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Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  11 June 2026

Sarah Odera*
Affiliation:
African Climate Change Development Initiative, University of Cape Town , South Africa
Jiska De Groot
Affiliation:
African Climate Change Development Initiative, University of Cape Town , South Africa
Debbie Sparks
Affiliation:
African Climate Change Development Initiative, University of Cape Town , South Africa
Dimitrios Mentis
Affiliation:
World Resources Institute , USA
Izael Da Silva
Affiliation:
Strathmore University , Kenya
*
Corresponding author: Sarah Odera; Email: sodera@strathmore.edu
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Abstract

The objective of this study was to develop a framework to support the identification of root causes of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa. Currently, existing literature identifies specific energy injustices on the continent; however, it fails to delve into root causes of these inequalities. Additionally, a paper that synthesises these injustices to understand prevailing challenges is absent. This study, therefore, filled this gap by conducting a systematised literature review to identify dominant themes of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa. The identified themes were found along the entire energy value chain, from mining of critical minerals used in technology manufacturing to the disposal of energy technologies. Injustices were also identified in cross-cutting issues, including community engagement, project financing and power dynamics between donors and countries on the continent. A framework titled “Energy Injustice in Stakeholder Interactions” was developed to encapsulate these injustices and support the identification of root causes of energy injustice. This framework demonstrated the flow of injustices across stakeholders and, in doing so, provided multiple perspectives of energy injustice. Further, it included the constraints these stakeholders faced in executing their mandates, thereby limiting energy justice. Lastly, it demonstrates trade-offs that must be considered in the quest for energy justice. Thus, framework, therefore, provides critical information on points of intervention for actors working towards restorative justice.

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Table 1. Summary of energy justice frameworksTable 1. long description.

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Figure 1. Themes identified during the systematised literature review.Figure 1. long description.

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Figure 2. Themes covered per year.Figure 2. long description.

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Figure 3. Sub-Saharan African countries mentioned in energy justice research.Figure 3. long description.

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Figure 4. Energy injustice in stakeholder interactions.

Author comment: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR1

Comments

It is with much delight that we submit the manuscript for this paper titled “Systematised Assessment of Energy Injustice in Sub-Saharan Africa”.

This paper critically reviews academic literature on energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa with the goal of uncovering recurring themes and developing a framework that can be used to support the identification of root causes of energy injustice. In doing so, it explores stakeholder interactions and how they cause energy injustices. It also unearths constraints faced by different stakeholders such as communities, governments and private sector in executing their mandates which either cause or exacerbate injustice. Through this approach, the paper highlights the complexity of energy justice and offers deeper insight into the root causes of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa. This paper is therefore is inline with the journals scope of investigating how people are affected by energy systems.

We look forward to sharing this paper with others in the academic community and are happy to receive feedback towards improvement of the paper

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

I would like to thank the authors for their significant contribution to the important and timely topic of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa. This work is highly relevant given the critical need for equitable energy access and justice in the region.

To further strengthen the manuscript, I suggest the following improvements:

1. The literature review currently considers research up to December 2022. Given the evolving nature of energy issues. To date, I guess we might have some transpired research on the subject, incorporating relevant studies from 2023 onwards could enhance the currency and impact of the findings. I suggest you check if this impacts your findings.

2. While the representation of sub-Saharan Africa is commendable, the focus is concentrated much on a few countries (Tanzania, Kenya, South Africa, and Zimbabwe). Readers would also love to hear more from other countries. Expanding the analysis to include other countries would provide a more balanced regional perspective.

3. The theoretical background should be more distinctly highlighted to guide readers clearly through the presentation of results and their connection to the proposed framework.

4. Considering the increasing importance of renewable energy, a more balanced discussion incorporating renewables and associated injustices would improve the comprehensiveness of the study. Not much has been discussed on renewables as compared to non-renewables.

5. Financial justice in the African context is complex due to differing interests among donors and stakeholders. It would be beneficial to acknowledge these challenges more explicitly, as balancing financing in energy projects is often hard to achieve.

6. There is a typographical error in the conclusion (first paragraph, third sentence, “e energy”) that needs correction for clarity.

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

General

This is an interesting and generally well-written article that is a worthy addition to the energy justice literature looking at Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA). I would recommend a thorough review for typos, e.g.

Snowballing is one word

Sierra Leone, only one “n”

P12, l52. You may want to check your use of reversed verb-subject object as in “One step towards this, is”, where no comma is needed, and “To do this, is a ..” where the verb is repeated.

P13, l3. Missing reference

P13, l7. Review syntax in sentence “ It also demonstrates how layers of injustices that are transferred from one level of stakeholders to the next.”

Table 5-1 is truncated.

Abstract

The abstract is good and could benefit from even clearer grounding. I would recommend making clear the step from developing a framework about the root causes of energy injustice to enabling actions towards restorative justice. Seems to be a missing link. Was the objective of teh study to develop a framework or was the framework a tool for something else? Why was a new energy justice framework needed? Is it simply to address the geographic under- representation

Also, SSA is a huge region so there is merit in acknowledging regional differences and being transparent about the study area. A small number of the 50 or so SSA countries is mentioned in the study, with very few empirical references to French (Senegal and the DRC) and Portuguese speaking (Mozambique) countries.

Introduction

P2, l33. I am not sure that energy justice can be labelled a theory; I would call it a concept, and it should be introduced and defined in this section.

Section 3

This should be part of the introduction as it defines key terms. Plus, there is nothing about Sub-Saharan Africa here.

P4, l9. Which comprehensive framework is this about? Heffron refers to tenets while Sovacool’s present a framework with more than five principles.

P4, l22: this argument should be put forward earlier if it seems to be the driver of this study, the gap of knowledge that the study seeks to address by developing another framework.

P4, l26. Great point about injustice as a systemic issue. Who else has observed this? Provide a citation or rephrase as an open question. Is moral the alternative/opposite to systemic?

P4, l30. Please substantiate why restorative justice would address systemic injustice. Restorative justice seeks to correct harm, whether it was systemic or not. Further, the statement that a moral concern could address a perpetrator is structurally incorrect. How can a concern address anything?

Section 4

This section on findings should directly follow that on methodology to facilitate the reading.

How many themes were identified through reading and how many retained for the analysis? Please clarify if the themes used in the search are the same identified in the review (displayed in Fig 4.1) ? If not, it may be best to use different terms to avoid confusion.

P5, l39. It is somehow surprising that thermal heating would appear prominently in the review focused on SSA. You should quantify the occurrences and explain the relevance of heating as a theme. Heating and cooking are completely different energy uses.

P5, l47. Please clarify the meaning of “unlike grid which has been lauded..”

Section 5

Please review the concluding line of argument: “This framework therefore enables root cause analysis of energy injustices which can support actions towards restorative justice. In doing this, the framework enables practical use of energy justice theory and addresses the criticism that this concept has little practical application”. Please clarify how you go from the root cause analysis to restorative actions. You may want to provide a few examples to substantiate that statement.

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR4

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

General remarks:

- The authors have conducted a very comprehensive and systematic literature review and have done great work in identifying key themes in the literature.

- The article is also very well written, it’s very structured, the language is clear, and arguments are to the point

- I see two major issues. One is that the literature search ends in 2022. This makes the article a bit outdated and misses newer work and themes (for example, justice in climate finance). I suggest to update the search and include studies from 2023–2025.

- The second major issue is with regard to the theoretical conception of justice. It treats corporations and states as possible victims of injustice, but injustice can only be experienced by people, not legal entities. This misinterprets the energy justice approach and leads to problems in the development of the analytical framework.

Chapter 2: Methodology

- My suggestion is to list the themes that you identified already in the methodology section and briefly define them. For example, the theme “the burden of mega-infrastructure” is unclear without explanation.

- The methodology section says the literature search ended in 2022, but the empirical part cites papers from 2023. Please clarify this.

- The grouping and hierarchy of the categories should be explained in the methodology section, as it is not directly clear, why some are chosen as main categories and headers, and others subordinated as subcategories.

Chapter 3: Energy Justice

- On p. 3, when describing the roots of environmental justice (EJ), you only refer to a specific strand of liberal EJ literature. I suggest to at least mention critical or radical EJ work (e.g. Pulido & Lara 2018; Svarstad & Benjaminsen 2020; Temper 2017; Pellow 2025).

- I would also suggest to put stronger emphasis on key dimensions of energy justice: a) how environmental justice emerged from social movements and activism, b) how it involved a critique of power structures, c) how EJ emerged specifically as a response to environmental racism (Robert Bullard), and d) how EJ is linked to decolonization (which is particularly relevant in your regional context, e.g. the work of Rodríguez/Inturias 2018 , Álvarez/Coolsaet 2020, Pulido/Lara 2020).

- EJ literature has been criticized for separating EJ from its power-critical and social movement origins and how it has been turned into a liberal conception of justice that is compatible with capitalism and makes justice into a checklist. This critique should be mentioned and addressed.

- The distinction between moral and systemic injustice is not entirely clear, and should be explained more and how it is relevant.

- Important point on the theoretical framework: Private companies or the state cannot be victims of injustice. For example, the statement that “utilities may indicate that this is a procedural injustice from informal settlements directed at them” does not make sense as injustices can be experienced by people, not legal entities – also it ignores the power asymmetries present.

Chapter 4: Empirical analysis

- Section 4.1.1.2, in parts, reads like a case for corruption. The idea that corruption could have positive justice effects is unclear and questionable. It would also help to address the deeper structural causes of corruption to avoid reinforcing problematic stereotypes, such as framing corruption as an “African problem.”

- Section 4.3: “Ethiopia targets East Africa with its Grand Inga Dam” — the Grand Inga Dam is in the Congo, not Ethiopia?

- Section 4.3, lines 19–24: you write “injustices are sometimes justified…” and “It is said that …” Please be specific on who is doing the justifying: is it academia, the state, corporations?

- Section 4.4: “Bearing the burden for the energy transition” is rather short and only one paper is assigned to the category. Please check if it makes sense to have this as a separate category and check if maybe more papers fit into this category. I would also suggest that “bearing the burden for the energy transition” is perhaps not the best fitting title, as this could include many burdens, but you specifically mean upstream mining.

- Section 4.6 “financing justice” is quite short, and could be expanded a bit. Also key themes seem to be missing (which is likely due to the literature search ending in 2022) such as the critique of the climate finance mechanism of the Just Energy Transition Partnership and its reliance on loans over grants and its market-based financing approach, see e.g. Karg et al. (2025) Just Energy Transition Partnerships: An inclusive climate finance approach? https://doi.org/10.1016/j.erss.2025.104103 , Gürtler (2025) What space for justice? The just energy transition partnership with South Africa https://doi.org/10.1016/j.esg.2025.100285

- Section 4.7 “Power dynamics” refers to about 15 papers, but only 4 are assigned to this category in the literature search. Please align the text and table for clarity.

Chapter 5: Discussion

- This chapter aims to develop an analytical framework out of the literature review. However, there are three issues here:

- 1) it is not clear how the literature review and the themes that were identified inform the development of the framework. Instead they seem rather detached from another, and I would have expected a framework of energy justice that builds on the themes you identified through your analysis

- 2) In Table 5.1, it is unclear which rows or columns refer to “origin” and which to “terminal point.” The table is also hard to read because parts are cut off.

- 3) It also seems like there is a deeper theoretical issue here. The framework’s assumption that corporations or governments can be victims of injustice is theoretically problematic. Corporations and governments cannot be victims of injustice because injustice is about harm to people – corporations are legal entities created by humans with capital and power, they are not living beings with human rights. Therefore, corporations and governments can cause injustice, but they cannot suffer it.

- I suggest to revise the framework to reflect this. Keep the idea of multiple perpetrators (e.g. government, private sector, utilities, communities, and possibly also include international actors like multinationals, foreign governments, financial institutions, or development banks). But limit victims of energy injustice to people and communities.

- In addition, I suggest to better connect your framework to the literature review, by identifying the specific injustices and those who perpetrate them for each of the themes you identified in the literature analysis.

Minor points

- There are several grammar and spelling errors, and some incomplete sentences. Figure 4.1 also contains spelling mistakes.

- “Natural gas” is a widely used and correct term, but keep in mind that this is also an industry greenwashing term by making fossil fuels seem “natural”, I prefer “fossil gas”, but I leave this up to you

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR5

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The paper titled “Systematized Assessment of Energy Injustice in Sub-Saharan Africa” presents a valuable and comprehensive review of energy justice issues in Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA). The topic is timely and relevant, and the framework proposed in the study provides a potentially useful tool for identifying root causes of energy injustice. However, several points should be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication:

1. The review covers a ten-year period (2013–2022). It would strengthen the paper to discuss observable trends or shifts in the discourse on energy injustice over this period.

2. Please consider whether there are regional variations in the manifestation or discussion of energy injustices across SSA (e.g., East vs. West Africa) and highlight these where applicable.

3. Adding a concise summary table comparing the main types of injustices, the key actors involved, and potential interventions would improve the readability and practical relevance of the paper.

4. The authors are encouraged to discuss the limitations of the proposed framework in its practical application and to suggest possible directions for its future refinement.

5. Table 5-1 appears incomplete and requires formatting adjustments to ensure clarity and consistency.

6. Please correct typographical errors, such as “e energy poverty” in Section 6 (Conclusion and Recommendations), and conduct a final proofreading for minor language and formatting issues throughout the manuscript.

Recommendation: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR6

Comments

Dear Dr Odera,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to Cambridge Prisms: Energy Transitions. I invite you to resubmit your manuscript following major revisions by addressing the comments below. When revising your manuscript, please outline every change made in response to their comments and provide suitable elaborations for any comments not addressed.

Reviewer 1:

I would like to thank the authors for their significant contribution to the important and timely topic of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa. This work is highly relevant given the critical need for equitable energy access and justice in the region.

To further strengthen the manuscript, I suggest the following improvements:

1. The literature review currently considers research up to December 2022. Given the evolving nature of energy issues. To date, I guess we might have some transpired research on the subject, incorporating relevant studies from 2023 onwards could enhance the currency and impact of the findings. I suggest you check if this impacts your findings.

2. While the representation of sub-Saharan Africa is commendable, the focus is concentrated much on a few countries (Tanzania, Kenya, South Africa, and Zimbabwe). Readers would also love to hear more from other countries. Expanding the analysis to include other countries would provide a more balanced regional perspective.

3. The theoretical background should be more distinctly highlighted to guide readers clearly through the presentation of results and their connection to the proposed framework.

4. Considering the increasing importance of renewable energy, a more balanced discussion incorporating renewables and associated injustices would improve the comprehensiveness of the study. Not much has been discussed on renewables as compared to non-renewables.

5. Financial justice in the African context is complex due to differing interests among donors and stakeholders. It would be beneficial to acknowledge these challenges more explicitly, as balancing financing in energy projects is often hard to achieve.

6. There is a typographical error in the conclusion (first paragraph, third sentence, “e energy”) that needs correction for clarity.

Reviewer 2:

General

This is an interesting and generally well-written article that is a worthy addition to the energy justice literature looking at Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA). I would recommend a thorough review for typos, e.g.

Snowballing is one word

Sierra Leone, only one “n”

P12, l52. You may want to check your use of reversed verb-subject object as in “One step towards this, is”, where no comma is needed, and “To do this, is a ..” where the verb is repeated.

P13, l3. Missing reference

P13, l7. Review syntax in sentence “ It also demonstrates how layers of injustices that are transferred from one level of stakeholders to the next.”

Table 5-1 is truncated.

Abstract

The abstract is good and could benefit from even clearer grounding. I would recommend making clear the step from developing a framework about the root causes of energy injustice to enabling actions towards restorative justice. Seems to be a missing link. Was the objective of teh study to develop a framework or was the framework a tool for something else? Why was a new energy justice framework needed? Is it simply to address the geographic under- representation

Also, SSA is a huge region so there is merit in acknowledging regional differences and being transparent about the study area. A small number of the 50 or so SSA countries is mentioned in the study, with very few empirical references to French (Senegal and the DRC) and Portuguese speaking (Mozambique) countries.

Introduction

P2, l33. I am not sure that energy justice can be labelled a theory; I would call it a concept, and it should be introduced and defined in this section.

Section 3

This should be part of the introduction as it defines key terms. Plus, there is nothing about Sub-Saharan Africa here.

P4, l9. Which comprehensive framework is this about? Heffron refers to tenets while Sovacool’s present a framework with more than five principles.

P4, l22: this argument should be put forward earlier if it seems to be the driver of this study, the gap of knowledge that the study seeks to address by developing another framework.

P4, l26. Great point about injustice as a systemic issue. Who else has observed this? Provide a citation or rephrase as an open question. Is moral the alternative/opposite to systemic?

P4, l30. Please substantiate why restorative justice would address systemic injustice. Restorative justice seeks to correct harm, whether it was systemic or not. Further, the statement that a moral concern could address a perpetrator is structurally incorrect. How can a concern address anything?

Section 4

This section on findings should directly follow that on methodology to facilitate the reading.

How many themes were identified through reading and how many retained for the analysis? Please clarify if the themes used in the search are the same identified in the review (displayed in Fig 4.1) ? If not, it may be best to use different terms to avoid confusion.

P5, l39. It is somehow surprising that thermal heating would appear prominently in the review focused on SSA. You should quantify the occurrences and explain the relevance of heating as a theme. Heating and cooking are completely different energy uses.

P5, l47. Please clarify the meaning of “unlike grid which has been lauded..”

Section 5

Please review the concluding line of argument: “This framework therefore enables root cause analysis of energy injustices which can support actions towards restorative justice. In doing this, the framework enables practical use of energy justice theory and addresses the criticism that this concept has little practical application”. Please clarify how you go from the root cause analysis to restorative actions. You may want to provide a few examples to substantiate that statement.

Reviewer 3:

General remarks:

- The authors have conducted a very comprehensive and systematic literature review and have done great work in identifying key themes in the literature.

- The article is also very well written, it’s very structured, the language is clear, and arguments are to the point

- I see two major issues. One is that the literature search ends in 2022. This makes the article a bit outdated and misses newer work and themes (for example, justice in climate finance). I suggest to update the search and include studies from 2023–2025.

- The second major issue is with regard to the theoretical conception of justice. It treats corporations and states as possible victims of injustice, but injustice can only be experienced by people, not legal entities. This misinterprets the energy justice approach and leads to problems in the development of the analytical framework.

Chapter 2: Methodology

- My suggestion is to list the themes that you identified already in the methodology section and briefly define them. For example, the theme “the burden of mega-infrastructure” is unclear without explanation.

- The methodology section says the literature search ended in 2022, but the empirical part cites papers from 2023. Please clarify this.

- The grouping and hierarchy of the categories should be explained in the methodology section, as it is not directly clear, why some are chosen as main categories and headers, and others subordinated as subcategories.

Chapter 3: Energy Justice

- On p. 3, when describing the roots of environmental justice (EJ), you only refer to a specific strand of liberal EJ literature. I suggest to at least mention critical or radical EJ work (e.g. Pulido & Lara 2018; Svarstad & Benjaminsen 2020; Temper 2017; Pellow 2025).

- I would also suggest to put stronger emphasis on key dimensions of energy justice: a) how environmental justice emerged from social movements and activism, b) how it involved a critique of power structures, c) how EJ emerged specifically as a response to environmental racism (Robert Bullard), and d) how EJ is linked to decolonization (which is particularly relevant in your regional context, e.g. the work of Rodríguez/Inturias 2018 , Álvarez/Coolsaet 2020, Pulido/Lara 2020).

- EJ literature has been criticized for separating EJ from its power-critical and social movement origins and how it has been turned into a liberal conception of justice that is compatible with capitalism and makes justice into a checklist. This critique should be mentioned and addressed.

- The distinction between moral and systemic injustice is not entirely clear, and should be explained more and how it is relevant.

- Important point on the theoretical framework: Private companies or the state cannot be victims of injustice. For example, the statement that “utilities may indicate that this is a procedural injustice from informal settlements directed at them” does not make sense as injustices can be experienced by people, not legal entities – also it ignores the power asymmetries present.

Chapter 4: Empirical analysis

- Section 4.1.1.2, in parts, reads like a case for corruption. The idea that corruption could have positive justice effects is unclear and questionable. It would also help to address the deeper structural causes of corruption to avoid reinforcing problematic stereotypes, such as framing corruption as an “African problem.”

- Section 4.3: “Ethiopia targets East Africa with its Grand Inga Dam” — the Grand Inga Dam is in the Congo, not Ethiopia?

- Section 4.3, lines 19–24: you write “injustices are sometimes justified…” and “It is said that …” Please be specific on who is doing the justifying: is it academia, the state, corporations?

- Section 4.4: “Bearing the burden for the energy transition” is rather short and only one paper is assigned to the category. Please check if it makes sense to have this as a separate category and check if maybe more papers fit into this category. I would also suggest that “bearing the burden for the energy transition” is perhaps not the best fitting title, as this could include many burdens, but you specifically mean upstream mining.

- Section 4.6 “financing justice” is quite short, and could be expanded a bit. Also key themes seem to be missing (which is likely due to the literature search ending in 2022) such as the critique of the climate finance mechanism of the Just Energy Transition Partnership and its reliance on loans over grants and its market-based financing approach, see e.g. Karg et al. (2025) Just Energy Transition Partnerships: An inclusive climate finance approach? https://doi.org/10.1016/j.erss.2025.104103 , Gürtler (2025) What space for justice? The just energy transition partnership with South Africa https://doi.org/10.1016/j.esg.2025.100285

- Section 4.7 “Power dynamics” refers to about 15 papers, but only 4 are assigned to this category in the literature search. Please align the text and table for clarity.

Chapter 5: Discussion

- This chapter aims to develop an analytical framework out of the literature review. However, there are three issues here:

- 1) it is not clear how the literature review and the themes that were identified inform the development of the framework. Instead they seem rather detached from another, and I would have expected a framework of energy justice that builds on the themes you identified through your analysis

- 2) In Table 5.1, it is unclear which rows or columns refer to “origin” and which to “terminal point.” The table is also hard to read because parts are cut off.

- 3) It also seems like there is a deeper theoretical issue here. The framework’s assumption that corporations or governments can be victims of injustice is theoretically problematic. Corporations and governments cannot be victims of injustice because injustice is about harm to people – corporations are legal entities created by humans with capital and power, they are not living beings with human rights. Therefore, corporations and governments can cause injustice, but they cannot suffer it.

- I suggest to revise the framework to reflect this. Keep the idea of multiple perpetrators (e.g. government, private sector, utilities, communities, and possibly also include international actors like multinationals, foreign governments, financial institutions, or development banks). But limit victims of energy injustice to people and communities.

- In addition, I suggest to better connect your framework to the literature review, by identifying the specific injustices and those who perpetrate them for each of the themes you identified in the literature analysis.

Minor points

- There are several grammar and spelling errors, and some incomplete sentences. Figure 4.1 also contains spelling mistakes.

- “Natural gas” is a widely used and correct term, but keep in mind that this is also an industry greenwashing term by making fossil fuels seem “natural”, I prefer “fossil gas”, but I leave this up to you

Reviewer 4:

The paper titled “Systematized Assessment of Energy Injustice in Sub-Saharan Africa” presents a valuable and comprehensive review of energy justice issues in Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA). The topic is timely and relevant, and the framework proposed in the study provides a potentially useful tool for identifying root causes of energy injustice. However, several points should be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication:

1. The review covers a ten-year period (2013–2022). It would strengthen the paper to discuss observable trends or shifts in the discourse on energy injustice over this period.

2. Please consider whether there are regional variations in the manifestation or discussion of energy injustices across SSA (e.g., East vs. West Africa) and highlight these where applicable.

3. Adding a concise summary table comparing the main types of injustices, the key actors involved, and potential interventions would improve the readability and practical relevance of the paper.

4. The authors are encouraged to discuss the limitations of the proposed framework in its practical application and to suggest possible directions for its future refinement.

5. Table 5-1 appears incomplete and requires formatting adjustments to ensure clarity and consistency.

6. Please correct typographical errors, such as “e energy poverty” in Section 6 (Conclusion and Recommendations), and conduct a final proofreading for minor language and formatting issues throughout the manuscript.

Decision: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R0/PR7

Comments

No accompanying comment.

Author comment: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR8

Comments

No accompanying comment.

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR9

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

My comments have been appropriately addressed, and I have no further comments.

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR10

Conflict of interest statement

I declare no competing interests to this manuscript.

Comments

The energy Injustice in Southern Africa has been well articulated in the developed framework. The complexity of this injustice requires continued dynamic research as well as the political will of the powers in respective countries.

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR11

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

The authors have made substantial efforts in making major revisions to the paper in their effort to engage with the criticism and improve the paper. Well done!

A few points remain:

- When you describe your revised methodology, what do you mean with this? “These were used to enhance the discussion of energy justice because these themes have been studied globally outside the energy justice framework.”

- The figure on the themes added in the methodology section is an improvement. However, as addressed before, the relationship between the categories is still not explained. Therefore, it remains unclear why some categories are subcategories of others and other are not. Explain the reasoning behind this. In addition, you may want to rethink some of the hierarchies: to give one example – though this is a more general problem that applies to many categories - it seems a bit hard to grasp why “corruption” is a subcategory “access to electricity” which is a subcategory to “injustice in energy access”, and why “corruption” does not play a role, for example, in the category “mega-infrastructure projects”

- The argument about the positive effects of corruption have been toned down in response to my previous comment. However, the authors still imply that there are positive justice implications of corruption – a claim for which I know of no evidence in the established literature – and a claim that is spectacularly hard to grasp: when public utilities subcontract services to the private sector through corruption it leads to more justice? If this is really the claim, it should be much better substantiated: “Corruption is also enabled in cases where installation of infrastructure for grid connection is subcontracted by the utility to private contractors. In these cases, a possible positive correlation between electricity access and corruption emerges (Boamah, 2019; Boamah and Williams, 2019).”

- This previous comment has not been addressed: “I would also suggest that “bearing the burden for the energy transition” is perhaps not the best fitting title, as this could include many burdens, but you specifically mean upstream mining.”

- Unclear what is meant by “utilising the reference list to identify relevant papers”. Which reference list is meant here? Those of new papers?

- There are some errors in the text, e.g. several “Error! Reference source not founds”

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR12

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

I commend the authors for their efforts in revising the manuscript and addressing some earlier comments. I am still a bit lost in the paper and struggling to find a clear thread despite the very relevant topic. The storyline is not apparent which hinders readability. It might be that the geographic context (SSA) is too broad.

Since the study is part of a PhD project examining energy injustice in Kenya, I’d suggest using empirical data from Kenya to develop the framework, then testing its applicability to other countries.

P6, 50. I would advise the authors to refrain from using absolute language like “energy justice research lacks discourse on the root causes..”. Several articles published in recent years evoke colonial dimensions in the energy transition and resulting injustices, e.g.

Lembi, R., Lopez, M. C., Ramos, K. N., Johansen, I. C., da Silva, L. J. S., Santos, M. R. P., Lacerda, G. Y. C., Neuls, G. S., & Moran, E. (2025). Towards energy justice and energy sovereignty: Participatory co-design of off-grid systems in the Brazilian Amazon. Energy Research and Social Science, 119(November 2024). https://doi.org/10.1016/j.erss.2024.103858

Müller, F. (2024). Energy colonialism. Grassroots – Journal of Political Ecology, 31(1). https://doi.org/10.2458/jpe.5659

Sovacool, B. K., & Stock, R. (2024). “ We struggle to survive ” : Exploring the whole systems energy injustices of solar photovoltaics in India. The Electricity Journal, 37(6), 107426. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.tej.2024.107426

P8-9. Please address Errors and review included references and cross-referencing.

P20-21. Please review labeling of two tables presented as Fig 4.1 and Table 4.1 and clarify how they are distinct from each other. If this is the framework developed, It should allow for a wide range of applications and cases. It would be worth having a detailed description of its intended use. How is it meant to be read? What makes it only applicable in Sub Saharan Africa?

Recommendation: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR13

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The reviewers agree that the manuscript has been substantially improved. They recommend further revisions, which I recommend the authors take full advantage of.

Decision: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R1/PR14

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Author comment: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R2/PR15

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Dear Reviewers and Editorial Team

We are delighted to submit this paper and are grateful for the comments that we have received as we believe that they have strengthened the paper.

Review: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R2/PR16

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A list of responses to reviewer comments is missing. Without such a list and without changes visible in the manuscript, I can not review this paper. Please fix this and submit again.

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The authors were unsure of how to address my comment about readability and geographic context. The objective of the paper was to use empirical data to develop the framework and the framework was tested its applicability in Kenya. This was one of my arguments: since the context is Kenya, focus the storyline on Kenya and change the title. Otherwise the text goes in too many directions making comparisons between different countries without offering the full context. Often, less is better.

Recommendation: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R2/PR18

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Make use of the comments by the reviewers, and make sure the responses to authors are clear.

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Author comment: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R3/PR20

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Dear Reviewers and Editorial Team,

Thank you for the time you have spent reviewing this paper. We believe it has made the paper stronger

Recommendation: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R3/PR21

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Decision: Systematised assessment of energy injustice in sub-Saharan Africa — R3/PR22

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