2 Quotation, Allusion, and the Greco-Roman Rhetoricians

The study of quotations and allusions in the text of the New Testament as a form of intertextuality has developed into a sub-field of scholarship on the New Testament.Footnote ¹² Yet quotation and allusion were also topics of interest to the ancient rhetoricians and writers of preliminary exercises for rhetorical training. Since the ‘greatest orators’ of the past had drawn ‘upon the early poets to support their arguments or adorn their eloquence’ (Quintilian, Institutio 1.8.10), Quintilian and others recommended a course of study that would prepare students to do the same.Footnote ¹³ So, from the earliest stage of education, children were to dedicate considerable time to the memorisation of passages ‘selected from the orators or historians or any other works that may be deserving of such attention’ (Quintilian, Institutio 2.7.2). Aelius Theon prefaces his treatment of preliminary exercises similarly, by suggesting that the instructor ‘collect good examples of each exercise from ancient prose works and assign them to the young to be learned by heart’ (Progymnasmata 65–6).Footnote ¹⁴

The process of memorisation entailed recitation and then adaptation of the assigned passages. It was a matter of dispute whether students should be taught to paraphrase, but numerous examples of students’ periphrastic exercises have been discovered on papyri in Egypt.Footnote ¹⁵ Both Quintilian and Aelius Theon encouraged the practice, and they suggested different exercises to help students to develop their skill (Quintilian, Institutio 10.5.3–8 and Aelius Theon, Progymnasmata 62–4). The most basic exercise was a simple rewording of a familiar text, such as one of Aesop's fables, but after some practice, the student was encouraged ‘to abridge’ or ‘embellish the original’ (Quintilian, Institutio 1.9.2; 10.5.5–8). This early work granted the student an ‘intimate acquaintance with the best writings’ and provided a ‘treasure-house’ to draw from in later composition (Quintilian, Institutio 2.7.3–4).Footnote ¹⁶ Later exercises taught students how to draw upon that ‘treasure-house’ by employing a quotation or paraphrase in support of an anecdote or a maxim (see Aphthonius, Progymnasmata 3–4).Footnote ¹⁷ Ultimately, students learned to weave literary allusions into their own compositions so as to produce a ‘single idea’. Pseudo- Hermogenes, in his discussion ‘On the Use of Verses in Prose’, describes this form of allusion as adaptation (παρῳδία): ‘It is adaptation whenever, after quoting part of the verse, one in his own words expresses the rest in prose and then quoting another verse adds something of his own, so that it becomes a single idea’.Footnote ¹⁸ Adaptation was often preferred over full quotation, especially when it was expected that the audience would be familiar with the allusion. Menander Rhetor, discussing the use of passages from Euripides or of such stories as that of Cleobis and Biton in Herodotus, insists: ‘You should not, however, quote the whole passage, since it is generally familiar and well known, but adapt it’ (Treatise 2.9.413.25).Footnote ¹⁹ So, students progressed from memorisation and imitation of treasured texts to the adoption and adaptation of those texts in their own writing.

Various types of paraphrase and adaptation were possible, including inverted quotations and allusions. Aelius Theon, in his categorisation of four types of paraphrase, describes one form in the following way: ‘we keep the same words but transpose the parts, which offers numerous possibilities’ (Progymnasmata 15).Footnote ²⁰ Although he does not provide any examples of those ‘numerous possibilities’, an inversion of key elements from the quotation would fit this category. In fact, Teresa Morgan, in her review of the papyrological remains of students’ work, describes an ‘example in rhetorical schooltexts where the chronology of the story is allowed to go backwards’.Footnote ²¹ In her example ‘the periphrast regresses from the anger of Apollo to Chryses’ embassy to Agamemnon’.Footnote ²² Morgan expresses some surprise that the periphrast ‘analyses it, cuts it and reorders the narrative, but he does not embellish it, nor incorporate stylistic features from other types of literature’.Footnote ²³ Yet, this is precisely the style that Aelius Theon presented: one is to ‘keep the same words but transpose the parts’ (Progymnasmata 15).

That an inversion of narrative elements would be employed as a mode of paraphrase is not surprising since such reversal was practised from an early age. The alphabet was first learned from beginning to end and then backwards.Footnote ²⁴ Quintilian recommends that as soon as children can speak, they should be taught to memorise narratives forwards and backwards: ‘I would make him tell his story from the end back to the beginning or start in the middle and go backwards or forwards’ (Institutio 2.4.15). The ability to recite large amounts of text in reverse was often touted as the prime example of a powerful memory. The elder Seneca boasted that, when he was young, his memory was so sharp his classmates could each supply ‘a line of poetry, up to the number of more than two hundred, [and he] would recite them in reverse’ (ab ultimo incipiens usque ad primum recitabam).Footnote ²⁵ Centuries later, Augustine recalls an occasion when he asked his friend Simplicius to recite ‘the last lines but one of all the books of Virgil’ (De Anima 4.7(9)).Footnote ²⁶ When Simplicius complied, Augustine ‘then asked him to repeat the preceding lines’, which he did. From this demonstration, Augustine avers, ‘And I really believe that he could have repeated Virgil line after line backward.’Footnote ²⁷ Although some of these examples may be exaggerated, together they attest to the commonality of paraphrasing or quoting texts in reverse. Moreover, it is clear that inverted quotation was an admired form of rhetorical strategy and, for some, an example of superior rhetorical intellect.

3 Inverted Quotation and Extended Inverted Allusion

Inverted quotations can be found in a variety of literature. The rhetoricians reviewed above intended to provide guidelines for students and teachers but developed their advice from a careful reading of classical authors. The information these rhetoricians provide, therefore, must be understood as not only prescriptive but also descriptive. Inverted quotations appear in Greek and Latin texts, as well as in the literature of the ancient Near East. Pancratius Beentjes, who coined the term ‘inverted quotation’, first identified the phenomenon in an article on Ben Sira.Footnote ²⁸ Ten years later, he published a second article which expanded his original study to include examples from the Hebrew Bible, Dead Sea Scrolls, Egyptian and Sumerian literature as well as Greek and Latin writings.Footnote ²⁹ For Beentjes, ‘inverted quotation’ was limited to the inversion of word-pairs, cola, or phrases, but I will show how some authors extended their employment of inverted quotation to include lengthier excerpts and even entire plot lines—I call this phenomenon extended inverted allusion. Using Beentjes's study as a starting point, I will describe the function of inverted quotation in examples from Zechariah, the Gospel of Mark and Maximus of Tyre. Then, building on that foundation, I will examine some examples of what I am calling extended inverted allusion in Maximus of Tyre and Virgil. I use these four texts—Zechariah, Mark, Maximus of Tyre, and Virgil—because they represent well both inverted quotation and extended inverted allusion and because they illustrate the range of texts that employ these techniques.

Several images in Zech 8.12 have been adopted from Hag 1.10. Haggai explains that the people suffer because they have neglected rebuilding the temple: ‘Therefore the heavens above you have withheld the dew, and the earth has withheld its produce’ (1.10; NRSV). Zechariah reverses this statement with his promise that ‘the earth will give its produce, and the heavens will give dew’ (8.12).

Here the cola are inverted as ‘Zechariah is reversing the negative formulation of Haggai’.Footnote ³⁰ It should be clear, however, that the form of the inverted quotation does not alone signal the reversal of fortune for the people; that was made clear in the previous verse: ‘But now I will not deal with the remnant of this people as in the former days, says the LORD of hosts’ (Zech 8.11; NRSV). Rather, as Beentjes has explained, ‘the inverted quotation reinforces stylistically the expression of the change from negative to positive’.Footnote ³¹ The significance applied to the inverted quotation in this case—the change in the rhetorical tone from negative to positive—is similar to the explanation that Robbins gave to the reversal of Ps 22 in Mark 15: i.e., that Mark 15 changed the rhetorical tone of Ps 22 from hope to despair.Footnote ³² This is not, however, the only meaning an inverted quotation can convey. We find another possibility in Beentjes’ interpretation of Mark 12.1.

Beentjes identifies the beginning of the Parable of the Wicked Tenants in Mark 12.1 as an example of the inverted quotation of Isa 5.2.Footnote ³³ ‘In Mark's passage parts of the sentences from Isa 5.2 (LXX) have changed places mutually (the sequence a-b-c-d in Isa 5.2 has become b-a-d-c in Mark 12.1). But that is not all, the sequence of words has been changed.’Footnote ³⁴

Beentjes does not explore the significance of the resulting text in Mark, but a few observations are important.Footnote ³⁵ Isaiah had begun his ‘Song of the Vineyard’ with the building and fortification of a surrounding wall and then mentioned the planting of the vineyard. Mark, however, omits the extra fortifications (καὶ ἐχαράκωσα) and reverses Isaiah's words such that the vineyard (ἀμπɛλῶνα) is mentioned first and the wall (φραγμόν) last. Next, Isaiah had described the building of a tower and the digging of a vat for a winepress in that order. But Mark reverses those two actions. This reversal, combined with the omission of the locative expressions (ἐν μέσῳ αὐτοῦ and ἐν αὐτῷ), dissociates the tower from the winepress. Moreover, the reversal of only the word-pair προλήνιον ὤρυξα, rendered as ὤρυξɛν ὑπολήνιον in Mark, aligns the ‘winepress’ and the ‘tower’ with the previously postponed ‘wall’. The effect in Mark is that the ‘vineyard’ of Isaiah's song is prioritised over all other objects. At the conclusion of the parable, Jesus asks, ‘What will the owner of the vineyard do?’ (τί [οὖν] ποιήσɛι ὁ κύριος τοῦ ἀμπɛλῶνος; Mark 12.9). Commentators have seen in this question an allusion to Isaiah 5.5: ‘And now I will proclaim to you what I will do to my vineyard’ (νῦν δὲ ἀναγγɛλῶ ὑμῖν τί ποιήσω τῷ ἀμπɛλῶνί μου).Footnote ³⁶ In Isaiah, the owner's response was to remove the wall and allow the vineyard to be destroyed. In Mark, however, it is the tenants who are destroyed, and the vineyard is given to others.

What then is the significance of Mark's inverted quotation that prioritises the vineyard? Differing from the inverted quotation of Haggai and in Zechariah, Mark's inverted quotation of Isaiah does not suggest a reversal of circumstances—the vineyard remains in trouble, and its destruction still comes. The inverted quotation does, however, dissociate elements of the original narrative from each other and foreshadow changed circumstances. In Isaiah, the wall was built and fortified first before the vineyard was planted; and it was the removal of the wall that caused the destruction of the vineyard. In Mark, the ‘wall’ has already been literarily (re)moved, and the vineyard, which is planted first, is preserved at the end. We will see a similar function of disassociating key narrative elements in an extended inverted allusion from Virgil's Aeneid below.

Beentjes also identified an inverted quotation in the writings of the late second-century ce philosopher Maximus of Tyre, but he did not discuss the extended inverted allusion in the same passage.Footnote ³⁷ After Maximus affirms one's limited ability to understand God through reason, he laments the lack of direct access to the divine. If it were possible for him to have access to the divine through an oracle, he would ask important philosophical questions regarding the nature of the divine. Maximus contrasts his questions with those of King Croesus, who, according to Herodotus, had sought an oracle to ascertain the length of his reign. Croesus devised a plan wherein his messengers would each ask a different oracle to discern the king's actions at the precise time that he was doing something unexpected: cooking tortoise meat with lamb in a bronze kettle. The Delphic oracle, who proved knowledgeable of the king's curious actions, began her response: ‘I know both the sand's number and the measurement of the sea.’Footnote ³⁸ When Maximus contrasts his questions with those of the king, he says, ‘I would ask the god, not about the kettle of Croesus, the most ignorant of kings and most unfortunate of cooks, and not about the sea's measurement or the number of the sand.’Footnote ³⁹ Beentjes identifies in this final phrase an inverted quotation of the oracular response.

‘Not only the cola of the parallelismus membrorum itself, but also the internal sequence of the word pairs have been inverted.’Footnote ⁴⁰ Beentjes does not note, however, that in the previous lines, Maximus had alluded to the rest of the oracle also in reverse. After affirming her knowledge of the sand and the sea, the Pythia describes what the king was cooking and then concludes by describing the kettle (Hist 1.47). Maximus, as seen in the quotation above, mentions first the kettle, then the cooking, and concludes with the oracle's opening statement. Beentjes presents these passages as an example of how the positive message of an original text can be converted into a negative one through the use of inverted quotation.Footnote ⁴¹ That Maximus intended to disparage the inquiries of Croesus is clear from the context. Recognising the larger reversal of allusions to the oracle, however, reveals another possibility. The oracle in Herodotus progressed from the grandiose to the mundane, from knowledge of the nature of the world to awareness of a particular pot. In Maximus of Tyre, the reversal of this oracle points in the opposite direction: from the mundane to the lofty. Here, therefore, the inverted quotation forms a new trajectory and foreshadows the topic that Maximus is about to address.

An extended inverted allusion, not included in Beentjes's survey, is found in Book 6 of Virgil's Aeneid. In the middle of this book, as Michael von Albrecht has shown, Aeneas delivers a speech that reverses events described previously in Book 4.Footnote ⁴² Virgil, in the Aeneid 4, tells of Dido, the Carthaginian queen, and her love affair with Aeneas. Her first husband, Sychaeus, had been murdered by her brother (4.20), and she doubted she could ever love again. Through the intervention of the gods, however, Dido falls in love with Aeneas. Yet, before they could be married, Aeneas is commanded by Hermes to depart (4.219–278). Despite Dido's warnings that his departure would cause her death (4.307, 324; cf. Ovid, Heroides 8), Aeneas sets sail (4.393–449). Book 4 concludes with Dido throwing herself upon the sword Aeneas had left behind and dying in agony (4.630–667, 888–924).

In Book 6, Aeneas encounters Dido's ghost in the underworld and delivers a speech in which he attempts to explain the necessity of his departure. He begins where Book 4 had ended by mentioning her death (6.457). ‘He then speaks of his departure (6.450 [sic, see 6.460], cf. 4.361) and after this of the divine commands which urged him to leave (6.461–3, cf. 4.356–9).’Footnote ⁴³ Afterward, Aeneas alludes to their love (6.463–4), and, before he can convince her of his love, she returns ‘to her first love Sychaeus.’Footnote ⁴⁴ Here, in Aeneas’ brief speech to Dido, the entirety of Book 4 is recapitulated and reversed. Albrecht's explanation is insightful: ‘From the point of view of rhetoric, Aeneas’ speech is an exceptional example of artificial order in a narratio: reverse chronology dissociates the facts from each other and leaves open the problem of causality and guilt.’Footnote ⁴⁵ It is clear that the intent of Aeneas’ speech was to absolve him of guilt in Dido's death. The rhetorical function of the extended inverted allusion supports that purpose by dissociating the fact of Dido's death from the fact of Aeneas’ departure. In this retelling, it is no longer clear that Aeneas’ departure led to Dido's death; in Book 6, Dido's death (6.457) precedes his departure (6.460).Footnote ⁴⁶

From this brief review of inverted quotations and extended inverted allusions in Zechariah, the Gospel of Mark, Maximus of Tyre and Virgil, some general observations can be made. These quotations and allusions have a particularly strong association with the original context of the evoked text. One example examined above, Zechariah's adaptation of Haggai, revealed a reversal of the meaning of the evoked text in a way similar to Robbins's argument regarding Mark's use of Ps 22.Footnote ⁴⁷ Inverted quotation could, indeed, invert the tone of the immediate context of the evoked text, but that was not its only function. In the case of Maximus of Tyre, the extended inverted allusion created a new trajectory towards a topic that was the logical progression of the quotation in its inverted form. Additionally, inverted allusion could dissociate elements of the evoked text. In the Gospel of Mark, the author rearranged elements of Isaiah's Song of the Vineyard in a way that dissociated some of the original narrative elements and spared the vineyard from destruction. Similarly, in the final example, Virgil's Aeneid, the rearrangement of facts in an extended inverted allusion served to dissociate the original narrative elements from each other so that the causality of the original context was disrupted. It is clear that inverted allusions can function in several ways, and a reader familiar with this practice would be attuned to these possibilities, given what we know about ancient rhetorical training.

4 Reading Psalm 22 in the Time of Mark

We can now return to the extended inverted allusion in Mark 15, beginning with the narrative flow of Ps 22 (LXX Ps 21). In the following summary of Ps 22, I emphasise those aspects of the Psalm that are evoked in Mark's passion narrative by quoting them in full.Footnote ⁴⁸ The narrative flow of this Psalm is the same in Hebrew and Greek with some minor but important variations.Footnote ⁴⁹ Over the course of the narrative journey of Ps 22 (LXX Ps 21), the psalmist, introduced in the superscript as David, details the struggles he faces and simultaneously expresses hope that God will come to his rescue as God has done for Israel in the past. The Psalm begins with the cry, ‘My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?’ (Ps 22.1–2; LXX Ps 21.2–3). The psalmist continues by addressing God, declaring that God is holy—or dwells in holy places (LXX)—and that, in the past, Israel trusted God and was delivered by him (22.3–5; LXX Ps 21.4–6). But the psalmist insists that he himself is not worthy of such deliverance—he is a worm (Ps 22.6; LXX Ps 21.7).Footnote ⁵⁰ He is ‘reproached by the people’ (Ps 22.6)—or is ‘a reproach’ (LXX Ps 21.7). Those who revile him ‘shake their heads’ and, in mockery, say, ‘Let [the Lord] deliver him!’ (Ps 22.7–8; LXX Ps 21.8–9). The psalmist then acknowledges that the Lord has been with him since birth—or, in the LXX, it is the Lord on whom the psalmist has relied since birth—and he again pleads with the Lord to help him (Ps 22.9–11; LXX Ps 21.10–12). This pattern then repeats itself. First, the psalmist states his dilemma: he is surrounded by opposition (Ps 22.12–13, 16; LXX Ps 21.13–14, 17); he is internally exhausted and on the brink of death (Ps 22.14–15, 16–17; LXX Ps 21.15–16, 17–18); and he is treated as if already dead: ‘they divide my clothes among themselves, and for my clothing they cast lots’ (Ps 22.18 NRSV; LXX Ps 21.19). Then, the psalmist cries out to the Lord for help (Ps. 22.19–21; LXX Ps 21.20–22).Footnote ⁵¹ At this point, the tone of the Psalm shifts. The remainder of the Psalm is full of praise to God, either thanking God for having acted to rescue the psalmist (Ps 22.22–31) or promising praise for the deliverance he anticipates (LXX Ps 21.23–32). In this Psalm of Individual Lament, there is a general movement from distress toward redemption and praise.Footnote ⁵²

The early history of interpretation of Ps 22 (LXX Ps 21) suggests that the voice of this Psalm could be read in different ways. By the time that Mark was composing his gospel, David was understood to be the primary author of the Psalms.Footnote ⁵³ Since David was the presumed author, Ps 22 could be read as David's own words in response to a particular episode from his life (e.g., Ps 51 (LXX Ps 50); cf. 2 Sam 12; and LXX Ps 142; cf. 2 Sam 15).Footnote ⁵⁴ Alternatively, the Psalm could be read as the words of another biblical figure, of all Israel, or of any individual within Israel.Footnote ⁵⁵ That is to say, Psalm 22 could and did function as the words of many.

Our evidence for the history of interpretation of Ps 22 suggests that there was an important distinction between the interpretation of the Hebrew and the Greek. Both the Hebrew and the Greek editions of this Psalm begin with a passionate plea to God that laments the author's forsakenness, but only the Greek identifies the cause of that forsaken state: ‘the accounts of my transgressions are far from my salvation’ (LXX Ps 21.2). As Stephen Ahearne-Kroll has demonstrated, the Septuagint suggests that the suffering of the psalmist is merited.Footnote ⁵⁶ This distinction between the Hebrew and the Greek is also evident in the ways that Ps 22 / LXX Ps 21 was interpreted: the Hebrew Psalm is appropriated as the lament of a righteous sufferer and the Greek as the penitent prayer of a sinner. For instance, a midrash on Esther as she approaches the king (Esther 5.2) portrays her praying the words of Ps 22.1—‘My God, My God, why have you abandoned me?’—before asking:

Here, Esther speaks the words of Ps 22 as one at risk of suffering innocently—or, at most, suffering for an ‘involuntary violation’.Footnote ⁵⁸ By way of contrast, the Greek pseudepigraphic work Joseph and Aseneth portrays a penitent Aseneth pleading with God to forgive her idolatry in words that echo LXX Ps 21. She cries out to be rescued from the mouth of the lion (12.9–11; cf. LXX Ps 21.14, 22) and professes that her lips are ‘as a potsherd’ and her ‘entire strength has left’ (13.9; cf. LXX Ps 21.16).Footnote ⁵⁹ In contrast to Esther, Aseneth's allusions to LXX Ps 21 present the suffering of the psalmist as merited.

Which of these traditions does Mark follow? The verbal allusions to Ps 22 (LXX Ps 21) in Mark 15 correspond closely with the Septuagint.Footnote ⁶⁰ In Mark 15.34, Jesus cries out the words of Ps 21.2 (LXX) first in transliterated Aramaic and Hebrew, then in Greek.Footnote ⁶¹ Mark's ὁ θɛός μου ὁ θɛός μου, ɛἰς τί ἐγκατέλιπές μɛ (Mark 15.34), is nearly identical to the Septuagint: Ὁ θɛὸς ὁ θɛός μου … ἵνα τί ἐγκατέλιπές μɛ (LXX Ps 21.2).Footnote ⁶² Since Mark also provides a transliteration of the Hebrew/Aramaic before providing a Greek translation, one may justifiably question whether Mark or his Vorlage was quoting from the LXX directly or whether he was familiar with a Hebrew/Aramaic textual tradition. Regardless, as Howard Clark Kee has shown, for the majority of biblical passages quoted in Mark 11–16, ‘the force of the argument or the specifics of the statements depend on the text as preserved in the LXX’.Footnote ⁶³ Furthermore, regardless of whether Mark had access to a Hebrew, Aramaic or Greek version of the Psalm, it is safe to assume that early readers of Mark's Greek gospel would be more familiar with the Septuagint than any Hebrew or Aramaic textual tradition. Mark's dependence or his readers’ familiarity with LXX Ps 21 suggests familiarity with this interpretation of merited suffering, of suffering caused by sin.

5 The Extended Inverted Allusion to LXX Psalm 21 in Mark 15

Mark had good reason to rework LXX Ps 21 using extended inverted allusion. A traditional reading of LXX Ps 21 does not fit Mark's message about Jesus’ suffering innocently (see Mark 15.10, 14) and does not depict a sufferer offering himself as ‘a ransom for many’ (Mark 10.45). Yet, by employing extended inverted allusion, Mark was able to disrupt the causality implied in LXX Ps 21.2, in which suffering is caused by sin. Additionally, by employing extended inverted allusion, Mark could connect Jesus with the psalmist, understood to be King David or anyone suffering for their sins, while simultaneously portraying Jesus as ‘a ransom for many’ (Mark 10.45).

The psalmist begins with a question and then provides the answer: ‘Why did you [God] forsake me? The accounts of my transgressions are far from my salvation’ (ἵνα τί ἐγκατέλιπές μɛ; μακρὰν ἀπὸ τῆς σωτηρίας μου οἱ λόγοι τῶν παραπτωμάτων μου—LXX Ps 21.2). The state of the psalmist is emphasised again a few verses later when he contrasts the ‘fathers’ who in times past had cried to God and were saved (LXX Ps 21.5–6) with himself who is a ‘worm’ (σκώληξ) and a ‘reproach’ (ὄνɛιδος) (LXX Ps 21.7).Footnote ⁶⁴ The psalmist receives no immediate reprieve from those who mock him ‘shaking the head’ (LXX Ps 21.8–9) or from those ‘dogs’ who ‘divided [his] garments’ (LXX Ps 21.17–19). This suffering is presented in the Septuagint as a consequence of his transgressions.Footnote ⁶⁵ Certainly, the Greek readers of Mark 15 familiar with the Septuagint of Ps 21, would not think of this psalmist as a righteous sufferer.Footnote ⁶⁶ It is here that Mark's extended inverted allusion to the Psalm first becomes significant.

When Mark employs these same passages from LXX Ps 21, he begins not with a mention of transgressions but with the suffering. Jesus’ garments are parted (Mark 15.24; cf. Ps 21.19), then he is mocked by those who ‘shake their heads’ (Mark 15.29; cf. Ps 21.8–9), but Mark provides no reason to suspect that Jesus merited this suffering. In fact, Pilate's realisation that the chief priests had handed Jesus over out of jealousy (Mark 15.10) and his questioning about what Jesus had done wrong (Mark 15.14) reinforces that Jesus’ suffering was unmerited. So, Jesus is ‘reproached’ (ὠνɛίδιζον) unjustly, whereas the psalmist was ‘a reproach’ (ὄνɛιδος) because of his transgressions (Mark 15.32; cf. LXX Ps 21.7).Footnote ⁶⁷ By concluding the direct verbal allusions to LXX Ps 21 with its beginning (21.2a) and by omitting the ‘transgressions’ (21.2b), Jesus’ cry of forsakenness comes as a result of suffering rather than sin. Just as Aeneas’ reversal of the account of Dido's death had obscured the causal relation between his departure and her demise, so too Mark's inverted allusions to the psalmist's suffering change the causal relationship between the reason for forsakenness and the suffering.Footnote ⁶⁸ By reversing the Psalm, the results of the psalmist's transgressions in the Septuagint have become the cause of Jesus’ suffering in Mark. And whereas the psalmist's suffering was merited, Jesus’ forsakenness is unmerited.Footnote ⁶⁹

Mark's extended inverted allusion to LXX Ps 21 may also have soteriological implications. In the Gospel of Mark, Jesus’ suffering and death is ‘a ransom for many’ (λύτρον ἀντὶ πολλῶν—Mark 10.45), and his blood is poured out ‘for many’ (ὑπὲρ πολλῶν—Mark 14.26). This is quite different from the message of LXX Ps 21. In the Psalm, read as the words of King David, David laments: ‘I am poured out like water’ and ‘you brought me down into the dust of death’ (LXX Ps 21.15–16). In fact, he is treated as if he were already dead: ‘They divided out my garments for themselves, and for my clothing they cast lots’ (LXX Ps 21.19; cf. Mark 15.24). Yet this suffering is his alone; it is not ‘for many’. Moreover, the psalmist expresses hope that God would rescue him (Ps 21.9–10, 19–22)—passages that are absent from Mark 15. In the time of Mark, a reader of this Davidic Psalm would have assumed that God, indeed, would act to rescue the king. For this reason, Joel Marcus sees contradiction, a paradox, in Jesus speaking from the cross the supposed words of a forsaken King David.

Mark's extended inverted allusion to LXX Psalm 21 reinforces this point. As seen above, Psalms of Individual Lament follow a general pattern that begins with suffering and supplication, then concludes with salvation (or anticipated salvation) and praise (or promised praise).Footnote ⁷¹ Mark's extended inverted allusion to LXX Ps 21, like the allusion to Herodotus in Maximus of Tyre, creates a new trajectory. In its proper order, one follows the psalmist away from sin and danger toward deliverance. Jesus’ journey through the same Psalm takes him in the opposite direction. For Mark, the Messiah was not exactly like King David or a son of David (see Mark 12.36–7). For Mark, the Messiah had come to give his life as ‘a ransom for many’ (Mark 10.45)—perhaps including for King David. So rather than travelling the narrative path in the same direction as King David, Jesus meets David at the beginning of his journey out of sin (LXX Ps 21.2; cf. Mark 15.36). Jesus’ words of utter abandonment on the cross join with David's words—the words of many—of abandonment and distance from God caused by sin. Jesus meets King David and others at the moment of greatest forsakenness.