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Bacterial cellulose: a biodesign critical analysis on the artefact and industrial manufacture

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  29 November 2024

A response to the following question: Bio-calibrated: tools and techniques of biodesign practices

Cristiano Pedroso-Roussado*
Affiliation:
ITI/LARSyS Instituto Superior Técnico – Universidade de Lisboa, Lisboa, Portugal
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Corresponding author: Cristiano Pedroso-Roussado; Email: cristiano.roussado@tecnico.ulisboa.pt
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Abstract

The design field encompasses aspects of culture and thought and, ultimately, can integrate other disciplines like biology and engineering. One of the potentials of biodesign is the replacement of current materials with more sustainable ones. Bacterial cellulose (BC) is a biopolymer that is produced by microorganisms such as Komagataeibacter spp. and has been recently explored for applications in fashion, architecture and material science receiving global media attention. In this impact paper, it is assessed the challenges of producing BC through an analysis of its production and chemistry. Through a critical analysis of applied case studies, it is argued that there is yet work to be done to allow the widespread use of BC. In conclusion, the increased understanding of the acetic acid bacteria genetic landscape and biochemistry will potentiate the education, research, development, manufacture and market implementation of more feasible and sustainable cellulose-based products.

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Table 1. Main challenges for biodesigning BC. Referred current laboratory norm and recommended actions

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The paper is interesting in addressing the potentials for BC to be used at a larger scale in terms of manufacturing.

The paper provides a thorough overview and summary of various research into BC. It provides many references, that are focused on methods for increasing growth of BC.

While I find the summary of other research interesting, I'm struggling to find the research goals and objectives in this essay. The essay does not seem to reflect any specific testing by the authors. Is the paper more of an overview and critique of BC? is it a resource for biodesigners?

The specific research goals, methodologies (testing, evaluating, etc), and conclusions do not seem to be clear, and should be clarified.

In the Abstract section, it states '...and defend that it is yet work to be done to allow a widespread use of BC.' This should be clarified. Since currently, there is not widespread use of BC, isn't this statement already true? does it need to be defended? Please clarify what is being defended.

Regarding the title; I think the term 'questionable' is a bit confusing, and not clear in the content of the paper. Is the questionability regarding the specific companies claims that are mentioned?

Line 44; change to 'manufacturing', not 'manufacture'

Line 48: suggest changing to 'influencing makers that...', instead of 'making makers to...'

Line 59: is BC a trendy topic, or a trendy biomaterial?

Regarding the conclusion and the following statement;

'...it is essential to expand the boundaries of research to include other disciplines and more creative approaches surrounding the design process of prototyping with living materials.'

Are there examples of interdisciplinary teams (designers and scientists) that are doing this? educational examples? professional practice examples? I can think of a few in both scenarios. Perhaps these should be mentioned as examples that are demonstrating what the essay is advocating for.

Review: Bacterial cellulose: a biodesign critical analysis on the artefact and industrial manufacture — R0/PR3

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The paper on bacterial cellulose (BC) provides a detailed exploration of production methods and challenges, emphasising the need to better comprehend the biology and structure of BC production. However, some areas require refinement to enhance clarity, structure, and flow.

key points:

-Revisit the introduction and provide a clearer statement of the paper's aims, objectives, and methods.

-From line 67, the paper goes into details—background on BC; this could be a background section and would ensure to keep your introduction to the point.

-Although the overall material presented is detailed and draws from a lot of resources, it might help if it were organised into further subchapters to enable easier flow.

-A key part of the argument seems to revolve around being interdisciplinary and how designers should be more aware of the challenges, processes, biology, etc. It would be really helpful from a designer's perspective to have a clear summary of all the parameters they should consider. This could be a diagram or table that designers could use to understand and refer to the different parameters at various stages of production (treatment, function), as well as how each parameter might relate to functional outcomes (yield, etc.).

-Could you provide specific details or suggestions on how to achieve a successful interdisciplinary approach? Are there any existing examples? (In lines 108–110, is there a particular example?)

additional comments:

-rephrasing long sentences into shorter sentences (ex. lines 30-35).

-rewrite informal terms like "gaslighting" (line 37), "strange" (line 49), and 'trendy' (line 59).

-double check for typographical errors, such as "fnal" in line 42.

-a brief explanation of the methods, which should clearly outline the methodologies and key parameters of comparison (ideally included in the introduction or a subsection).

-a diagram or table that summarises key factors for designers, such as microorganism types, fermentation conditions, etc.

-line 243: Are there other examples you can give and create a comparison of how other designers companies use such materials? (This part could be a sub-chapter.)

-sub-chapter on limitations and future steps

-are there design processes (depending on scale, function outcomes, etc.) that could tolerate or accept some of the mentioned uncertainties and variations?

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