional learning and community-building, based on feedback from the FGDs and OCMH. Surface adaptations included changes to the storybook text and illustrations to be more representative of the spoken language and people in NYC. We also found that virtual sessions were more accessible for caregivers, and in-person sessions were more engaging for adolescents.

Thank you very much for your consideration. We sincerely look forward to hearing from you.

Best,

Janus Wong

Review: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

I appreciate the authors’ use of a Community-Based Participatory Research (CBPR) approach, which is well described and grounded in the literature. This approach strengthens the manuscript and aligns well with contemporary best practices in community-based intervention research. However, to enhance clarity, coherence, and scientific rigor, I recommend addressing the points outlined below. Strengthening the structure, refining the discussion, and ensuring consistency between sections will greatly improve the manuscript’s quality and impact.

1. Introduction:

• The aim of the study should be clearly stated. While the manuscript provides background and context, the specific objectives should be explicitly outlined to help the reader understand the focus of the study.

2. Methods:

• The manuscript refers to caregivers, but it does not specify who they are. The authors should define caregivers explicitly, including their relationship to the adolescents (e.g., parents, guardians, extended family, or others). Clarifying this will enhance the reader’s understanding of the sample population.

• The acronym FGDs appears in the text, and I assume it stands for Focus Group Discussions. However, the first instance of this term should include the full phrase followed by the acronym in parentheses to ensure clarity.

• I appreciate the structured phased approach presented in the Methods section. However, this structure is not maintained in the Results section, making it difficult to follow the progression of the study.

3. Results:

• The Results section should mirror the structured phases used in the Methods section. This consistency will help readers follow the study’s findings logically and improve the clarity of the narrative.

4. Discussion:

• The opening of the Discussion states that the cultural adaptation process was an important step toward implementation. While this is true, it is neither novel nor well-argued in the text. The authors should better justify this point by connecting it to their findings or relevant literature.

• The section discussing future research directions at the end of discussion is somewhat vague. The authors should provide more specific recommendations for future studies.

5. Limitations:

• The limitations section should go beyond merely stating constraints. The authors should discuss the impact of these limitations on the study and justify their methodological choices. A more reflective and supportive discussion will strengthen this section.

Review: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Community-based adaptation of Early Adolescent Skills for Emotions for Urban Adolescents and Caregivers in New York City

Thank you for the opportunity to review this important article. Providing culturally-responsive mental health programs is an important consideration to support the mental health and well-being of adolescents. This article provides an important example of a systematic approach to adapting existing evidence-based mental health programs to new contexts and populations. Moreover, the participants’ insights into culturally-relevant mental health terms and health promoting activities will be useful for other mental health programs that serve these cultures. The article illustrates the importance of exploring the cultural responsivity of a program before implementation and program evaluation as a “critical first step towards successful implementation.”

I believe the article would benefit from some restructuring to contribute to clarity. There are also a few places where clarifying information would be helpful. To make room for these additions, there are some redundancies throughout the paper that could be removed (e.g., between results and discussion section).

Some areas and questions to consider before publication:

- I strongly recommend reviewing APA guidelines for writing about Racial and Ethnic identities to reconsider some of the terms used in the article.

- Consider providing more information the cultural groups to whom the program will be offered in Brooklyn and how the focus group participants were identified for participation.

- In procedures, provide a brief description of the mhCACI framework so that the reader can evaluate your adherence to the framework. Understanding the rationale and sequence for each step would help readers understand the following descriptions of each step.

- For Phase 1, how did the first author and PI determine the core components? Did they review extant program evaluations conducted in other contexts?

- I found it a bit confusing that the in-depth literature review takes place in Step 2 to identify the program of interest after you have determined the programs core components. Having a clearer description of the mhCACI framework beforehand might help with this confusion.

- Participant Characteristics: Are the racial identity terms utilized those identified by participants (e.g., do participants refer to themselves as American Indians)? Do the participants represent the cultural groups who the EASE program will serve? What are the demographic characteristic of the parents/caregivers who took part in the focus groups?

- Train the trainers – had the research team completed a train-the-trainer training for the EASE Program? What role did they play given that the training was labelled as “self-guided.” Who were trained as facilitators and what are their demopgrahics? I found it a bit confusing that PM+ trainers were referenced here. What is the relationship of PM+ to EASE?

- 4. Translation of manual – what type of English was the manual written in? Did the language and terminology make sense to participants? Was any wording changed so that it was more relevant to the context in which the program was being offered?

- Results

o Consider providing a brief definition of each RECAPT criteria for unfamiliar readers, for example cultural concepts of distress.

o Re: cultural concepts of distress, I believe you are looking for how different cultures conceptualize distress. I’m not sure “a lack of understanding of distressing emotions” makes sense here, especially since it sounds like the adolescents came up with 50 terms describing psychological distress if I understood correctly. Did you mean that the vocabulary used in the original program did not align with participants’ cultural concepts of distress? As you go into the next section, it seems like participants have a lot of clarity on what distress looks like in their cultures.

o The choice of new additions to the program based on adolescent feedback would be strengthened by adding citations that support the efficacy for these strategies for mental health promotion. This would also apply to the sections on SEL and community building. What evidence in the literature indicates that the activities they choose promote mental health, social and emotional competencies and/or community building in adolescents?

o I found it a bit difficult to go back and forth between adolescents’ and caregiver feedback. Consider separating results. Also, were caregivers providing feedback on the activities for adolescents or were there separate caregiver materials? More clarity on this throughout the paper would be helpful.

o For activities that were ranked, is there a short, one-sentence description of what the activity is somewhere? Maybe it could be added to the table in which the results were presented?

o It would be helpful to introduce some procedures from qualitative research to strengthen study design (e.g., saturation, trustworthiness).

Recommendation: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R0/PR4

Comments

Please address all the revisions suggested by the reviewers.

Decision: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R0/PR5

Comments

No accompanying comment.

Author comment: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R1/PR6

Comments

Dear Professor Bass and Professor Chibanda,

Thank you so much for overseeing the manuscript submission and review process for our paper “Community-based adaptation of Early Adolescent Skills for Emotions for Urban Adolescents and Caregivers in New York City” at Cambridge Prisms: Global Mental Health. We truly appreciate the opportunity to submit our paper and are deeply grateful for the feedback we received.

We are writing to resubmit our paper based on the invaluable comments we received. Please note that the revised documents are marked with “[Revision].” Please also see our point-by-point response to the comments provided by reviewers in the cover letter section. These changes can be found in the tracked changes mode of the revised word documents.

Thank you and the reviewers once again for your time and effort in reviewing our manuscript, and we look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

Janus Wong1, Tina Xu1, Cheenar Shah1,2, Liam Miccoli1, Josheka Chauhan1, Nora Garbuno Iñigo1, Kendall Pfeffer1,3, Dana Ergas Slachevsky1, Arian Holman1, Eva Wong4, Heather Day4, Kala Ganesh4, Eliot Assoudeh4, Brandon A. Kohrt2, Adam D. Brown1,5*

1 Department of Psychology, The New School for Social Research, New York, NY

2George Washington University, Center for Global Mental Health Equity, Department of Psychiatry and Behavioral Health, Washington, D.C. 20037

3 Icahn School of Medicine, Mount Sinai Hospital

4New York City Mayor’s Office of Community Mental Health, New York, NY

5Department of Psychiatry, New York University Grossman School of Medicine

*For Correspondence:

Adam D. Brown

Department of Psychology

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brownad@newschool.edu

1. Introduction:

The aim of the study should be clearly stated. While the manuscript provides background and context, the specific objectives should be explicitly outlined to help the reader understand the focus of the study.

Thank you very much for that recommendation. In the revised version of the manuscript we have since clarified the aim of the study in the introduction section.

2. Methods:

The manuscript refers to caregivers, but it does not specify who they are. The authors should define caregivers explicitly, including their relationship to the adolescents (e.g., parents, guardians, extended family, or others). Clarifying this will enhance the reader’s understanding of the sample population.

We appreciate you pointing out the need to provide greater clarification as to who we are referring to when describing the caregivers who participated in the adaptation process. We have now clarified within the Participants sections in the Methods section of the manuscript:

The acronym FGDs appears in the text, and I assume it stands for Focus Group Discussions. However, the first instance of this term should include the full phrase followed by the acronym in parentheses to ensure clarity.

Yes, thank you very much. FGD does indeed refer to Focus Group Discussions. The first use of this phrase is spelled out with the inclusion of the acronym, which can be found under Participants in the Methods section.

I appreciate the structured phased approach presented in the Methods section. However, this structure is not maintained in the Results section, making it difficult to follow the progression of the study.

Thank you very much for pointing that out. We have since aligned the structure of the Results to be more consistent with how the findings are reported in the Method section. The current version of the manuscript more clearly states that the Results section adopts a structured approach based on the RECAPT criteria (Heim et al., 2021a). This is clarified under Adaptation in the Results section - An overview of the RECAPT criteria is included in the same section to more methodologically explain what the criteria entails and why it makes sense for us to report results accordingly. We also clarified each criterion with a brief explanation under their subheadings. We again appreciate this comment as we feel that this strengthened the reporting of our findings.

3. Results:

The Results section should mirror the structured phases used in the Methods section. This consistency will help readers follow the study’s findings logically and improve the clarity of the narrative.

We agree and have since added information on the RECAPT criteria to explain the chosen structure for the Results section. We also followed the guidance of Aeschlimann et al. (2024), an adaptation study on another scalable mental health intervention, when we wrote this manuscript, Aeschlimann et al.’s (2024) structure is according to the RECAPT criteria as well. This is clarified under Adaptation in the Results section - An overview of the RECAPT criteria is included in the same section to more methodologically explain what the criteria entails and why it makes sense for us to report results accordingly.

4. Discussion:

The opening of the Discussion states that the cultural adaptation process was an important step toward implementation. While this is true, it is neither novel nor well-argued in the text. The authors should better justify this point by connecting it to their findings or relevant literature.

We agree with this comment. We have since made significant changes to this point within the Discussion section. In particular, we have since cited and highlighted how previous studies, frameworks, and perspectives have underscored the importance of adaptation prior to implementation. Additionally, we try to more closely link how the feedback obtained by stakeholders may increase the success of implementation. We also cite how studies, like this one, are likely to benefit from the inclusion of youth in adaptation work. Finally, we suggest that the adaptation process could be viewed as a broader form of community-building, which other work has shown to be important for implementation of community-based mental health interventions.

The section discussing future research directions at the end of discussion is somewhat vague. The authors should provide more specific recommendations for future studies.

Thank you for the feedback. We agree that specific recommendations would enrich this article. We have since included specific recommendations, such as testing the potential benefits of our adaptation given the cultural invariance model, conducting RCTs to determine if our adaptations were significantly more beneficial, and examining the most effective adaptation strategies.

5. Limitations:

The limitations section should go beyond merely stating constraints. The authors should discuss the impact of these limitations on the study and justify their methodological choices. A more reflective and supportive discussion will strengthen this section.

We agree and have since expanded on the limitations section to justify our methodological choices and make the discussion more reflective (e.g. why we only reported on the adaptation process and not implementation at this stage, why we did not address saturation, and why we opened up the FGDs to more participants to address the fluctuating attendance).

Reviewer: 2

Some areas and questions to consider before publication:

I strongly recommend reviewing APA guidelines for writing about Racial and Ethnic identities to reconsider some of the terms used in the article.

Thank you for that excellent suggestion. We carefully reviewed the guidelines and edited terminology with regards to race and ethnicity that is in line with APA guidelines (e.g. “people with color” and “underrepresented groups”).

Consider providing more information about the cultural groups to whom the program will be offered in Brooklyn and how the focus group participants were identified for participation.

Thank you very much. Additional information about how the focus group participants were identified for participation has since been added under Methods and Participants.

Additional information about how the focus group participants were identified for participation has since been added under Results and Participant characteristics.

In procedures, provide a brief description of the mhCACI framework so that the reader can evaluate your adherence to the framework. Understanding the rationale and sequence for each step would help readers understand the following descriptions of each step.

We added an overview of the mhCACI framework directly under the Procedures and feel that the paper is strong as a result. Thank you for the suggestion.

For Phase 1, how did the first author and PI determine the core components? Did they review extant program evaluations conducted in other contexts?

In the current version of the manuscript we have now attempted to clarify that the first author and PI reviewed the intervention protocol and previous trials of EASE under Methods → Procedures → Phase 1: Pre-condition.

I found it a bit confusing that the in-depth literature review takes place in Step 2 to identify the program of interest after you have determined the program’s core components. Having a clearer description of the mhCACI framework beforehand might help with this confusion.

We can understand that this might have been somewhat confusing. Now we have an extended overview of the mhCACI framework directly under Procedures, we hope that this is clear.

Participant Characteristics: Are the racial identity terms utilized those identified by participants (e.g., do participants refer to themselves as American Indians)? Do the participants represent the cultural groups who the EASE program will serve? What are the demographic characteristics of the parents/caregivers who took part in the focus groups?

Excellent point to clarify. We have since made revisions in the manuscript under Participant characteristics that the racial identity terms came from categories used by the US Census Bureau. Also clarified there that the participant group reflects the communities and cultures that EASE aims to serve. We mentioned at the bottom that we did not manage to collect demographic characteristics of the caregivers.

Train the trainers – had the research team completed a train-the-trainer training for the EASE Program? What role did they play given that the training was labelled as “self-guided.” Who were trained as facilitators and what are their demographics? I found it a bit confusing that PM+ trainers were referenced here. What is the relationship of PM+ to EASE?

We have since attempted to clarify this in the manuscript under the Methods → Phase II: Pre-implementation - 3. Training of Trainers section. Given the extensive experience the New School team has with adapting and implementing similar interventions (PM+), this team received approval from WHO to carry out a self-guided training with ad hoc technical support from WHO as needed (see manuscript: reviewing the EASE manual in detail and discussing techniques to strengthen the key mechanisms of action). We clarified who were trained as EASE trainers (first and second authors); their demographic characteristics can be found in Supplemental File 1. We clarified the relationship of PM+ to EASE (similar brief, transdiagnostic interventions developed by the WHO) to explain how the study PI, a PM+ trainer, supported the TOT process. We hope that this helps to clarify what is meant by ToT in this process.

Translation of manual – what type of English was the manual written in? Did the language and terminology make sense to participants? Was any wording changed so that it was more relevant to the context in which the program was being offered?

We attempted to clarify this under Phase II: Pre-implementation - 4. Translation of manual under the Methods section, please see below:

Results

Consider providing a brief definition of each RECAPT criteria for unfamiliar readers, for example cultural concepts of distress.

Thank you for your suggestion. We have since added this to the manuscript under each RECAPT heading in the Results section.

Re: cultural concepts of distress, I believe you are looking for how different cultures conceptualize distress. I’m not sure “a lack of understanding of distressing emotions” makes sense here, especially since it sounds like the adolescents came up with 50 terms describing psychological distress if I understood correctly. Did you mean that the vocabulary used in the original program did not align with participants’ cultural concepts of distress? As you go into the next section, it seems like participants have a lot of clarity on what distress looks like in their cultures.

Thank you for pointing that out. That is correct. The youth had suggestions for how to label distress but adaptations were needed to align them more with the way in which they were described in the original version of EASE. Regarding the 50 terms describing psychological distress - the current manuscript reads “Adaptations were made based on these results to add a “Feelings Wheel”, which introduced a richer emotional vocabulary necessary for the identification and communication of nuanced feelings containing over fifty emotion words.” This meant that the research team added the Feelings Wheel to introduce the vocabulary, indicating that the adolescents did not come up with the 50 terms themselves.

In terms of how adolescents experienced “a lack of understanding of distressing emotions”, the manuscript we first submitted explained that “adolescents shared their challenges with explicitly labeling and managing their emotions.” In the latter half of the same paragraph, we also wrote “In the second FGD, adolescents cited that they sometimes felt controlled by their emotions and could not control their responses to events that made them sad or angry.” This attempted to indicate that the adolescents were not familiar with how to deal with distressing emotions, and even turned to concealing their emotions, as you can see from the following paragraph: “Moreover, adolescents shared that they often conceal their emotions in order to appease societal expectations.” We hope this is clear.

The choice of new additions to the program based on adolescent feedback would be strengthened by adding citations that support the efficacy for these strategies for mental health promotion. This would also apply to the sections on SEL and community building. What evidence in the literature indicates that the activities they choose promote mental health, social and emotional competencies and/or community building in adolescents?

Relevant citations were already provided in the discussion section of the previous submission. We moved these citations to the results section. These citations can be seen under the paragraphs on SEL and community building under the Framing treatment goals subheading under Treatment components of the Results section.

I found it a bit difficult to go back and forth between adolescents’ and caregiver feedback. Consider separating results. Also, were caregivers providing feedback on the activities for adolescents or were there separate caregiver materials? More clarity on this throughout the paper would be helpful.

We used clearing opening sentences/headings to indicate the separate adolescent/caregiver feedback. However, since the themes that emerged from both the adolescent and caregiver FGDs were closely aligned, separating the feedback would have resulted in unnecessary redundancy, especially since the majority of the feedback came from adolescent FGDs.

We clarified in the Methods - Participants and Results - Adaptation sections that adolescents primarily provided feedback on adolescent sessions and caregivers on caregiver sessions. We also included in the Methods - Participants section that both groups provided feedback on the community’s experiences of mental health to inform the integrated approach of adolescent/caregiver feedback documented in the results section, using the RECAPT criteria themes.

For activities that were ranked, is there a short, one-sentence description of what the activity is somewhere? Maybe it could be added to the table in which the results were presented?

Yes, absolutely. We added footnotes of activity descriptions to table 2, which is where the results were presented.

It would be helpful to introduce some procedures from qualitative research to strengthen study design (e.g., saturation, trustworthiness).

Thank you for this important point. In the current version of the discussion section, we have since explained how the study aimed to maintain a high degree of trustworthiness. In the limitations and future directions section, we also acknowledged that the study did not formally address saturation but also provided an explanation of why we did not do so - we had a limited number of FGDs and participants to interviews.

Recommendation: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R1/PR7

Comments

Thank you for submitting the revised paper, which I am pleased to accept.

Decision: Community-based adaptation of early adolescent skills for emotions for urban adolescents and caregivers in New York City — R1/PR8

Comments

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