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Progress toward alleviating preventable waterborne diseases over the past 30 years

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  08 November 2023

Tim Ford*
Affiliation:
Biomedical and Nutritional Sciences, University of Massachusetts Lowell, Lowell, Massachusetts, USA
Steve Hamner
Affiliation:
Montana State University, Bozeman, Montana, USA
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Corresponding author: Tim Ford; Email: timfor1@gmail.com
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Abstract

Over the past several decades, there have been a number of national and international meetings on waterborne diseases. Conclusions from these meetings often seem remarkably similar and suggest little progress in the field of water and health. This is both a true and a false premise, as our ability to use molecular tools to describe microbial communities has advanced to the level at which whole genome sequencing is now a routine practice and can even be deployed in the field. This article seeks to illustrate both these advances and their limitations, especially for use in low-resourced settings. What remains clear is that for most of the world, basic hygiene and sanitation measures can do more for human health than any of our current advances in molecular biology. That is not to say that these advances are not remarkable and that they can undoubtedly revolutionize risk-based testing and surveillance. Although there are many factors that contribute to increased risks from waterborne diseases, climate change above all else is creating challenges that we are ill-prepared to meet. The biggest barrier to control of these diseases is not limitations in technology but has been and continues to be the lack of political will and economic incentives.

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Figure 1. Copy of an original drawing of a three-pot vertical filtration system from Sterndale (1881). Also reproduced in Ford and Hamner (2018).

Author comment: Progress toward alleviating preventable waterborne diseases over the past 30 years — R0/PR1

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Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

this is an issue of global importance, and the commentary was well presented.

This commentary highlights salient points of distribution of resources while inequitable access to engineering and other controls not only for the obvious (water safety) but the big issues, climate change, continue to prevent what is fast becoming a global catastrophe.

There are a few minor edits and comments the authors may want to address.

Page 2 line 43: Suggest spelling out “HABs”

Page 2 line 59: remove unneeded quotation mark after pathogens.

Page 4 121-133: may also want to consider the amount of funding provided by NGOs for rural or individual water purification systems that fall apart -- if the same amount of money was spent on systems that were more robust, or had follow up, the money could be well spent.

Page 4 line 149: Kishor not in reference list.

Page 6 line 233: perhaps consider “political will” in so-called democratic countries to be a failure of science education of the electorate.

Page 7 line 274: in addition to the water itself, we have found that toxigenic E. coli can be distributed by wildlife carriage beyond the water course to headwaters, etc.

Page 10 line 378: Acharya not found in text.

Review: Progress toward alleviating preventable waterborne diseases over the past 30 years — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Overall, the overview review provides discussion of a wide range of topics in relation to water and health, including historical account of prior colloquia/academy reports prior to 2010, climate change, impacts of government/business, brief overview of molecular/sequencing technologies, and global burden of disease. The manuscript meets the minimum word count (5000 words) for an overview review. It is missing an impact statement, a requirement for manuscripts published in this journal. While diverse topics are discussed, for some there is a lack of detail that would benefit the review. There is space within the word count limits of this type of manuscript to address these issues, some are identified below:

In the abstract, the authors indicate political will and economics are the greatest barriers to controlling waterborne diseases (Pg 1, lines 14-15). Greater detail/examples could have been included in the relevant sections of the review, for example in the “business and governments” section (Page 5, lines 163-171): what funding are you referring to and how much? What are the costs of training or maintenance? What is an example of a “well-intended solution” that failed?

A strength of the review was outlining the prior colloquia, meetings and academy reports that had been published on microbiological safety of water. The most recent described was from 2006. It would benefit the review to indicate if any additional ones have been convened up to 2023 and, if so, what were the outcomes from those – do the same patterns from the ones described continue today?

Page 4, lines 135 – 146: between the Genechip and metagenomics some mention of PCR technologies (quantitative and digital technologies) is merited in this section, particularly with their adoption for microbial source tracking to complement E. coli testing, for example with recreational water testing in the US, and more currently with pathogen detection - including SARS CoV-2, FluA/B, RSV, and enteric pathogens - in wastewater based epidemiology which could have many implications for source water quality monitoring.

Page 4, lines 150 – 153: would also suggest that the inability of metagenomic technologies (and PCR technologies) to identify infectious microorganisms, particularly viruses, whose presence in the environment can impact human health.

Overall for “Business and governments – the problem not the solution?” and “The global burden of disease project” sections, the author should consider adding some additional information with regard to High Income countries and the decades long environmental justice issues that are now being described and highlighted – particularly in the US and Canada. For example:

Brown et al. 2023 The effects of racism, social exclusion, and discrimination on achieving universal safe water and sanitation in high-income countries Lancet Glob Health 11: e606–14

Lee et al. 2023. Burden of disease from contaminated drinking water in countries with high access to safely managed water: A systematic review Water Research 242 (2023) 120244

Page 8, line 308 – what cost per sample would be deemed affordable? Providing this information is needed within the context of the review, where costs of newer technologies is an issue for LMIC.

Spelling/Typos

Page 2, line 13 change “disease” to “diseases”

Page 2, line 24 change “1n” to “in”

Page 3, line 59 extra quotations? (“marker” pathogen”)

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The authors have submitted revisions that have expanded the applicability of the review.

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I appreciate the responses from the authors to my suggested revisions/comments, which have been fully addressed.

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