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Comparison of multimodal delivery of cognitive behavioral therapy for insomnia in middle-aged adults: a randomized clinical trial design and methodology

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  07 March 2025

A response to the following question: How are psychological factors involved in the evaluation and treatment of sleep and circadian rhythm disorders?

Alisa Huskey
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Sarah E. Emert
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA Department of Psychology, Idaho State University, Pocatello, ID, USA
Samantha M. Nagy
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Kelly N. Kim
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Jacqueline J. Leete
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Nicole Lopez
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Ethan Olson
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
William D.S. Killgore
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Matthew D. Grilli
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
Daniel J. Taylor*
Affiliation:
Department of Psychology, University of Arizona, Tucson, AZ, USA
*
Corresponding author: Daniel J. Taylor; E-mail: danieltaylor@arizona.edu
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Abstract

The recommended first-line treatment for insomnia is cognitive behavioral therapy for insomnia (CBTi), but access is limited. Telehealth- or internet-delivered CBTi are alternative ways to increase access. To date, these intervention modalities have never been compared within a single study. Further, few studies have examined (a) predictors of response to the different modalities, (b) whether successfully treating insomnia can result in improvement of health-related biomarkers, and (c) mechanisms of change in CBTi. This protocol was designed to compare the three CBTi modalities to each other and a waitlist control for adults aged 50–65 years (N = 100). Participants are randomly assigned to one of four study arms: in-person- (n = 30), telehealth- (n = 30) internet-delivered (n = 30) CBTi, or 12-week waitlist control (n = 10). Outcomes include self-reported insomnia symptom severity, polysomnography, circadian rhythms of activity and core body temperature, blood- and sweat-based biomarkers, cognitive functioning and magnetic resonance imaging.

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Table 1. Schedule of measures at each assessment time-point

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Author comment: Comparison of Multimodal Delivery of Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia in Middle Aged Adults: A Randomized Clinical Trial Design and Methodology — R0/PR1

Comments

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Review: Comparison of Multimodal Delivery of Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia in Middle Aged Adults: A Randomized Clinical Trial Design and Methodology — R0/PR2

Comments

General comments:

This was an interesting and well-written methods paper. The thorough design which combines sleep, neuroimaging, psychological, and biological measures is very methodologically compelling. I have no major concerns with the paper and include some specific comments below for the editor and authors to consider.

Specific comments:

Introduction

Introduction is well thought out and identifies gaps in the literature. A minor point, the introduction may flow a little more clearly if aims (beginning line 41) are at the end of the section, as there is further literature review after the aims from line 49.

Methods

Please provide the ethics approval number from the IRB (lines 87-88).

Exclusion criteria are a little unclear – particularly around “failure to complete study requirements”. How can a patient fail to complete study requirements if they are not yet enrolled in the trial? This may be a misunderstanding on my behalf, nonetheless perhaps there is scope to improve clarity. Please also clarify how dishonest self report is to be detected as part of the exclusion criteria.

It would be helpful if the authors could outline a bit more about the plan for analysing the results (statistical test selection etc.) and robustness against any issues in attrition (perhaps this is what the authors are getting at in lines 246-251 that the WLC will provide extra N?).

I didn’t notice any mention about the blinding status of the evaluators, could the authors please clarify this in the text.

Review: Comparison of Multimodal Delivery of Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia in Middle Aged Adults: A Randomized Clinical Trial Design and Methodology — R0/PR3

Comments

Thank you for the opportunity to review this submission. This protocol outlines a four-arm randomized control trial comparing in-person CBT-I, clinician-led CBT-I over telehealth, internet-based CBT-I, and a waitlist control group. Overall, the protocol is thorough with a highly novel (and needed) primary aim and intriguing secondary exploratory aims that could lead to an array of very interesting and highly anticipated findings. The inclusion of the detailed supplements is also greatly appreciated. There were several major and minor concerns that the authors may wish to consider to improve the clarity of the manuscript.

Major

1. There is some unclear or inconsistent language throughout the manuscript. These are outlined below:

a. Overall – terms and abbreviations describing the in-person vs. telehealth vs. internet-based therapy could be made more consistent throughout the manuscript (e.g., “telehealth delivered CBTi”, “videoconferencing delivered CBTi” and “therapist guided online” are used in the introduction to reference clinician-administered CBT-I that is not in-person).

b. Overall – the authors reference that the CBT-I within the protocol is “variable length” at the beginning of the Research Design but it isn’t clear until later in the manuscript that this is in reference to the 6-12 session length options. It may be helpful to define this earlier in the protocol for clarity.

c. Overall – the authors use the terms “mental health” and “cognitive” to reference outcomes collected. While there is overlap in these terms, recommend choosing one to use for consistency

d. Introduction – the authors use the terms “Insomnia”, “chronic insomnia”, “chronic insomnia disorder” “primary insomnia” “comorbid insomnia” and “insomnia disorder” within the first 3 paragraphs of the introduction. While individuals not new to this field may understand the differences between these terms, it may be helpful for broader readership to either define the differences between these terms or narrow down which terms are used.

2. Introduction – the location of the aims is a bit confusing, appearing in the third paragraph and followed by more background paragraphs. It may make more sense to move the aims paragraph to the end of the introduction.

3. Introduction – there is sufficient rationale for the primary aim in the introduction; however, it may be helpful to provide some more background to support the secondary aims, especially since a lot of detail regarding the secondary aims is provided in the methods and procedures section following.

4. Methods and Procedures – the authors briefly explain why the age range of 50-65 is chosen; however, this appears to relate more to secondary exploratory aims rather than the primary aim. It may be helpful to expand on this rationale, linking this decision more directly to the primary aim.

5. Methods and Procedures – the authors provide detail in Supplement A within the General Health Questionnaire that information substances and medications (including OTC’s) were collected. Was substance use or use of sleep medications or OTC’s considered when screening for participant eligibility?

6. Methods and Procedures – the authors mention that sleep deprivation was an exclusion criterion. How was this defined?

7. Methods and Procedures – what was the MoCA Blind cut off to exclude participants? If not included in this section, may be helpful to include in the corresponding Supplement.

8. Methods and Procedures – sleep compression is referenced in the authors’ definition of CBT-I in the “In-Person CBTi (CBTi) and Telehealth CBTi (tCBTi)” but is not referenced again in the manuscript or supplements. Was sleep compression used / do the authors anticipate its use in the intervention? If so, please include in the other materials. If not, suggest removing term to avoid confusion.

9. Methods and Procedures – in the “Primary Aim: Determine if In-Person CBTi is superior to Telehealth or Internet-Delivered CBTi” section, the authors reference “previous efforts.” Is this referencing the citations that appear later in the paragraph? Please clarify or cite these previous efforts.

10. Conclusion – there is no mention of telehealth CBT-I in the conclusion section. While the authors do mention important questions that arise between internet-based vs. clinician-administered CBT-I and make references to CBT-I administered through multiple modalities, it is the comparison of these three specific modalities that make this protocol novel. As such, mentioning all three in the conclusion section would help remind the reader of this novelty and potential impact.

11. Conclusion – in the manuscript, the authors describe very rigorous data collection methods that may pose barriers to study engagement and follow-up. Given this and the general drop-out rates of CBT-I, it may be helpful to briefly describe anticipated barriers to participation and how the authors plan to address them.

Minor

1. Overall – there are some run-on and incomplete sentences that appear throughout the manuscript (e.g., sentence #3 in the secondary aims section of the Statistical Analysis Plan). Please review and address.

2. Overall – please check for grammar as it relates to consistent use of dashes (e.g., “in person” and “in-person” are both used).

3. Overall – SHUTi is italicized when first introduced but not again after that. Suggest either italicizing or not italicizing throughout the manuscript for consistency

4. Abstract – there is a typo in the first line of the abstract where CBTi instead says “CBTIi”

5. Methods and Procedures – at the end of the first paragraph in the “Random Assignment”, there is the word “Intervention” on its own.

6. Methods and Procedures – the authors describe asking the WLC group to maintain their regular schedule. Does this specifically relate to their sleep schedule or daytime and sleep schedule?

7. Supplement – The Supplement A document contains tracked changes

Decision: Comparison of Multimodal Delivery of Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia in Middle Aged Adults: A Randomized Clinical Trial Design and Methodology — R0/PR4

Comments

Thank you for submitting your article, which the reviewers found highly relevant to the field of sleep psychology. The reviewers provided several valuable comments and I am confident that you will be able to address them for publication. In addition to clarifying the language and methods as suggested by the reviewers, I encourage you to be more explicit in the discussion on how the study results help answer the question "How are psychological factors involved in the evaluation and treatment of sleep and circadian rhythm disorders?"In addition, when presenting how the study address this question in the introduction, please state what the aims of the study were independent of the question but be explicit in how the study addresses this question (e.g., rather than "This study aims to address barriers..." say "This study addresses barriers...) this will prevent it from reading as though the study was designed for this question.

Presentation

Overall score 4 out of 5
Is the article written in clear and proper English? (30%)
4 out of 5
Is the data presented in the most useful manner? (40%)
4 out of 5
Does the paper cite relevant and related articles appropriately? (30%)
5 out of 5

Context

Overall score 3 out of 5
Does the title suitably represent the article? (25%)
4 out of 5
Does the abstract correctly embody the content of the article? (25%)
4 out of 5
Does the introduction give appropriate context and indicate the relevance of the results to the question or hypothesis under consideration? (25%)
3 out of 5
Is the objective of the experiment clearly defined? (25%)
4 out of 5

Results

Overall score 3 out of 5
Is sufficient detail provided to allow replication of the study? (50%)
5 out of 5
Are the limitations of the experiment as well as the contributions of the results clearly outlined? (50%)
2 out of 5

Author comment: Comparison of Multimodal Delivery of Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia in Middle Aged Adults: A Randomized Clinical Trial Design and Methodology — R1/PR5

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Decision: Comparison of Multimodal Delivery of Cognitive Behavioral Therapy for Insomnia in Middle Aged Adults: A Randomized Clinical Trial Design and Methodology — R1/PR6

Comments

Thank you for addressing the reviewer comments. I am delighted to accept this paper for publication in our journal and look forward to receiving the results of this work to help us answer our open question.