Eliminating the Maternal Church

The most obvious index of the Sim 9 revision’s exclusion of significant feminine symbols is the elimination of the feminine Church and the usurpation of the three dominant roles she held in the Visions: revealer-figure, ecclesiological symbol, and pre-created companion of God. The replacement of the feminine Church in Vis 3 by the Shepherd, the Tower, and the Son of God in Sim 9 provides context for the subtler shifts discussed in more detail in the next two sections of this article—that is, the division of the seven women into twelve virgins and their twelve vicious counterparts, and the disappearance of waters and depth from the Church’s foundation. These revisions may seem minor if they are not considered in light of what is at stake for gender symbolism in the revision process. These stakes are demonstrated most clearly by the feminine Church’s removal as an authoritative and significant teacher and symbol.

Examining each of the feminine Church’s replacements in turn—Shepherd, Tower, and Son of God—will establish this context more firmly.^{Footnote 21} In Sim 9, the male Shepherd takes the feminine Church’s place as revealer and guide, alleging his superior interpretive capacity. He claims that the Holy Spirit first spoke to Hermas “in the form of the Church” when Hermas was “weak in the flesh,” but that “it is necessary” for the now-stronger Hermas “to see all things more precisely with my help” (Sim 9.1.1–3).^{Footnote 22} The Shepherd’s long-winded presence occupies not only Sim 9 but all of the Mandates and Similitudes, genres he introduces in the fifth Vision and employs thereafter.^{Footnote 23}

Further, whereas in Vis 3 both the elder woman and the Tower serve as coexisting, complementary symbols of the church, Sim 9 reserves this symbolism for the Tower alone. In Vis 3, the Tower enhances the feminine Church’s ability to signify ecclesiological concepts (for example, the difference between the preexistent church and the church as it elapses in historical time),^{Footnote 24} and the Tower remains under the feminine Church’s interpretive control (signaled by the “bright rod” that she uses to direct Hermas’s attention to her visual aid in Vis 3.2.4).^{Footnote 25} However, the Sim 9 revision does not permit the anomalous persistence of the feminine Church alongside the Tower.^{Footnote 26} Absent the feminine Church’s personal presence, the Tower image is reduced to functioning like a “pictogram,” in which the emotional dimensions of ecclesial belonging recede.^{Footnote 27} A relationship with an authoritative feminine being is no longer a facet of ecclesial belonging.

Finally, many scholars have noted the ascending significance of the Son of God in the more “systematized” theological framework of Sim 9.^{Footnote 28} For the purposes of this article, one strategy for establishing that ascendancy is most important: applying elements of the inherited wisdom tradition not to the Church, but to the Son, who assumes the feminine Church’s former status as God’s ancient pre-creation. Early Christians regularly equated the figure of pre-created and feminized Wisdom (as in Prov 8:22–31) with phenomena that otherwise would seem novel—namely, the Church or Christ. The strategy of identifying the Church or Christ with pre-created Wisdom could establish the ancient pedigree and prominent cosmological status of these theological innovations. The Visions author applies the concept of pre-created Wisdom to the feminine Church, who appears consistently as an “elder woman,” and whose old age signifies her status as a pre-created being and the purpose of all creation: “She was created before everything [πάντων πρώτη ἐκτίσθη]. On account of this, she is elder. And on account of her, the world was created [διὰ ταύτην ὁ κόσμος κατηρτίσθη]” (Vis. 2.4.1).^{Footnote 29}

Other early Christians identified the figure of pre-created Wisdom not with the Church, but with Christ. Most prominently, a christological hymn embedded in the New Testament epistle to the Colossians describes Christ in terms clearly paralleled by the later Visions author.^{Footnote 30} The Sim 9 revision follows the tradition of the Colossians hymn, transferring the privileged, pre-created status of Wisdom away from the Church of Vis 3 and to the Son of God in Sim 9. According to the Shepherd, the ancient rock (παλαιὰ ... ἡ πέτρα, Sim 9.2.2), upon which the Tower is now built, signifies the Son of God, who “was born prior to all God’s creation, so as to become a counselor on creation for his Father. On account of this, the rock is ancient too” (Sim 9.12.2).^{Footnote 31} Thus, the Son of God—rather than the ancient mothers Wisdom or Church—becomes the exclusive referent for imagery of God’s firstborn source of creation and the foundation of ecclesiastical community.

Hypothetically, the feminine Church and the Son of God could have shared status as coequal heirs to the wisdom tradition, whether as companion phenomena or as a single phenomenon in feminine and masculine forms. The feminine Church also would have been an obvious Christianized answer to maternal goddess traditions.^{Footnote 32} In the developing universe of early Christian symbolism, however, the rejection of maternal goddesses and the intolerance for coexisting masculine and feminine symbols ensured that feminine symbols for the divine were either eliminated or enlisted in the service of patriarchy. What E. O. James once called “the concept of the Church as a hypostatic heavenly being, coeval with Christ and on a level with the Wisdom and the Word of God (the Logos),” did not endure.^{Footnote 33}

A feminist analytical framework would, without overstatement, account for the feminine Church’s absence from the Sim 9 revision as a repetition of the most fundamental gesture in establishing a coherently patriarchal symbolic system: the commission of matricide.^{Footnote 34} Granted, the matricide of Hermas is committed primarily through omission. What is more, the only direct evidence for understanding the feminine Church in Vis 3 as “maternal” is a speech that she delivers, opening with the words, “Hear me, children,” and followed by a description of her maternal involvement in the lives of church members: “I raised you in great simplicity, innocence, and reverence through the mercy of the Lord” (Vis 3.9.1).^{Footnote 35} But this matricide is all the more disturbing for taking the form of a nearly invisible editorial decision, and for discarding a form of maternity associated with wisdom, justice, and governance. In the speech itself, categorized variously as a homily or a prophetic oracle, the maternal Church calls her “children” to resist economic inequality and to enact ecclesiastical reform.^{Footnote 36} Thus, the feminine Church of the Visions section as a whole is not maternal in ways that evoke patriarchal fears and fantasies; there is no morphological imagery of maternity, no invocation of the inexhaustible fecundity associated with the breast or womb. Rather, the maternal Church of Vis 3 is an elder woman who speaks on public matters. Therefore, the matricide particular to the revisions of Hermas involves not a slaughter, but the silent rejection of a female figure of authority, significance, and speech.^{Footnote 37}

Recognizing that the Sim 9 revision of Vis 3 encodes an original matricide into the unfolding of Hermas confirms the potentially high stakes for the seemingly less drastic revisions of gender symbolism that I discuss in the next two sections. As the following analysis shows, the revision of the seven genealogically connected women into twelve manly virgins with twelve female rivals, and of the deep waters into impossibly tall rocks, conforms to the same pattern as the displacement of the feminine Church. All demote feminine figures and symbols.

Multiplying and Dividing the Women

While the elder, maternal church disappears from Hermas entirely, one source of feminine imagery survives the transition from Vis 3 to Sim 9. However, this imagery undergoes significant changes in accordance with fundamental patterns, identified in feminist analysis, which damage the potential of feminine symbols to affirm identities and relationships among women. These patterns include the destruction of female genealogies and the “splitting” of feminine figures into idealized and demonized forms.

At first glance, the changes between Vis 3 and Sim 9 may seem like straightforward cases of “elaboration” or “additive” style. In Vis 3, the feminine Church introduces seven “women” (ἑπτὰ γυναῖκας) who encircle and support the Tower (Vis 3.8.2). These women have allegorical names—Faith, Self-Control, Simplicity, Knowledge, Innocence, Reverence, and Love—and form a line of matrilineal descent. Faith is their foremother; the rest are “daughters of one another” (Θυγατέρες ἀλλήλων, Vis 3.8.5). The Sim 9 revision increases the number of female figures to twelve and then doubles the total number of women to twenty-four by providing the twelve virtue-figures with foils, bearing names like Unbelief and Self-Indulgence.^{Footnote 38}

Despite this increase and doubling of feminine figures, the Sim 9 revisions result in a larger loss of significance for the seven women of Vis 3. First, the Sim 9 revision mentions no genealogical connection among the allegorical virtue figures, identifying them rather as “powers of the Son of God” (Sim 9.13.2). Furthermore, the doubling of these female figures follows the psychoanalytic model of splitting, through which a subject copes with ambivalence by dividing a category (for example, “women”) into unambiguously “good” and “bad” forms.^{Footnote 39} In the case of Sim 9, the twelve virtue figures are now called “virgins” (παρθένοι), who wear white linen tunics and whose bearing is both delicate and “manly” (ἀνδρείως, Sim 9.2.3–5). The term “women” devolves to the twelve vices (γυναῖκες δώδεκα), who are “gorgeous in appearance,” and whose black garments leave their shoulders bare (Sim 9.9.5). Finally, Hermas’s demonstration of spiritual maturity in Sim 9 requires him to master his desires in the presence of the linen-clad virgins, and to resist the temptations of the bare-shouldered women in black.

A closer examination of these changes demonstrates their adverse implications for feminine symbolism, for the Sim 9 revision entails the loss of a collective and genealogically connected feminine symbol, the polarization of seven “women” into virtuous virgins-in-white and vicious women-in-black, and the restriction of feminine figures to merely probative functions in the service of affirming Christian manhood. In what follows, I analyze these revisions in more detail and contextualize them in terms of feminist theological and psycholinguistic analysis.

To begin, Sim 9 not only leaves unmentioned the matrilineal relationships of the women from Vis 3 but correspondingly changes their means of incorporating church members into their communion. In Vis 3, the women involve church members in shared labor and provide them with an inheritance. When the feminine Church introduces the seven women, she describes relationships with them as fundamental to ecclesiological belonging: “The one who serves [or ‘serves as a slave to,’ δουλεύσ脱] these women and has the strength to carry out their works shall have a dwelling place in the Tower with God’s holy ones” (Vis 3.8.8). Regarding Faith, the elect “are saved through her” (διὰ ταύτην σώζονται, Vis 3.8.3); regarding Self-Control, whoever “follows her” will find rewards in this life, believing they will “inherit” (κληρονομήσει) eternal life (Vis 3.8.4); regarding the other daughters, the feminine Church informs Hermas that if he accomplishes the works “of their mother” (τ脴ς μητρὸς αὐτ膂ν), he will have power to live (δύνασαι ζ脴σαι, Vis 3.8.5). All of this language presents ecclesiological belonging and salvation itself as an inheritance acquired through serving and following these women. The women also provide the Tower image with a collective foundation, as they surround and sustain it. Therefore, Vis 3 furnishes readers with a collective symbol of women in genealogical relationship to one another as a foundation for ecclesiastical community and a means of integration into mature Christian life.

In Sim 9, however, the function of these female figures—now increased to twelve and labeled “virgins”—is to transfer people into the Son of God’s (patriarchal) household. The women no longer provide an inheritance but are instead assets to be inherited through incorporation into this household as its slaves. According to the Shepherd, church members have “received the name of the Son of God” through baptism, thus aligning themselves with a new paterfamilias. They also have received “the power of these virgins” and joined “the slaves of God” (τ膂ν δούλων τοὐ θεοὐ, Sim 9.13.7). As for the female figures themselves, instead of sustaining the Tower according to God’s direct command, they now take orders from six male figures who “were commanding” (祒κέλευον) stones to emerge and who “commanded” (祒κέλευσαν) the young women to carry the stones through a door and give them to other men who build the Tower itself (Sim 9.3.3–4). These six male figures were also present in Vis 3, though not in any authoritative relationship with the seven women (Vis 3.4.1–2). It is only when the Sim 9 author attempts to integrate the female figures more fully into the Tower vision that they take their subordinate position.^{Footnote 40}

The suppression of a female genealogy and the subordination of female figures to angelic males and the Son of God’s household adopts a strategy familiar from Irigaray and addressed by Beattie. In a collection of essays, Irigaray claimed that the formation of patriarchy transplants a woman into the genealogy of her husband, inhibits love between mother and daughter, and ultimately installs a “transcendent and unique God-Father” in order to collapse two genealogies (one maternal and one paternal) into a single patriarchal family line.^{Footnote 41} A feminist response to this patriarchal strategy would include not only affirming one’s own “female family tree” but also claiming a broader range of creative production for women, who “bring many things into the world apart from children”—things such as “love, desire, language, art, social things, political things, religious things.”^{Footnote 42} In her theological extension of Irigaray’s claims about the importance of female genealogies, Beattie argues that no single female figure—including Mary—is a sufficient symbol for women, and she states the need for “collective symbols of women’s redemption and relationships to one another as mothers, daughters and sisters.”^{Footnote 43} Beattie highlights alternative configurations of the relationship between Mary and her ancient foremother, Eve, resisting the Christian theological tendency to condemn and replace Eve with her descendent, Mary.^{Footnote 44}

Like Beattie’s rehabilitation of Mary’s relationship to Eve, Faith and her daughters in Vis 3 also constitute a symbol of women who are genealogically connected and who provide a path and model of Christian maturity that does not require the sacrifice of mother-daughter relationships or the replacement of mothers by triumphant daughters in pursuit of maturation. And they produce a range of contributions, for which they are named (for example, Love, and Knowledge), rather than biological offspring. Thus, these women fulfill the needs expressed by both Irigaray and Beattie for collective, genealogically connected women who make cultural and ethical contributions beyond reproduction. Though their numbers increase in Sim 9, these female figures lose their capacity to signify a form of maturity that does not come at the expense of one’s mother or maternal line.

These female figures also lose their capacity to signify the category of “women” for those who share that identification. As mentioned above, the “women” of Vis 3 are purified into the “virgins” of Sim 9, who have as their polar opposites the seductresses in black. Commentators have understood the introduction of female vice-figures in Sim 9 as evidence of Hermas’s more realistic acknowledgment that the ecclesiastical community is morally flawed.^{Footnote 45} From a feminist perspective, however, the polarization of the seven “women” of Vis 3 into the twelve idealized and purified “virgins” and the twelve seductive and threatening “women” of Sim 9 is not the product of greater realism, but rather is an illusory substitute for building relationships with integrated and complex others, who are subjects in their own right. The female figures of Sim 9 no longer signify growth and maturation through relationship; rather, they symbolize either desirable ideals or demonized threats. Their distinct clothing also deploys dress rhetorically, linking Sim 9 to early Christian representations of dress that are “archaizing or idealized” rather than realistic or prescriptive.^{Footnote 46} Relatedly, the organizing scheme of whiteness and blackness also becomes more pronounced in the Sim 9 typology of stones comprised by the Tower.^{Footnote 47}

What is more, the women-in-black are associated with death: they “will put to death” (θανατώσουσιν) those handed over to them (Sim 9.20.4); they take away lives (ταῖς γυναιξῦ ταῖς ἀποφερομέναις τ聒ν ζω聒ν αὐτ膂ν, Sim 9.21.4); and by them those who fail to repent in time will be ruined unto death (耗πὸ τ膂ν γυναικ膂ν καταφθαρήσεται εἰς θάνατον, Sim 9.26.6). The twelve virgins, meanwhile, have a similar function to the Virgin Mary in the symbolics of patriarchy, in which Mary serves “as a good woman in opposition to all the bad women” (who are not virgins), and “who dutifully upholds the father’s law, especially when it comes to the moral condemnation of her daughter’s emergent sexuality.”^{Footnote 48} The potential impact of these twelve virgins and twelve vices on women is mitigated, however, by their primary function in Sim 9: to test and prove whether Hermas fulfills an early Christian ideal of manhood.

To grasp the consequential nature of the Sim 9 revision for women and men, it is necessary to note that the Sim 9 revision participates in a system of meaning-making—undermined by deconstructive criticism—in which opposing pairs (for example, “men” and “women,” “white” and “black”) exist not as sites of true difference but as mirror opposites in a dependent and oppressive relation to one another.^{Footnote 49} In accordance with this system of meaning-making, the “women” of Vis 3 are no longer “women” as a potential site of difference and otherness with whom to relate; rather, they become “manly virgins,” who emphasize their sameness to an ideal of manliness and who reserve the category “women” for their mirror opposites. One example shows how the ideal of virginal manliness comes to characterize all of the female virtues in Sim 9: while only one of the seven women in Vis 3—Self-Control (Ἐγκράτεια)—is described as girded with a belt and acting like a man (ἀνδριζομένη, Vis 3.8.4), all twelve of the virgins in Sim 9 wear belts and stand like men (ἀνδρείως, Sim 9.2.4–5). These belted, manly virgins model a form of virtue and redemption that is not particular to women, but rather, that reflects the much-discussed early Christian understanding of virtue and redemption as manliness.^{Footnote 50}

These women also provide Hermas with an opportunity to display his own manliness and demonstrate his fitness for ecclesiastical leadership.^{Footnote 51} He proves his manhood by resisting the attractions of the women in black—with their loose hair, bare shoulders, and deceptive beauty—who, in contrast to the linen-clad women, are neither virginal nor “manly.” As Hermas has been warned, these women take hold of those who have “desired them,” and only those who are not “deceived by these women’s beauty” can remain in the Tower (Sim 9.13.8–9). Hermas also proves his manhood among the twelve women-in-white by exhibiting, like these manly virgins, a masterful control of his desires. The Shepherd puts Hermas to this test, leaving him for one night in the hands of the virgins, who coquettishly refuse to let him return home to sleep. They kiss him, hold him, play with him, and lead him around the Tower (Sim 9.11.2–5).^{Footnote 52} While the virgins may appear to have the upper hand in this scene, Hermas’s brief stint in their captivity is primarily an occasion for him to demonstrate his own form of mastery. He spends the night in the virgins’ midst, resting on their outspread garments, and remaining successfully in chaste prayer.^{Footnote 53}

To summarize the revised function of female figures in Sim 9, whether dealing with the women in black or the women in linen, Hermas’s mission is not to relate to them; it is to resist them. Female virginity becomes emblematic of manly behavior, and, as the women take on subordinate roles in Sim 9, Hermas illustrates his own fitness for leadership of a household church.^{Footnote 54} Fully inhabiting their lowered positions in Sim 9, after the Tower passes its inspection by the Son of God, the women set to work tidying up the place: “The virgins took brooms and swept, and they took all the dirt out of the Tower and sprinkled water around, and the site of the Tower became bright and most beautiful” (Sim 9.10.3). As Steve Young has written of the larger arc of Hermas and its shift from figures like the feminine Church and the seven women in the Visions section to the twelve virgins of Sim 9, “for Hermas to rise to full manhood his female models become his female assistants.”^{Footnote 55}

This shift from “women” to “virgins” also accounts for one small but revealing inconsistency between Vis 3 and Sim 9: the redescription of the feminine Church as a virgin. In the Visions section as a whole, the feminine Church is described consistently as an “elder woman” in the first three visions, including during her revelation about the Tower. The Shepherd is inaccurate, then, when in Sim 9 he announces that he will explain more thoroughly the Tower vision originally shown to Hermas “through the Church ... by the virgin” (διὰ τ脴ς 祒κκλησίας ... 耗πὸ παρθένου, Sim 9.1.2), ascribing to a virgin the vision that once (in Vis 3) was attributed to an elder woman. Carolyn Osiek dealt with this discrepancy by arguing that “the virgin” mentioned by the Shepherd is not the Church, but Hermas, and therefore she translated “by the virgin” as “virginally.”^{Footnote 56} However, transforming authoritative women into subordinate virgins is a dominant pattern of revision from Vis 3 to Sim 9. The sudden relabeling of the elder, authoritative, feminine Church as an inferior virgin is indeed a discrepancy, but one that conforms to a consistent tendency in the Sim 9 revision.

A detailed analysis of the transformation of the seven women in Vis 3 to the twelve virgins and twelve vices in Sim 9, contextualized by feminist and psycholinguistic frameworks, exposes the severe limitations placed on the capacity of the female figures to signify relationships among women and to represent the category of “women” as figures with whom to integrate or identify as leaders and models. The seven women of Vis 3 also stand out from comparison with other sources as unique in representing a matrilineal chain that requires no opposing counterparts in establishing the significance of its members.^{Footnote 57} In diminishing the potential of these women, it is possible that the Sim 9 revision came under the greater influence of classical parallels.^{Footnote 58}

Whatever the source of these changes, however, several related losses accrue to the women of Vis 3: the erasure of genealogical connections among women, the idealization of “women” into manly virgins, the introduction of these women’s mirror opposites, and the restriction of women to subordinate roles in the Tower and to probative functions in determining the virtue and fitness of Hermas for ecclesiastical governance. While the documentary sources for the twelve virgins of Sim 9 remain elusive, their conceptual sources have been identified clearly by feminist analysts of mythological and theological tendencies that suppress and subdivide interrelated collectives of women as one strategy for their subordination in patriarchally governed households and communities.

Diminishing the Deep

One additional type of revision, significant from the perspective of gender symbolism, is even less blatant than supplanting the maternal church or splitting the seven women into virtuous virgins and vicious rivals. However, this shift in imagery is, like the revisions discussed above, highly conspicuous from a feminist theological perspective. While the Tower in Vis 3 is built “upon waters” (祒πῦ 耗δάτων, Vis 3.2.4), associated evocatively with both creation and baptism, the Tower in Sim 9 is built atop a giant rock (祒πῦ τ聒ν πέτραν τ聒ν μεγάλην, Sim 9.4.2). And while one category of stones used to assemble the Tower in Vis 3 comes mysteriously “out of the deep” (祒κ τοὐ βυθοὐ, Vis 3.2.5), the Sim 9 revision conflates “the deep” with death and replaces depth imagery with literally over-the-top images of height, as well as level ground.

These revisions conform to broader Christian theological tendencies that, in the words of Keller, “systematically and symbolically sought to erase the chaos of creation.”^{Footnote 59} Keller’s own analysis of these tendencies begins with references in Gen 1:2 to the “face of the waters” and a “face of the deep,” which precede God’s creative activity and are made to disappear through the doctrine of creatio ex nihilo. The Sim 9 revision similarly removes or reconfigures “waters” and “the deep,” replacing them with tall rocks, tall structures, and tall men.^{Footnote 60}

To recognize the subtle yet insistent character of the Sim 9 revision, it is necessary to examine more closely the associations of waters, the deep, creation, and the feminine Church in Vis 3. Here, the vision of the Tower comes explicitly “through the elder woman” (διὰ τ脴ς πρεσβυτέρας, Vis 3.1.2), whose old age has just been declared to signify her pre-created status (Vis 2.4.1). The elder Church arrives in Vis 3 with six young male attendants, whom she dismisses and orders to build the Tower (Vis 3.1.6–7), and whom she later reveals to be prominent angels, created first and entrusted with the increase and governance of the created world (Vis 3.4.1). Thus, they provide both creation and the church with its construction crew. Nevertheless, these men are subsequent and subordinate to the Church herself.

The Tower that the Church shows Hermas is structurally impossible. Hermas has difficulty seeing it until the Church asks, “Do you not see across from you a large Tower being built upon waters, with squared and radiant stones?” (Vis 3.2.4). These plural waters recall the Church’s statement in an earlier vision that God founded the earth itself upon waters (τ聒ν γ脴ν 祒πῦ 耗δάτων, Vis 1.3.4). However, when Hermas asks why the Tower is built on waters, the Church connects these (plural) primordial waters to (singular) baptismal water, explaining that the Tower is built on “waters” because Hermas’s life has been and will be saved “through water” (διὰ 耡δατος, Vis 3.3.5). Both the created earth and the ecclesiastical community, therefore, have a common underlying element in water that, despite its fluidity, paradoxically undergirds rather than undermines them.

In another paradox, the growing Tower incorporates depth into its increasing height. The squared and radiant stones that rest impossibly on the waters are supplemented by other stones, some “from the deep” (祒κ τοὐ βυθοὐ) and others “from the earth” (祒κ τ脴ς γ脴ς, Vis 3.2.5). The stones from the earth vary considerably, and the Church’s interpretation of their shortcomings occupies much of this vision. The stones from the deep, however, integrate seamlessly with the stones already in place (Vis 3.2.6), and the Church identifies them as “those who have suffered on account of the Lord’s name” (Vis 3.5.2). The Church does not elaborate on the nature of this suffering, but her description of sufferings “for the sake of the name” elsewhere suggests that these sufferings are diverse and not limited to death (Vis 3.2.1).^{Footnote 61} It is also possible that the Church in Hermas proposes “the deep”—suffering for the sake of the name—as an acceptable substitute for baptism, as did other early Christian writers.^{Footnote 62}

Speaking broadly, the imagery of Vis 3 relies on the paradox of a Tower that is built upon waters but assembled from stones and that increases its height by drawing from the deep. The imagery also builds equivalences between the assembling of the ecclesiastical Tower and the creation of the earth itself, for both are built upon waters and both are associated with the elder, pre-created, feminine Church and her six angelic male attendants. Paradox and resonance, waters and depth, are integral to how Vis 3 signifies.

By sharp contrast, images of solidity and height dominate the Sim 9 account of the Tower. In building the Tower on rock instead of waters, the Sim 9 revision consolidates its theological vision on the Son and on baptism in the Son’s name as the exclusive point of entry into the Tower. The passage emphasizes repeatedly the solidity of the Tower’s foundation and its distance from the ground, and height replaces depth in an almost absurd attempt for each image to top the last.

For example, whereas Hermas views the Tower while seated on a bench beside the Church in Vis 3, the Shepherd in Sim 9 leads Hermas to the peak of a breast-shaped mountain, from which he views twelve other mountains, which will furnish the Tower’s stones (rather than “the earth” of Vis 3). The breast is quickly surmounted, however, when the Shepherd shows Hermas something even taller than any of the twelve mountains: “a giant white rock that had risen up out of the plain” (Sim 9.2.1). On this rock—already taller than any mountain—the Sim 9 equivalents of the six men from Vis 3 place the stones of the Tower. The first ten stones to emerge from the deep are the first layer in what becomes a four-tiered foundation (Sim 9.4.2–3). The men laying stones are now described as “tall” (耗ψηλο聘ς, Sim 9.3.1), which may be an understatement, given the dimensions of their construction project! In one final escalation, another man—“a man so tall that he surpassed the Tower” (Sim 9.6.1)—comes to inspect the Tower. He is later identified as the Son of God (Sim 9.12.8).

While the Sim 9 revision ensures that each figure surpasses the last in height, “the deep” does not disappear as a category. Instead, Sim 9 reconfigures the deep in ways that restrict its creative potential, using the deep to represent baptism in the Son’s name, as well as the realm of death. Whereas “the deep” signified a mysterious place and potential alternative to baptism for those who suffered for the Lord’s name in Vis 3, the Shepherd in Sim 9 insists repeatedly that baptism in the Son’s name is the exclusive means of entry into the gated Tower (Sim 9.12.4). The sufferers of Vis 3 are now represented by the stones from the eleventh mountain (Sim 9.28.1–2), while “the deep” furnishes the Tower with three layers of stones from the pre-Christian past—a first generation, a second generation of “righteous men” (ἀνδρ膂ν δικαίων), and prophets and ministers—in addition to apostles and teachers of the Son of God (Sim 9.15.4). According to the Shepherd, these apostles and teachers go “into the water” (εἰς τὸ 耡δωρ) through their own physical deaths and deliver their proclamation of the Son of God to select deceased men from the pre-Christian past, so that these dead can receive God’s seal, bear God’s name, and rise up from the water (δι’ 耡δατος ἀναβ脴ναι, Sim 9.16.2–6).^{Footnote 63} To present this notion of postmortem baptism for the pre-Christian righteous dead, the Sim 9 revision conflates “the deep” and “the water” and associates both with death.

In one further restriction of the deep, the Sim 9 revision contrasts depth with levelness as an ideal with its own interpretive significance.^{Footnote 64} When the Son of God inspects the Tower, he orders the removal of some stones, and he asks that replacements be dug from a nearby plain (Sim 9.6.1–7). Then, the Shepherd must fill in all of the pits or divots that these replacement stones left behind, for “it is necessary that all the area surrounding the Tower be made level (老μαλὰ γενέσθαι)” (Sim 9.10.1). When Hermas asks for an interpretation of the Tower and its stones, he neglects to ask about this last task of releveling the building site, but the Shepherd reminds him that this detail has its own meaning.^{Footnote 65} The Shepherd explains that the indentations left behind by the stones “were their sins, and they have been leveled so that they will not be visible” (Sim 9.33.3). Here, then, even the slightest trace of depth would compromise the soundness of the Tower’s plot and imply the persistent presence of sin.

The fate of waters and the deep in Sim 9 should not surprise feminist analysts of cultural and theological patterns, nor should the clear link between these shifts in imagery and the disappearance or subordination of female figures. As presented in the introduction of this article, the Tower’s refoundation on solid rock (a symbol of the Son of God) and the Tower’s inconceivably tall inspector (identified as the Son of God) replace the pre-created feminine Church with the Son of God as the most ancient and highest-status figure. Moreover, the six angelic men of Sim 9 are “men” (祀νδρας, Sim 9.3.1) rather than “young men” (νεανίσκοι, Vis 3.4.1), and instead of attending the elder feminine Church, they give orders to the twelve virgins. These twelve virgins are the very figures who take up their brooms dutifully and remove any vestige of unevenness after the Shepherd has patched up the holes left behind by the rocks from the plain. At the Shepherd’s command, they sweep away dirt, sprinkle water to hold down the dust, and ensure that no dimension of depth will remain detectable (Sim 9.10.2–3).

The perspectives of Irigaray, and Beattie’s Christian theological extension of them, provide some convincing larger contexts for these aspects of the Sim 9 revision. Beattie’s summary of Irigaray’s work identifies a host of relevant factors that could account for the replacement of primordial waters with solid rock, the association of the deep with death and sin, and the extreme emphasis on the height of both the fully erected Tower and the Son of God. These factors include “the concealment of maternal origins,” the emergence of cultural values “based on the refusal to acknowledge our primal dependence on nature and the mother,” and the processes by which “the maternal body comes to be regarded as an abyss that suggests death and annihilation ... and is constitutive of the fear of castration.”^{Footnote 66} The Sim 9 revision evinces these cultural symptoms by replacing the maternal Church and the plural waters of creation, and by overcompensating for fear of depth and death with exceedingly tall edifices, angels, and saviors.

Irigaray’s own confrontation with the philosopher Nietzsche from the perspective of marine waters contains admonishments that very well could have been directed at the Sim 9 reviser, and that seem to encourage a return to the imagery of Vis 3 as more satisfying and life-giving: “Learn what was the foundation of everything you have built up. If you want to rise up once more, remember the earth you take flight from. For if she were to fail you, you would lose the very sensation of height... . And realize that a solid plane is never just a solid plane. That it rests on subterranean and submarine life.”^{Footnote 67} Primordial waters, the maternal and pre-created Church, and a sense of “the deep” that is not a cipher for death or sin are precisely what the Sim 9 revision replaces with towering stones and structures and smooth, level terrain.

Keller, of course, has provided the most precise feminist account of the fate of the deep in Christian theological traditions, which she characterizes as “tehomophobic.” Phobia, she reminds, is not simply fear but “the obsessive reiteration of fear, which cripples the ability to face the fear.”^{Footnote 68} One iteration of this fear is present in the trajectory of the Christian canonical Bible itself, with its progression from the “face of the waters” and “face of the deep” that precede the creative acts of Genesis, to the vision in Revelation of a world with neither sea nor night. As Keller has put it, “A certain Christianity, unfurling towards the light, knew only dread of the dark depths.”^{Footnote 69} The Sim 9 revision takes a similar trajectory, envisioning the completion of an enormously tall Tower built on rock and entirely comprising bright, white stones before the imminent end of time.

In short, because the Sim 9 revision particularly diminishes the creative potential of “the deep,” it is unfitting to describe the theological content of Sim 9 as more profound.