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Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  14 August 2023

Natasha Fox*
Affiliation:
College of Earth, Ocean, and Atmospheric Sciences, Oregon State University, Corvallis, OR, USA
Jenna H. Tilt
Affiliation:
College of Earth, Ocean, and Atmospheric Sciences, Oregon State University, Corvallis, OR, USA
Peter Ruggiero
Affiliation:
College of Earth, Ocean, and Atmospheric Sciences, Oregon State University, Corvallis, OR, USA
Katie Stanton
Affiliation:
Applied Cultural and Environmental Anthropology, Oregon State University, Corvallis, OR, USA
John Bolte
Affiliation:
College of Earth, Ocean, and Atmospheric Sciences, Oregon State University, Corvallis, OR, USA
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Corresponding author: Natasha Fox; Email: foxnat@oregonstate.edu
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Abstract

To meet the challenges of hazards impacting coastal communities, demand is growing for more equitable coastal natural hazard adaptation and disaster mitigation approaches, supported by co-productive research partnerships. This review paper outlines contemporary advances in hazard adaptation and disaster mitigation with attention to how an equity and justice framework can address the uneven impacts of hazards on marginalized and underserved communities. Drawing upon the allied concepts of distributive, procedural, systemic, and recognitional equity and justice, we illustrate how these concepts form the basis for equitable coastal resilience. To demonstrate how equitable resilience can effectively advance contemporary adaptation and mitigation strategies, we present two vignettes where collaborative partnerships underscore how equitable coastal hazard planning and response practices complement these processes in coastal zones subject to large earthquakes and tsunamis. The first vignette focuses on disaster response and takes place in the Tohoku region of Japan, with diverse gender and sexual minority community members’ experiences of, and responses to, the 2011 Tohoku disasters. The second vignette centers on hazard planning and takes place on the U.S. Pacific Northwest coast along the Cascadia Subduction Zone to demonstrate how principles of distributive, procedural, systemic, and recognitional equity can inform the co-production of alternative coastal futures that prioritize equitable resilience. From this discussion, we suggest applying an equity lens to research processes, including alternative futures modeling frameworks, to ensure that the benefits of hazard adaptation and disaster mitigation strategies are equitably applied and shared.

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Figure 1. (a) Map of the Tohoku region showing the rupture zone in 2011. (b) Map of the Cascadia Subduction Zone (used by permission from the Oregon Department of Geology and Mineral Industries, 2012).

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Table 1. Examples of studies examining barriers faced by marginalized communities in disasters

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Figure 2. A conceptual framework for equitable and resilient coastal futures. The proposed conceptual framework applies Targeted Universalism for policy development (Powell et al., 2019) to an agent-based modeling approach (e.g., alternative futures modeling) to develop targeted coastal hazard adaptation strategies that account for a diverse set of marginalized and underrepresent population needs. The conceptual framework is guided by co-production of knowledge to ensure diverse community voices and values are in embedded in each phase of the process.

Author comment: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R0/PR1

Comments

Dear Editors,

Thank you for consideration of our invited submission titled “Toward Equitable and Just Coastal Futures: The Great East Japan Earthquake and the Cascadia Subduction Zone”. We feel that this manuscript makes a considerable empirical, theoretical and methodological contribution to literature around natural hazards and coastal resilience. Growing threats posed by natural hazards demand that coastal adaptation and mitigation practices protect communities, while avoiding uneven hazard impacts on historically underserved groups. In this manuscript we make the case for sustained, meaningful, multi-stakeholder community engagement through co-production to help communities grow more resilient. The concepts of distributive, procedural, and recognitional equity and justice illustrate how these can form the basis for equitable resilience and adaptation. To demonstrate these concepts we draw from our own research examples in the Tohoku region of Japan and the Cascadia Subduction Zone. We hope that you will find our submission a good fit for the journal and look forward to your correspondence.

With sincere thanks for your consideration,

Natasha Fox (corresponding author)

Jenna Tilt

Peter Ruggiero

Katie Stanton

John Bolte

Review: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Manuscript discusses disaster risk reduction and preparedness for transforming natural hazards influenced by climate change. The concept of equitable resilience in coastal development is then introduced using the Japanese Tohoku region and US Cascadia Subduction Zone examples to highlight the challenges faced by LGBT+ and Latinx communities, respectively.

The work proposed for publication meets UNESCO-UNDRR global agendas towards disaster risk reduction, while focusing on an emerging hot-topic: equity in risk management policies. However:

• the review of the state of the art is insufficient to constitute a revision article,

• and it is followed by a generic conceptual framework that does not provide sufficient detail or novelty to qualify as a research paper.

Overall, the manuscript tackles an important topic but is too low level to be of practical use and does not provide any real help or guidance for risk management. Hence, I recommend major revisions and one of the two hypotheses: 1) enhance the revision nature of the manuscript and submit as a revision paper (if the journal accepts such type of publication), or 2) improve the description of the methodology used to tackle the CSZ vignette, its numerical application to the case-study, data used and, quantification and discussion of the results.

General comments

G1 – The manuscript fits within the scope of the journal and raises awareness of the importance of equity in disaster risk reduction policies.

G2 – The abstract and title are reasonably aligned with the content of the manuscript. Both refer to future equitable principles within the framework of coastal risk management. However, after reading the manuscript, both the title and abstract seem overstated. This can lead to high expectations that the manuscript cannot fulfill.

G3 – The literature review would benefit from complementary references on two main aspects.

Prior to identifying the limitations of current risk management policies, it would be useful to start with a brief outline of the most common mitigation strategies. Typically, these strategies are related to urbanism and structural performance criteria, but more recent advances now take into account demographic factors.

In addition to the above, I would also like to see a reference to other minority and under-represented groups in the manuscript (even if only citing literature and mentioning their importance for future integrative research in the framework of risk policies).

G4 - The conceptual methodology is (briefly and) poorly described and ignores interactions that have the potential to greatly influence the efficiency of risk management policies, such as cumulative effects associated with multi-hazard dependencies.

G5 – Figures and captions need careful revision and/or replacement to provide clear and straightforward information to the reader. Since Figures 1 and 2 are taken from other works, the quality of the image is, from my point of view, unacceptable for publication purposes. Since none of them are original, consider replacing them with more illustrative and contemporary works. Even Figure 3, the only original figure in the manuscript, has very poor resolution (and personally, I cannot understand what it aims to represent). On the other hand, the authors collected data from community members that could be used to generate intuitive graphic information.

G6 – In resume, the manuscript needs major revisions before it is publishable.

Major comments

There are 6 major issues with the manuscript that must be addressed.

Major Q1 – The Introduction and Background section starts with global warming and climate change and quickly moves to earthquake and tsunami threats.

What is the link between long-term climate change and abrupt earthquake and tsunami hazards? The direct connection between climate changes and earthquakes is weak, and most likely to have some influence on micro-seismicity. For tsunamis, the rising of average sea level due to climate change (order of centimeters) is nearly negligible when compared with tidal variations (order of meters from low to high sea levels).

The manuscript needs a discussion in order to understand and accommodate the influences of climate change on coastal hazard, risk and resilience contexts. In addition, how does it extrapolate to the two vignettes used to discuss coastal risk mitigation policies?

Major Q2 - The terminology (Key concepts) is compiled from definitions and published work. I can understand it as part of the contextualization. Additionally, it is of the utmost importance to identify gaps in risk strategies towards non-discriminatory policies, such as the ones highlighted in the manuscript. However, I cannot accept that remarkable advances in coastal risk management, in particular for earthquake and tsunami multi-risk, are here completely ignored before being criticized for their shortcomings. Many scientists and engineers dedicate a career lifetime to understanding and characterizing the (very complex) physical phenomena associated with hazard generation, propagation, and interaction with natural and built environments before it is a product to feed the fields of social sciences, decision making, and politics. These efforts should be acknowledged in the manuscript as the cornerstone of any further development.

Multi-risk results from a geophysical understanding of natural hazards, field experts surveying the field after a catastrophic event, large-scale lab campaigns and sophisticated numerical models to better understand physical processes, and characterization of natural and built environments' responses to extreme multi-hazard events, as well as the definition of criteria for their performance. It encompasses a universe of multidisciplinary and transversal collaborations that have already overcome many challenges towards the mitigation of cascading earthquake and tsunami effects on coastal communities.

I suggest the authors revise the trend in global planning. It is the Sendai Framework for Disaster Risk Reduction that constitutes the roadmap, but its connection to other global agendas is key. Examples of international agencies and instruments include the Sustainable Development Goals, the Paris Climate Agreement, the New Urban Agenda and the Biodiversity Agenda.

I suggest the authors revise projects funded to develop multi-risk management, with a particular focus on strategies for megathrust scenarios. The significant outcomes of the work developed by national and international experts and committees are already helping coastal communities mitigate the consequences of cascading earthquakes and tsunamis. Many strategies have been implemented in the form of early warning systems (currently covering all oceans) and governmental regulations for evacuation procedures and ensuring structural performance criteria. Examples:

• World Association for Waterborne Transport Infrastructure

• US guidelines from the American Society of Civil Engineers, and the Federal Emergency Management Agency,

• Japanese Ministry of Land, Infrastructure, Transport and Tourism guidelines

• The newly formed European FIB Task Group 2.13, etc.

I suggest the authors revise literature that compiles the state of the art regarding cascading earthquake and tsunami multi-risk. Some examples (by newest):

• Reis, C., Lopes, M., Baptista, M. A., & Clain, S. (2022). Towards an integrated framework for the risk assessment of coastal structures exposed to earthquake and tsunami hazards. Resilient Cities and Structures, 1(2), 57-75. doi:10.1016/j.rcns.2022.07.001

• Oktari RS, Syamsidik, Idroes R, Sofyan H, Munadi K. City resilience towards coastal hazards: an integrated bottom-up and top-down assessment. Water 2020;12(10). doi:10.3390/w12102823.

• Buylova A, Chen C, Cramer LA, Wang H, Cox DT. Household risk perceptions and evacuation intentions in earthquake and tsunami in a Cascadia Subduction Zone. Int J Disaster Risk Reduct 2020;44:101442. doi:10.1016/j.ijdrr.2019.101442.

• Wisner, B. (2020). Five years beyond Sendai—Can we get beyond frameworks?. International Journal of Disaster Risk Science, 11, 239-249. doi:10.1007/s13753-020-00263-0

• Maletta R, Mendicino G. A methodological approach to assess the territorial vulnerability in terms of people and road characteristics. Georisk 2020;0(0):1–14. doi:10.1080/17499518.2020.1815214.

• Doyle, E. E., Lambie, E., Orchiston, C., Becker, J. S., McLaren, L., Johnston, D., & Leonard, G. (2020). Citizen science as a catalyst for community resilience building: A two-phase tsunami case study. Australasian Journal of Disaster and Trauma Studies, 24(1), 23-49.

• Shi, P., Ye, T., Wang, Y., Zhou, T., Xu, W., Du, J., ... & Okada, N. (2020). Disaster risk science: A geographical perspective and a research framework. International Journal of Disaster Risk Science, 11, 426-440. doi:10.1007/s13753-020-00296-5.

• Herrmann‐Lunecke, M. G., & Villagra, P. (2020). Community resilience and urban planning in tsunami‐prone settlements in Chile. Disasters, 44(1), 103-124. doi:10.1111/disa.12369.

• Pescaroli, G., & Alexander, D. (2018). Understanding compound, interconnected, interacting, and cascading risks: a holistic framework. Risk analysis, 38(11), 2245-2257. doi:10.1111/risa.13128.

• Poljansek, K., Marín Ferrer, M., De Groeve, T., & Clark, I. (2017). Science for disaster risk management 2017: knowing better and losing less. ETH Zurich. doi:102788/688605. ISBN 9789279606786

• Satake, K. (2014). Advances in earthquake and tsunami sciences and disaster risk reduction since the 2004 Indian ocean tsunami. Geoscience Letters, 1(1), 1-13. doi:10.1186/s40562-014-0015-7.

• Bernard, E. N., Mofjeld, H. O., Titov, V., Synolakis, C. E., & González, F. I. (2006). Tsunami: scientific frontiers, mitigation, forecasting and policy implications. Philosophical Transactions of the Royal Society A: Mathematical, Physical and Engineering Sciences, 364(1845), 1989-2007. doi:10.1098/rsta.2006.1809.

Major Q3 – Tohoku and Cascadia subduction regions. The novelty, applicability and scalability of the work that is presented in the submitted version of the manuscript is not enough to be publishable. And that would represent a lost opportunity to raise awareness of the need to address inclusive strategies in risk management policies. Therefore, one of the ways to add value to the manuscript is to actually present a comprehensive review of the literature.

Q3.1 – Besides the ones previously suggested in Q.2., the review should then address complementary insights into the challenges minority groups face. It is, after all, the manuscript’s objective key. For the sake of coherency on DEI principles, at least refer to other groups for which natural risk poses additional barriers to transpose (limited mobility, poverty, illiteracy, …). One possible example:

• Stough LM, Kang D. The Sendai framework for disaster risk reduction and persons with disabilities. Int J Disaster Risk Sci 2015;6(2):140–9. doi:10.1007/s13753-015-0051-8.

Q3.2 – Japan’s preparedness for megaquakes. I suggest a short text discussing:

• Why is Japan considered the best-prepared nation in the world?

• How preparedness was jeopardized when the hazard estimates were exceeded in 2011?

• What were the main lessons learned from 2011? and

• How did these lessons become the basis of modern tsunami risk management?

By understanding and learning from the Japanese event, one can assign a more fair perception to sentences such as ‘demonstrate how a highly resilient society can transcend past tragedies...’ and ‘...without the need to experience a disaster first’.

Q3.3 – Cascadia’s description. ‘…The science and our knowledge of expected impacts of a CSZ event (megaquake and associated tsunami) are still relatively new (Goldfinger et al., 2012).’ The amount of programs, such as NHERI and Cascadia CopeHub, and the number of publications and conferences on the topic show otherwise.

‘…allows for broader discussion regarding who is benefiting from proposed mitigation and adaptation strategies…’ – apparently everyone does except ‘…some of the most marginalized and underrepresented populations…’. Consider adding a brief discussion on the reasons influencing people to choose alternative post-disaster support, analyzing the trade-off between enhancing the (inclusive) education of populations or assure that community centers are prepared to play the role of shelter. Some references (and references therein):

• Thiri, M. A. (2022). Uprooted by tsunami: a social vulnerability framework on long-term reconstruction after the Great East Japan earthquake. International Journal of Disaster Risk Reduction, 69, 102725.

• Wood, N., Jones, J. M., Yamazaki, Y., Cheung, K. F., Brown, J., Jones, J. L., & Abdollahian, N. (2019). Population vulnerability to tsunami hazards informed by previous and projected disasters: a case study of American Samoa. Natural Hazards, 95, 505-528.

• Kotani, H., Tamura, M., Li, J., & Yamaji, E. (2021). Potential of mosques to serve as evacuation shelters for foreign Muslims during disasters: a case study in Gunma, Japan. Natural hazards, 109(2), 1407-1423.

• Blagojević, N., Didier, M., & Stojadinović, B. (2022). Quantifying component importance for disaster resilience of communities with interdependent civil infrastructure systems. Reliability Engineering & System Safety, 228, 108747.

• https://reliefweb.int/report/world/tsunami-hate-and-xenophobia-targeting-minorities-must-be-tackled-says-un-expert

• https://news.un.org/en/story/2021/03/1087412

• https://www.undrr.org/publication/marginalized-and-minority-groups-consideration-ndra

‘To progress towards a more equitable coastal community resilience requires co-development of such strategies, as well as specific metrics used to gauge the potential impacts of those strategies prior to implementation.’ This sentence also allows us to discuss the importance and efficiency of having a mitigation plan versus having none. Again, please recognize the importance of the whole risk management process before highlighting possible points of improvement.

Major Q4 – The expansion of the conceptual framework. ‘To answer this call, we have expanded upon ‘envisioning coastal futures’ conceptual framework (Bolte et al., 2007; Lipiec et al., 2018; Mills et al., 2018; Mills et al., 2021) that models landscape processes, to include both chronic (e.g., sea-level rise) and acute (e.g., a CSZ, magnitude 9 event), with socioeconomic information to explore future conditions based on a series of hazard and policy scenarios (Figure 3).’.

Q4.1 – The methodology needs additional explanations of its constitutive processes. Is it a probabilistic process? What’s behind Envision’s quantitative solutions? And, if Envision was used to model the case-study, why are there no quantitative results in the present manuscript?

Q4.2 – Fig. 3. is overall very confusing. What’s the link between chronic and acute scenarios? What’s a CSZ scenario? The CSZ fault system is always there: usually with less tectonic activity and rarely with extremely active behavior, as experienced in the past.

Q4.3 – ‘In this case, we have co-developed targeted strategies that focus on building adaptive capacity for critical assets deemed inclusive to Latinx coastal community members – either through relocation of those assets to safer areas outside the inundation zone (Realign scenario) or fortifying protection of those assets through building retrofits (Protect scenario).’ A local/regional tsunami (as inherently associated with CSZ), causes two effects on coastal structures: strong ground motions and tsunami effects. From a structural performance perspective on buildings serving as shelters, it is necessary to account for two possibilities. One is for structures located outside the tsunami-inundated area. In this case, buildings have to be designed to support a high magnitude earthquake (energetic enough to trigger a tsunami!) so it is safe to serve as shelter for people. The second is for structures located in an area prone to tsunami inundation. Shelter for people can be provided by vertical evacuation buildings designed to withstand cascading ground movements and tsunamis. But other structures, even if retrofitted, cannot guarantee the criteria for immediate occupancy. How exactly do the ‘realign’ and ‘protect’ scenarios work? Are these scenarios inextricable, complementary or individual?

Q4.4 – Later in the manuscript, it states ‘…we have not only identified specific community assets utilized by marginalized populations, and their spatial locations…but have also collected information regarding the structural quality of those assets, as well as the road network functionality.’ Such information is valuable to enhance the quality of the manuscript. Please consider adding it.

Q4.5 – Then ‘…we can more fully explore how different adaptations may—or may not—contribute to a more equitable and resilient coastal future.’. The sentence creates the expectation of a conclusion, but no further result or detail is given. Which (also) leads to the lack of conclusions in the Conclusion section.

Major Q5 – Conclusions. The Conclusion section does not really provide a conclusion, and half of it addresses ‘everyday disasters’. While the whole manuscript focused on extreme, rare, catastrophic megaquakes and secondary tsunamis, half the remarks propose everyday disasters, such as ‘affordable housing’. Why introduce a new and unrelated topic? The Conclusion section needs substantial leverage, including remarks from the CSZ case-study, discussing future work, etc.

Major Q6 – The adequacy and quality of the figures is insufficient. Fig. 1 shows GEJE simulations, Fig. 2 shows tectonic characteristics of CSZ. Are these (low resolution) figures necessary to the understanding of the framework and conclusions?

Minor comments

Minor Q1 – ‘mitigation strategies for coastal hazards’ – coastal hazards cannot be mitigated, only coastal risk or coastal hazard effects. Please verify hazard and risk concepts, for example on Terminology on disaster risk reduction published by UNISDR.

Minor Q2 – ‘… these compounding disasters…’ – please verify multi-risk concepts and how its inter-dependencies contribute to increasing their potential. Examples:

• Marzocchi W, Garcia-Aristizabal A, Gasparini P, Mastellone ML, Ruocco AD. Basic principles of multi-risk assessment: a case study in Italy. Nat Hazards 2012;62(2):551–73. doi:10.1007/s11069-012-0092-x.

• Selva J. Long-term multi-risk assessment: statistical treatment of interaction among

risks. Nat Hazards 2013;67(2):701–22. doi:10.1007/s11069-013-0599-9.

• Mignan A, Wiemer S, Giardini D. The quantification of low-probability-high-consequences events: Part I. A generic multi-risk approach. Nat Hazards 2014;73(3):1999–2022. doi:10.1007/s11069-014-1178-4.

• Liu Z, Nadim F, Garcia-Aristizabal A, Mignan A, Fleming K, Luna BQ. A three-level framework for multi-risk assessment. Georisk Assess Manage Risk Eng Syst Geohazards 2015;9(2):59–74. doi:10.1080/17499518.2015.1041989.

• Ming X, Xu W, Li Y, Du J, Liu B, Shi P. Quantitative multi-hazard risk assessment with vulnerability surface and hazard joint return period. Stoch Environ Res Risk Assess 2015;29(1):35–44. doi:10.1007/s00477-014-0935-y.

• Reis, C., Lopes, M., Baptista, M. A., & Clain, S. (2022). Towards an integrated framework for the risk assessment of coastal structures exposed to earthquake and tsunami hazards. Resilient Cities and Structures, 1(2), 57-75. doi:10.1016/j.rcns.2022.07.001

Minor Q3 – ‘…tons of disaster debris2. 2At the time of writing this paper the official death toll from Japan’s National Police Agency stood at 15,895, with 2,539 people remaining missing, for a total of 18,434 lives lost in total. The ensuing tsunami was the largest ever recorded in Japan, with a runup reaching 40 meters in some locations (Aldrich, 2019).’ Almost twelve years have passed since GEJE, 2011, which is the most documented natural event in history. There’s no need to use such writing artifacts.

Minor Q4 – If the authors decide to maintain the structure of the manuscript, the definition of the Target Universalism principle would make sense to be part of the Key Concepts section.

Minor Q5 – Missing references. I have spotted Kovanen et al. 2020, but please verify the coherence between citations in the manuscript and list of bib references.

Minor Q6 – In advance, I apologize if my comment should be addressed to the journal rather than the authors, but numbering the lines of the manuscript really makes the reviewer’s job easier.

Review: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Abstract:

The first sentence is very long. Can it be broken into 2 or more sentences for readability?

Delete “To do so we draw upon and just say Drawing on the...and justice, we illustrate...”

Introduction and Background:

Paragraph 1

Replace mount with increase

Can you include newer citations than Adger 2000 and Mimura 2008?

Delete the comma after climate change adaption and before “and acute hazard preparations”

Add a period after the Lipiec citation. Delete particularly and re-write the last sentence.

Paragraph 2

No need to say In order to...just say To meet

Delete henceforth and just include the acronym for GEJE and CSZ

Paragraph 3:

Replace We argue that coastal adaptation with “To do this adaptation policies need to be co-produced...”

Key Concepts:

Equity and Justice: Start a new paragraph with “Each of these subcategories...”

Equitable Resilience: replace existing with “pre-event”

Delete “we, along with a multitude of other scholars and stakeholders argue that”

Operationalizing Equitable Resilience: Start a new paragraph at “Co-production of knowledge operationalizes...”

Delete “In summary”

The Great Japan Earthquake:

Start a new paragraph “At the time of these compounding..”

Add a comma in the same sentence after disasters

I understand that LGBT+ was the focus of this study, but can you add a sentence about other potentially marginalized communities and then edit to say something like - we will now focus on

Add a comma after Because they are less likely to have children, they tend

Co-Production of Natural Hazard Adaptation:

The material was supplemented with secondary materials (not literature as stated)

Add “primary” to “and analyzed alongside local primary data”

The sentence “The study underscored..” should be moved to the discussion / conclusion

Again, delete In order to and just start with To cultivate

town-hall style meetings are not exactly an innovative, power-equitable setting

The sentences that starts with “This co-productive process generated dynamic” should be in discussion or conclusion.

Overall, in this section it is very unclear what of this is new for this publication and what of this is just a summary of the Fox work. If a summary of Fox, it should be described briefly and cited, not repeat extensive sections of prior work.

The paragraph beginning with “Key findings” - are these new? Or again, just need a brief summary of Fox and a citation? All of Page 8 seems to be reporting of Fox’s prior findings.

Delete It is equally significant to note, however and just start with “The ways in which the....”

Applying the Tohoku Model:

Start a new paragraph after daunting.

Add a comma after Bill 379 was repealed in 2019, leaving

The discussion of the % of Latinx residents in certain fields can be shortened and sentences should not start with 32% - could just say “primaily low wage, with 32% of the employees in agriculture...being Latinx”

Same with the sentence that starts with 18%

Delete “it goes without saying that fire, police stations, hospitals, and other” and just say "While critical facilities are essential...'

Delete “To answer this call...” and replace with “We expanded..”

Co-Production with Latinx:

Delete “that identified the importance of community assets”

This is what the paper should be focused on, however, no real results from the Latinx work are provided. The Conclusion says the Cascadia study “illustrates” but really no results were presented.

My overall suggestion is to delete the section on Japan or limit it to a brief review of the prior project. Be clear about the application of the model to Oregon and the framework used - there are important findings - that vulnerable Latinx workers would prefer to prioritize resilience of community organizations over typically critical infrastructure, but that is lost in the long repeat of the Japan data and the lack of a typical “Results” section from the Cascadia study.

Recommendation: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R0/PR4

Comments

Dear Dr Fox,

I have now received two detailed reviews of the manuscript you submitted to Coastal Futures. Both reviewers provide detailed comments and suggestions for change. Although the paper makes for interesting reading, I also agree with one of the reviewers that the manuscript in its current form and outline is neither an adequate review of the state of the art nor does it present sufficient analysis to be a research paper.

I am recommending that you consider the detailed comments from the reviewers and re-submit after a major revision.

Decision: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R0/PR5

Comments

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Author comment: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R1/PR6

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Review: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R1/PR7

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Thank you for considering (most) of my suggestions. If other reviewers and/or the editor ask for enhancing Figure 3 quality, I will reiterate their request.

Otherwise, the new manuscript shows an overall improvement that I consider satisfactory. I recommend the manuscript for publication.

Recommendation: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R1/PR8

Comments

Dear Dr Fox,

Following the second review by one of the first-round reviewers I am satisfied to recommend that the manuscript be considered for publication following minor revisions. It is however important to note that some changes may require some major rethinking. Overall, the response from the authors was adequate based on the first round of reviews. The revised version was considerably easier to read and also resulted in a few more follow-up questions. I hope that your response will further clarify some issues.

Please note some language editing comments and suggestions in the attached manuscript.

I also provide questions for clarity in the manuscript.

Then, I would like to state again that this work should be published. It will make a valuable contribution to more human-oriented thinking about hazard planning/preparedness. I found the manuscript interesting and it raised many questions with regard to the solutions to the barriers causing inequality in hazard planning. The combination of social challenges with those of the impacts of hazards is interesting but also requires clarity with regard to consistency in terminology.

The objective states the review focuses on “coastal hazard planning”, which is different from “coastal hazard adaptation” in the title. Planning and adaptation may not always mean the same thing.

“Coastal hazard adaptation” (i.e., adaptation, in the title), “coastal hazard planning” (planning of? used in the manuscript), “disaster planning practices”, “disaster mitigation”, “disaster experiences”, “disaster recover” are all used in the manuscript. It was often confusing what element of “hazard” or “disaster” the manuscript focused on, and why. Sometimes it deals with planning, in other instances it discusses responses and recovery. This links with the issue of the temporal scale in the next point.

There is something fundamentally unclear about the definition of “coastal hazard adaptation”, and the way this concept is applied in the manuscript. At the very least, the manuscript should consider the temporal aspect of disasters, from planning to disaster to different stages post-disaster. It seems clear that time and urgency will play a role in post-disaster responses. But then, this can be avoided by planning corrections etc. The temporal scale of the elements that would be included in “coastal hazard adaptation” seems important. Still, the manuscript seamlessly switches between different aspects of “coastal hazard adaptation” i.e., disaster planning, disaster responses, and post-disaster recovery. I can clearly see the need to address social inequality as a systemic issue influencing overall planning, and the same patterns of inequality having a different disaster response (during and immediately after and event), and then again during the recovery phase and access to resources. Surely this understanding and definition of stages of the disaster reduction process are relevant and important?

Both the points above can be dealt with by clear definitions of the objective of the manuscript.

Would the authors have any comment on the limits of fragmentation/differentiation of specific disaster responses for different communities? See the in-text comments.

Targeted universalism is presented as the only framework useful for the context of the paper, and then using one paper (Powell et al 2019). Either acknowledge other potential frameworks and suggest why TU is the most appropriate, or expand the theory of TU to make its selection as a framework more rigorous.

The same argument goes for the selection of Agent-based modelling (ABM) as an “alternative futures support tool”. I would recommend identifying other potential tools before the authors motivate the utility of ABM.

The vignettes are different in scope. One deals with disaster responses and experiences while the other deals with planning. If this was the intent it would be good to acknowledge this upfront.

Figures 1 & 2 can probably be merged into a single figure. Their contribution to the text is limited. Figure 3 can be simplified. It is currently very text-heavy.

The section on “Disaster experiences” not being equal can benefit from a table with additional information. See in-line comment in the manuscript.

Regards

Louis Celliers

Decision: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R1/PR9

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Author comment: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R2/PR10

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Dear Editor in Chief Tom Spencer,

Thank you for providing additional comments and feedback on our manuscript, Toward Equitable Coastal Community Resilience: Incorporating Principles of Equity and Justice in Coastal Hazard Adaptation. We are grateful for your detailed responses and the questions that you have posed, and we feel that by addressing these carefully we have added significant clarity to the manuscript. Our responses to comments are in italics below.

Comments from Handling Editor Celliers

The objective states the review focuses on “coastal hazard planning”, which is different from “coastal hazard adaptation” in the title. Planning and adaptation may not always mean the same thing.

“Coastal hazard adaptation” (i.e., adaptation, in the title), “coastal hazard planning” (planning of? used in the manuscript), “disaster planning practices”, “disaster mitigation”, “disaster experiences”, “disaster recover” are all used in the manuscript. It was often confusing what element of “hazard” or “disaster” the manuscript focused on, and why. Sometimes it deals with planning, in other instances it discusses responses and recovery. This links with the issue of the temporal scale in the next point.

Thank you for highlighting this point. We realize that discussing the broad goal of Equitable Coastal Resilience (the topic of this invited review paper) necessitates a wide range of adaptation strategies which can come in at the planning phase, the response phase, and/or the recovery phase of a hazard impact/disaster. Undertaking this discussion under the organizing theme of “coastal hazard adaptation” enables us to more effectively show the benefits of an equity approach to the many aspects and temporal contexts of disaster planning, response, and recovery toward achieving the goal of coastal resilience. To better clarify our argument for the effectiveness and value of an equity approach across these multiple aspects and temporal scales, we have added text to signal our intentional use of these different terms in specific ways (page 2, lines 60-63). “This review paper provides an overview of some recent trends in coastal hazard adaptation, a term we use here to encompass the many aspects and temporal contexts of hazard planning, response, and recovery processes focused on achieving coastal resilience.”

There is something fundamentally unclear about the definition of “coastal hazard adaptation”, and the way this concept is applied in the manuscript. At the very least, the manuscript should consider the temporal aspect of disasters, from planning to disaster to different stages post-disaster. It seems clear that time and urgency will play a role in post-disaster responses. But then, this can be avoided by planning corrections etc. The temporal scale of the elements that would be included in “coastal hazard adaptation” seems important. Still, the manuscript seamlessly switches between different aspects of “coastal hazard adaptation” i.e., disaster planning, disaster responses, and post-disaster recovery. I can clearly see the need to address social inequality as a systemic issue influencing overall planning, and the same patterns of inequality having a different disaster response (during and immediately after and event), and then again during the recovery phase and access to resources. Surely this understanding and definition of stages of the disaster reduction process are relevant and important?

We made revisions throughout the manuscript to clarify which phases of the disaster cycle we are discussing at a given point in the paper. These changes more clearly show how different forms of equity can complement actions taken during different phases of the disaster cycle (page 2, lines 61-63, page 6, lines 174-177, page 7, lines 204-208, page 8, line 253), including through the two vignettes, which respectively demonstrate these principles during the response (GEJE) and preparation phases (CSZ).

Both the points above can be dealt with by clear definitions of the objective of the manuscript.

We have carefully defined the manuscript’s objectives to clarify that our goal is to outline the contributions of an equity lens in improving coastal resilience to natural hazards, and that we view this process as an overarching goal tied to many temporal phases and contexts of disaster planning and hazard adaptation (page 2, lines 61-65)

Would the authors have any comment on the limits of fragmentation/differentiation of specific disaster responses for different communities? See the in-text comments (In-text comment: Some individuals, marginalised or not, will opt for alternative sources of post-disaster support. Can we plan disaster support to that level of granularity? Communities, by definition, tend to be cohesive. Individuals have an infinite range of reasons to act in one way or another).

Thanks for suggesting that we deal with this issue head on. We now briefly discuss the concept of “co-benefits” as a potential bridge to meet the needs of different communities facing disasters, noting that many targeted strategies that can benefit one specific community will also have benefits for other communities in disasters (page 6, lines 159-174). This is also a tenet of Targeted Universalism, making it an especially salient concept for our argument. “However, there are also limits to specificity in coastal hazard adaptation as trying to create policies that can attend to the needs of every individual across a society can seem daunting. Here, the concept of co-benefits, “the secondary or unintended goals of a hazard adaptation project that are additional to the project’s primary function, but complementary to its objective of increasing community resilience” (Jones and Doberstein, 2022) can be a powerful tool to maximize resilience across communities. By seeking direct input from communities to identify which needs and potential solutions offer co-benefits beyond a specific marginalized group, policy options become more viable. However, concrete strategies that directly seek out and incorporate knowledge and experiences of underserved communities in hazard planning remain relatively scarce in research and policy (Hiwasaki et al., 2014), and social vulnerabilities like those described above are often difficult to identify and quantify, leading many studies to disregard them altogether (Thiri, 2022). Therefore, a persistent challenge facing coastal hazard planning is how to ensure that technological advances toward hazard resilience are not rendered less effective when communities who are marginalized by oppressive social systems are chronically unable to equally participate in their development and implementation (Kehler and Birchall, 2021).

Could the authors comment on the issue of the limits of fragmentation or diversification of disaster responses? Without appearing insensitive, disaster risk responses probably goes through many different stages of urgency (immediately post disaster, near post disaster etc…). The closer to the immediacy of the risk to further loss in human life, the more common our humanity? The question to the authors are about the state of knowledge of temporal scale of differentiated disaster responses to community needs? Any thoughts?

We have added text clarifying the importance of considering equity issues in advance of the immediate onset of a hazard event (page 6 lines 174-177): “Because vulnerabilities, like disasters, unfold across temporal scales and stages, we draw attention to the importance of an equity lens in all phases of the disaster cycle, including the range of actions taken toward adaptation planning well in advance of a trigger event.”

Targeted universalism is presented as the only framework useful for the context of the paper, and then using one paper (Powell et al 2019). Either acknowledge other potential frameworks and suggest why TU is the most appropriate, or expand the theory of TU to make its selection as a framework more rigorous. (In text comment: Can you strengthen your TU argument with more theory?)

We have added clarity to our use of TU as an example of a policy framework that centers equity, rather than the only useful framework (page 14 lines 480-482, and page lines 502-517)

We have also expanded the theory of TU to strengthen our argument (pages 14-15 lines 508-517) “A case for Targeted Universalism has been made for achieving educational and behavioral standards for youth (Farmer et al., 2022), as well as applications of reaching COVID-19 goals (Gaynor and Wilson, 2020). Other similar policy frameworks, such as Proportionate Universalism (Carey et al., 2015), also strive to balance universal and targeted policies but do not emphasize the universal goal. In addition, this framework relies on local governance for implementation that may have limited capacity or may not recognize the systemic issues limiting the distribution of goods and resources. Therefore, we advocate for the Targeted Universalism approach because it allows for incorporating a diversity of policy options tailored to address specific group needs that cumulatively add to the progression of the entire community, region, or state toward the universal goal of greater coastal resilience.”

The same argument goes for the selection of Agent-based modelling (ABM) as an “alternative futures support tool”. I would recommend identifying other potential tools before the authors motivate the utility of ABM. (In-text comment: …such as”…. This section focus on ABM, which is fine, but what else could contribute to addressing these complex issues? While you cannot discuss the here, it seems strange that you focus on ABM so absolutely?)

We have added text acknowledging that ABM is one of many potential decision support tools as well as giving our rational for focusing on this particular category of tool. (page 14, lines 484-487)

The vignettes are different in scope. One deals with disaster responses and experiences while the other deals with planning. If this was the intent it would be good to acknowledge this upfront. (In-text comment: The two vignettes are comparable in geographic characteristics, as pointed out by the authors. Their presentation in the paper are not. The Japan vignette is presented as a an event effecting a community. The manuscript report on observations from this event. The CSZ vignette is community-based in preparation of future disasters. The two vignettes covers different aspects of the temporal scale of coastal hazard adaptation. Was this the intention?)

Yes, this was definitely our intent. The vignettes speak to different phases in the disaster cycle and demonstrate the salience of an equity lens in both phases. The Tohoku vignette illustrates our points in the context of disaster recovery and how an equity lens could have improved a community’s experiences of recovery from that disaster. The CSZ vignette shows how these tools can be operationalized prior to a hazard event. We now highlight our intentional focus on these different temporal aspects (page 1 lines 33-36, page 2 lines 65-66, page 9 lines 309-314, page 12 line 421)

Figures 1 & 2 can probably be merged into a single figure. Their contribution to the text is limited.

Thank you for this suggestion. We merged Figures 1&2 (page 3, lines 84-85). Merging of the two figures now presents a more striking visual example of the similarities between the two subduction zones.

Figure 3 can be simplified. It is currently very text-heavy.

We simplified Figure 3 (currently Figure 2, page 16, lines 540-541) and eliminated much of the text from the figure, instead explaining the figure in greater detail in the text (page 16-18, lines 551-620)

The section on “Disaster experiences” not being equal can benefit from a table with additional information. See in-line comment in the manuscript.

We constructed a table of these references incorporating the additional information requested (page 5, lines 155-156)

Please correct Capitalisation in Referencing system to reflect correct here.

Kindly note that after 2008 john a. powell has spelled his name in lower case. Accordingly, following the author’s capitalization we too capitalize his name in the “Powell, 2008” citation, and follow his practice of citing in lower case in his later publication “powell et al., 2019” (lines 484-484; line 491, line 547, line 545, line 1046, and line 1048)

(For clarification please see this article: https://www.deseret.com/2023/1/15/23550467/john-powell-berkeley-belonging-and-othering-institute-interfaith-america)

In addition we are grateful for Reviewer 1’s editorial revisions, which we have accepted throughout the manuscript.

Reviewer 2: If other reviewers and/or the editor ask for enhancing Figure 3 quality, I will reiterate their request.

We constructed a table of these references adding the additional information requested (page 5, lines 155-156)

Recommendation: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R2/PR11

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Dear Dr Fox,

Thank you for your constructive response to the editorial and review comments. I am happy to recommend the publication of the paper. I attach a marked-up version with minor editorial changes.

Regards

Louis Celliers

Decision: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R2/PR12

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Author comment: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R3/PR13

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Thank you for providing these editorial revisions. The attached file contains all changes accepted.

With sincere gratitude,

Natasha

Recommendation: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R3/PR14

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Dear Dr Fox,

I am happy to recommend the publication of your article.

Regards

Louis Celliers

Decision: Toward equitable coastal community resilience: Incorporating principles of equity and justice in coastal hazard adaptation — R3/PR15

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