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Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  30 March 2026

John Zobitz
Affiliation:
Department of Mathematics, Computer Science, and Data Science, Augsburg University, Minneapolis, USA
Xuan Zhou
Affiliation:
Department of Environmental and Biological Sciences, University of Eastern Finland, Joensuu, Finland
Heidi Aaltonen
Affiliation:
Department of Agricultural Sciences, University of Helsinki, Helsinki, Finland
Egle Köster
Affiliation:
School of Forest Sciences, University of Eastern Finland, Joensuu, Finland
Frank Berninger
Affiliation:
Department of Environmental and Biological Sciences, University of Eastern Finland, Joensuu, Finland
Jukka Pumpanen
Affiliation:
Department of Environmental and Biological Sciences, University of Eastern Finland, Kuopio, Finland
Kajar Köster*
Affiliation:
Department of Environmental and Biological Sciences, University of Eastern Finland, Joensuu, Finland
*
Corresponding author: Kajar Köster; Email: kajar.koster@uef.fi

Abstract

Forest fires alter soil organic carbon and suppress soil respiration for decades following disturbance. However, uncertainties in model parameterization and sensitivity hinder robust predictions of autotrophic and heterotrophic soil respiration responses. We addressed this challenge using a novel dataset from a fire chronosequence in the Yukon and Northwest Territories of Canada. The dataset included field measurements of total soil respiration at four sites with varying time since fire, supplemented by field measurements of soil temperature at two depths, remote sensing data on aboveground productivity, and soil moisture at two depths. We evaluated a suite of soil respiration models, ranging from exponential $ {Q}_{10} $ formulations to heterotrophic respiration models using Michaelis–Menten kinetics. To estimate parameters efficiently, we (1) derived algebraic expressions for soil respiration components assuming quasi-steady state dynamics and (2) applied a Markov Chain Monte Carlo (MCMC) approach for parameter estimation. The resulting parameter estimates revealed which parameters were well-constrained and where uncertainty remained. Modeled respiration agreed with established empirical relationships and highlighted two key findings: (1) all chronosequence sites favored models that explicitly included microbial carbon as a distinct pool, and (2) parameters related to aboveground litter inputs were better constrained than those for root turnover. These results held regardless of soil depth or the form of the autotrophic respiration moisture response. These findings indicate that direct field measurements of litterfall rates would reduce model uncertainty, and that targeted sampling during seasonal transitions (e.g., freeze–thaw periods) would provide critical constraints on microbial activity when respiration dynamics are most variable.

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Figure 1. Map of chronosequence site locations in the Yukon and the Northwest Territories of Canada. For both maps, orange areas demarcate the areal extent of the forest fire. Panel a) illustrates the southern chronosequence sites that were burned in 1968 (triangles), 1990 (circles), 2012 (squares), and a Control site (diamonds). Panel b) illustrates the northern sites, which contains chronosequence sites that were burned in 1968 (triangles) and an additional Control site (diamonds). Maps provided by © OpenStreetMap contributors © CartoDB.

Figure 1

Figure 2. Timeseries of input variables ($ SWC $, $ {F}_{GPP} $, or $ {T}_S $ at 5 or 10 cm depth) for the FireGrow model across the model evaluation period (1 January 2016–31 December 2022). Observations of $ {F}_{GPP} $ and $ SWC $ include the 95% confidence interval for $ {F}_{GPP} $ and $ SWC $, which represents the 95% confidence interval over all MODIS pixels for that particular site.

Figure 2

Figure 3. Conceptual diagrams of the different submodels examined in the FireGrow model. Boxes represent the different soil carbon pools in each submodel. For all models, input rates include gross primary productivity ($ {F}_{GPP} $), vascular plant litter ($ {L}_{VP} $), moss and lichen litter ($ {L}_{ML} $), and living tree litter ($ {L}_T $). Output rates include autotrophic respiration ($ {R}_A $), microbe growth respiration ($ {R}_G $), and microbe heterotrophic respiration ($ {R}_H $). All rates are represented with solid arrows. Dashed arrows represent transformation processes to each pool (see Supplementary Information for a detailed description of the model). The Null submodel (panel a) considers two soil carbon pools (roots and soil). The Microbe submodel (panel b) includes a separate bulk carbon pool for soil carbon microbes (Microbes box in red). Finally the Quality submodel (panel c) differentiates the soil into four additional soil carbon pools ($ {C}_1 $, $ {C}_2 $, $ {C}_3 $, and $ {C}_A $). Pools $ {C}_1 $, $ {C}_2 $, and $ {C}_3 $ represent soil carbon with increasing recalcitrance. Soil transformation from $ {C}_1 $, $ {C}_2 $, or $ {C}_3 $ are inputs to $ {C}_A $, which is a buffer pool of carbon accessible to microbes. In the process of decomposition, a portion of $ {C}_1 $ and $ {C}_2 $ transitions into $ {C}_2 $ and $ {C}_3 $, respectively. Litter input rates ($ {L}_{VP} $, $ {L}_{ML} $, and $ {L}_T $) are assigned to $ {C}_1 $, $ {C}_2 $, or $ {C}_3 $ based on their assumed decomposition rate.

Figure 3

Table 1. Description of parameters used for the FireGrow model

Figure 4

Figure 4. Violin distributions from parameter estimation for different submodels (Null, Microbe, and Quality), parameterized with soil respiration at 5 cm depth (left three columns) or 10 cm depth (right three columns). For each subplot, the horizontal axis is arranged by year of fire disturbance (2012, 1990, 1968, or Control), and the vertical axis is scaled according to the minimum and maximum values of the parameter estimates in Table 1, with dashed gridlines representing quartiles (consistent across each row). The red line in each violin plot connects the median estimated value of each parameter across the chronosequence.

Figure 5

Table 2. Statistics from the posterior log-likelihood function ($ \ln (L) $) from the MCMC parameter estimation method at each chronosequence site and FireGrow submodel

Figure 6

Figure 5. Comparison between measured soil respiration ($ {R}_{S, meas} $) to modeled soil respiration ($ {R}_{S,\mathit{\operatorname{mod}}} $) from FireGrow submodel evaluation using sets of accepted parameter values from MCMC optimization. Values of $ {R}_{S, meas} $ are computed as the median within each replicate plot at each chronosequence site, shown as a violin plot to indicate the distribution of $ {R}_{S, meas} $. Values of $ {R}_{S,\mathit{\operatorname{mod}}} $ are computed as the median values of $ {R}_S $ in August when field measurements occurred. $ {R}^2 $ values for each regression are displayed on the subplot.

Figure 7

Figure 6. Forward model evaluation results of summarized annual timeseries, along with the 50% centered confidence interval for each of the submodels (Null, Microbe, and Quality) and depth of soil temperature measurements (5 or 10 cm). The ensemble average was computed from model results from 1 January 2016 to 31 December 2022 generated from all sets of accepted parameter values. Soil respiration fluxes are reported in gC m$ {}^{-2} $ d$ {}^{-1} $. $ {R}_A $: autotrophic respiration; $ {R}_G $: microbial growth respiration; $ {R}_H $: microbial maintenance respiration; $ {R}_S $: total soil respiration $ \Big(={R}_A+{R}_G+{R}_H $); and $ {p}_A={R}_A/{R}_S $ (unitless).

Figure 8

Figure 7. Forward model results of the annual proportion of components of soil respiration for each of the submodels (Null, Microbe, and Quality) and depth of soil temperature measurements (5 or 10 cm). Proportions were computed with soil respiration using the median values from Figure 6. $ {p}_A $: proportion of autotrophic respiration (yellow); $ {p}_G $: proportion of heterotrophic growth respiration (purple); $ {p}_H $: proportion of heterotrophic maintenance respiration (blue). We assume $ {p}_A $ is zero in freezing soils, so results are only shown when $ {p}_A>0 $, considered to be the active growing season (approximately April–October).

Figure 9

Figure 8. Associations between annual soil respiration components, cumulative litterfall, and the proportion of autotrophic respiration compared to parameterization at either the 5 cm or 10 cm depth and the soil carbon submodel studied. For each scatterplot, boxes represent the 25–75% distribution of a covariate, and whiskers represent the minimum or maximum of a measurement, with points representing the median value, as reported in the Supplementary Information. Since $ {R}_A $ is zero for freezing soils, values of $ {p}_A $ are computed during the active growing season (approximately April–October). For comparison, previously reported empirical relationships are represented. (a): $ {R}_S=161+3.61{L}_T $, Davidson et al. (2002); (b): $ \ln \left({R}_H\right)=0.22+0.87\ln \left({R}_S\right) $, Bond-Lamberty et al. (2004b) and Bond-Lamberty and Thomson (2010); (c): $ {p}_A=-0.482+0.138\ln \left({R}_S\right) $, Subke et al. (2006).

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Author comment: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R0/PR1

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Augsburg University

Tel: 612-330-1068

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zobitz@augsburg.edu

August 15, 2024

Dr. Claire Monteleoni, Editor-in-Chief

University of Colorado, Boulder & INRIA, France

Dear Dr. Monteleoni,

Please consider the enclosed manuscript for publication in Environmental Data Science. The manuscript is entitled, “Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence”. Our manuscript parameterizes soil respiration models with data collected along a forest fire chronosequence in Northern Canada. Model outputs are then evaluated by examining annual patterns in respiration outputs and through statistical analyses. We believe this study carefully analyzes the effect of model structure and site differences on the interpretation of model results.

We believe that Environmental Data Science is an excellent venue for publication of this work. One of the Journal’s aims are:

“the use of data-driven approaches to understand environmental processes - including climate change - and aid sustainable decision-making. The data and methodological scope is defined broadly to encompass artificial intelligence, machine learning, data mining, computer vision, econometrics and other statistical techniques.”

Our study illustrates workflows for the collection and harmonization of different data streams (from field level to remote sensing measurements) for a machine learning approach. A factorial approach is applied for model parameter estimation and evaluation. The methods shown here provide a computationally efficient framework for comparative analyses of sites using a common modeling approach. This framework is useful in the absence of access to high performance computing environments. In total, this manuscript contributes to the growing body of literature on the importance of understanding and modeling soil carbon dynamics through modeling in natural environments.

Our study is an application and methods paper relating to permafrost soils. This manuscript is the product of collaboration between an environmental data scientist (Zobitz) and biogeochemists (the other authors). It is a continuation of previous work that parameterized similar soil carbon models using the same chronosequence data (Zobitz et al. 2021, Geoscientific Model Development), but that study focused exclusively on parameterization and not on simulation of dynamic model outputs. This current study is a natural continuation of our previous efforts (and candidly the initial objective when the study was proposed in 2020).

We have archived our input data, processing files, and output on zenodo (https://zenodo.org/doi/10.5281/zenodo.11493787) per the journal guidelines to promote open data and data re-use.

Suggested reviewers for the manuscript include:

- Göran Ågren, Swedish University of Agricultural Sciences, goran.agren@slu.se

- Ben Bond Lamberty, Pacific Northwest National Lab/University of Maryland, bondlamberty@pnnl.gov

- Bill de Groot, Great Lakes Forestry Center, bill.degroot@canada.ca

- Mike Flannigan, University of Alberta, mike.flannigan@ualberta.ca

- Debjani Sihi, Emory University, debjani.sihi@emory.edu

- Sampo Smolander, Princeton University, sampos@princeton.edu

- Kathe Todd-Brown, University of Florida, kathe.toddbrown@essie.ufl.edu

We’ve selected a variety of suggested reviewers with expertise in modeling, soils biogeochemistry, or fire disturbances who we believe will be well-suited to critically evaluate the manuscript.

Please contact us if you have questions or concerns. Thanks very much!

Sincerely,

John M. Zobitz

Professor of Mathematics and Data Science

Augsburg University

Review: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R0/PR2

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Summary:

The authors apply a modified Metropolis-Hastings algorithm for the parameterization of 3 respiration models to a chronosequence dataset with 4 sites that have experienced wildfires at different points in time in the past. The stated goal is to investigate the causes of uncertainty in the model forecasts of autotrophic and heterotrophic respiration. The paper is well written and especially the presentation of the data, including the plots, is very well done. Good job! While I do agree with the importance of the problem at hand and the potential of the data, I have remaining doubts regarding the proposed method, the findings and the main contributions of the presented work, especially with regard to one of the authors' previous work referenced as Zobitz et al. [103]. In said work the same dataset has been introduced, (though, if understand it correctly, this work now adds remote sensing data to the in situ measurements), a subset of the models of the manuscript at hand is taken from the previous work as well and also the finding of the need for models that include microbes is being restated. If the novelty is the modified Metropolis-Hastings algorithm, I wonder if it is sufficiently explained, investigated and justified and if an application paper is the right format for it.

This doubt might be resolved if the authors state more clearly how this work extends their previous work and what new answers it brings.

Further doubts, questions and suggestions are stated below.

Questions, comments and suggestions:

Major comments:

I have my doubts about the contributions and the focus of this work. It reads as an extension to a previous publication from the first and most of the co-authors referenced as Zobitz et al. [103], given that there is a strong overlap of data, models and potentially even findings. A major difference seems to be the method for data assimilation. Please clarify in what way the current work extends or is different from the previous work. What shortcomings does it correct or what new questions does it answer. Why the need to switch from Levenberg–Marquardt optimization to your proposed modified Metropolis-Hastings algorithm for the data assimilation?

Maybe the previous question already shines a different light on the method but at this point, I am unsure about the justification for the proposed method. From my understanding, people use MCMC methods such as the Metropolis-Hastings algorithm with either the goal to sample from a complicated target distribution (e.g. the posterior in some Bayesian framework) or for some form a stochastic optimization. Especially for the former, usually, certain theoretical guarantees (such as convergence to target distribution, ergodicity, etc.) need to be fulfilled. It is not apparent to me that this is the case and would need to be formally proven (unless you have some other reference for that). For stochastic optimization, however, it is certainly a valid way of optimizing and trying to explore the space. I would raise a bit of doubt about how meaningful in terms of “uncertainty” the obtained distribution from the stochastic optimization process actually is. If I understand the rejection step correctly, we would never accept any set of parameters that has a lower RMSE. I would like to understand:

Why exactly is it preferable over normal HM (you mainly want to optimize rather than sample from some distribution, which is why it is more efficient and faster? I don’t see why a single step in your proposed method would be cheaper.)

Why don’t you choose gradient-based methods as before (you optimize the RMSE with respect to the median? Over the different lines per site? Why not for each line when it should be differentiable if I am not wrong)

How does the proposed method compare to some other baseline? A new method should be compared to something, at least for part of the data or model, as a proof of concept. Maybe some comparison in performance to the pervious study is possible. I am generally missing some form of goodness of fit measure for the method in the results.

Why and how is the obtained parameter spread/”uncertainty” meaningful? That is important if the goal is to reduce it.

Minor comments:

P1L31-P1L35. What does persistent model prediction sensitivity mean? Does the “and” mean models that have both? Or either of (1) and (2). How does this relate to the need for prioritizing root turnover and root exudates models? The abstract starts with the goal of investigating the “cause of uncertainty.” What are your concrete findings?

P2L25: What do you mean by consistent here? Mechanistically consistent? Consistent parameter values? Consistent performance?

P3L10-21: I suggest that you not only pose the main questions here but also say what your contributions and your findings are.

P3L19-21: Even though I would want to believe these findings extend to other regions, future studies still need to show that.

P3L52: I wonder what happened to the soil temperature measurements at 30cm depth that were mentioned before. Do they ever play a role in the paper again?

P5EQ2.1: Isn’t the temperature in the exponent of the Q10 model usually shifted to a reference temperature?

P5L47: Here, you refer to root respiration as R_A. I assume you use it interchangeably with autotrophic respiration. I am slightly confused with the indexing. You define R_X = g_X*C_X for X=A,H. But then later in Eq. 2.2 you use g_R, which is not defined and, I assume, should actually be g_A following the previous definition. Please somehow homogenize that.

P6L28-29: If k_x has unit d^-1 and C_x gCm^-2d^-1 then the units don’t add up.

P6L44-L47: Why did you switch from NPP to F_GPP?

P6L44-L47: I suppose you meant that “the ratio of NPP to F_GPP is 0.4-0.6”, that’s also in line with the referenced study.

P7EQ2.4: Why is there suddenly a star on C_R?

P7L19: k_A and mu are mentioned but they do not seem to appear in the equation

P7L20: How is equation 2.3 for R_A if it defines R_H?

P7L29: Formally, X=3 would lead to X+1=4, which is not defined. Revise the notation, please.

For each of the models, you state which equations between 2.2 to 2.5 define their respiration components. Can you clarify how they are still connected to 2.1? Does that equation always hold “in parallel”?

P8L4: What does estimated from the literature mean? Taken from literature? Literature that estimated them?

P8L4: Regarding the method and some comparison to baselines as I described before. Just as an example: I wonder what happens if you infer all or also part of the parameters “you know” together with the unknowns. Does the method capture similar values?

P8L7: Maybe I missed that. What equation does k_M appear in?

P8L10-22: Please clarify some details of the fitting: Model is run from 2009 to 2022, you compute\report the outputs 2016-2022 (to avoid the spin off), you fit on August (year? only 2015?) and the median is taken over the lines? As a side note: It would be interesting to see the variation of the results between different lines at each location.

P8L33-34: Please revise the formulation: “the test confirmed that the distribution of a different parameter value was significantly different…”. -> “The distribution of a parameter between sites was significantly different”?

P23Fig 7 caption: I guess also here (similar to Figure 8), the blocks mark the measurement period. Please explain that in the caption. What are the positions in the y-direction and sizes of the boxes?

P10Tbl2: As Figure 10 nicely visualizes the different medians and spreads, I wonder how much information the table actually adds. Might be useful for somebody…

P11L27-29: Highlights August as the month we are conditioning on. Why August?

P11L19-22: I don’t exactly understand how the curves with respect to the gray boxes imply the suitability of the fit.

Grammar/Language/Typos:

P2L7: provides -> provide

P2L19: an common -> a common

P2L30: delete “focuses”

P2L31: I think it is missing an “of” before “soil respiration”

P3L40: on the same time -> at the same time

P4L29: I think this is missing a noun (-> , we): “For the 2012 site used MODES pixels entirely contained within the fire boundary.”

P6L33: dymamic -> dynamic

P11L42-43: “[...] with fluxes reduced model prediction uncertainty was reduced [...]’’ (too many ‘‘reduced’’s)

Review: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R0/PR3

Conflict of interest statement

none Since there is no ‘Confidential Comments to Editor‘ section, I leave this comment here. I think this paper should initially be rejected, but with an invitation to resubmit. The study absolutely has potential, but the manuscript is so poorly drafted that I found it impossible to properly assess its scientific quality. Therefore, a rejection would be warranted, or at least very substantial major revisions - which is ultimately the recommendation I chose, to give the authors a chance to improve this work.

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<h1><b><span style=’color:#7030A0'>Review of Zobitz et al. Combined effects of

site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian

wildfire chronosequence</span></b></h1>

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<h2>A summary of the paper, stressing what in it is new and interesting;</h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Zobitz et al. present a data-model fusion approach to

asses soil respiration in four Canadian fire chronosequence sites. The study

assesses three different model structures of the FireGrow model of varying

complexity: with and without microbes, and with different litter inputs. For

all three model structures, model parameters are estimated using a previous

study and introduces a computationally efficient Metropolis Hastings algorithm

to estimate a subset of parameters that could not be effectively estimated in the

earlier work from these authors. The paper combines field data, remote sensing

data, and a simple soil carbon model to assess causes of model uncertainty,

which is an interesting use of different techniques and an important

contribution t the oil carbon modelling community. Although the work is

scientifically promising, the presentation of the data is extremely poor and

needs careful reassessment before publication is warranted. I will outline my

reasons below.</p>

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<h2>Your judgement of the overall quality of the paper and its suitability for

EDS, bearing in mind that the journal is seeking to publish research that uses

novel sources of data and data-intensive methods as applied to engineering

science and practice</h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>This research is potentially interesting, but the overall

quality of the paper is significantly reduced due to what I can only describe

as messy writing. Despite the study’s promising abstract/title and significant

potential contributions to future soil respiration research, it falls short in

several key areas, preventing it from being a comprehensive study. In its

present state, the writing seems rushed and is riddled with mistakes, which

made it difficult to properly assess the scientific quality of the work. I

recommend withholding publication until substantial improvements are made, and

a full peer-review of the resubmitted draft.</p>

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<h2>Your evaluation of whether the paper is technically correct and

scientifically sound;</h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The results for this study are so marginally presented

that it is difficult to assess whether the study is scientifically sound (see

comments below). Most importantly, the authors do not convincingly show the

differences between the three models and how their results lead up to the rather

strong conclusions made at the end. For example, I am not at all convinced that

basing all parameters on field data from one annual timepoint is sufficient,

especially as there can be such large seasonal variation in the partitioning of

Ra and Rh. The authors briefly touch upon this study limitation in the discussion,

but should provide stronger argumentation as to why the model results can be

valid for the whole simulation period, relating to the use of the additional

data sources on GPP, LST and NDVI. This connection is valid, but comes with its

own limitations which are also not discussed.</p>

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<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The authors then spend time discussing 1) the effects of

the chronosequence and 2) differences between the three model structures,

although these differences are not presented in the results section unless the

reader somehow deduces all that information from the 10 figures on their own.

Therefore, it is currently not possible to determine whether the statements

made in sections 4 and 5 are actually supported by the results of the study. In

particular, the authors state that they “[…] recommend that inclusion of soil

microbes in soil models will lead to better model-data agreement of soil

respiration”. However, despite personally hoping for additional studies that

support this outcome, I found that the paper does not present clear evidence

that using more complex microbial models will lead to better data-model

agreement – especially since the data from the field study were not presented

at all in section 3. </p>

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<h2>An assessment of whether the paper is written clearly and whether its

length is appropriate;</h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The paper needs thorough revising in terms of grammar and

overall readability. Reading it, I felt the writing was very rushed (vague

process descriptions, one figure missing), and that especially the first part

of the manuscript (introduction, methods, results) did not receive careful textual

and language editing by the (co)authors before submission. Citations need to be

updated to match the journal template in APA style, and the authors need to

follow the template instructions for figure captions, equation numbering, etc.

With regards to language editing, attention should be given to grammar and

sentence flow. Often words were missing in a sentence, double words describing

the same things were used, or there were changes between the use of active and

passive voice within a paragraph or even mid-sentence (<a

href="https://scitechedit.com/knowing-how-when-and-where-to-use-active-and-passive-voice-in-science-writing">https://scitechedit.com/knowing-how-when-and-where-to-use-active-and-passive-voice-in-science-writing</a>).

For the introduction, and methods section I gave some detailed examples of the

above issues, but eventually stopped writing down all the specific comments

because they were very common throughout the rest of the manuscript. The

authors need to do a careful proofreading (either themselves, or by a

professional editor) before resubmitting the next version of this manuscript. I

am confident that with these changes, the paper will be very nice to read and

of interest to the journal’s target audience.</p>

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<h2>General suggestions for improving the paper, including suggestions about

the overall approach and structure of the paper and for additional work that

might be required;</h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The final part of the abstract and the impact statement

are different from each other. It is unclear whether these sections should

match or that one states the main outcome of the study incorrectly. The

abstract mentions the importance of root turnover and root exudates, whereas

the impact statement emphasizes the importance of microbial dynamics. Please

update those sections accordingly. </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The introduction is interesting and, in my opinion, contains

all the relevant topics for the paper’s scope, but would greatly benefit from

some textual edits to improve its clarity, readability and flow. In the current

version, I was often able to deduce what the authors might mean, but specific

process descriptions were vague or missing. Some examples are added below under

‘detailed suggestions.</p>

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<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The authors’ choice of using categorical variables 1968,

1990, and 2012 to name the different study sites is not so intuitive to me,

although this is definitely not a dealbreaker. But, I found it quite confusing in

some figures, for example in Figure 2 of the manuscript and Figure S2 of the

supplement the panel headers are different ‘years’ than the ‘Year’ on the

x-axis. I would like to suggest a different naming, for example ‘years since

burning’ or ‘years post-burning’. Alternatively, the authors might consider

colour coding all the graphs in the manuscript to match the colours used to

depict the burn areas in Fig. 1, rather than the default ggplot colours.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The methods section needs to be cleaned up, as the

current version contains many mistakes and missing items (see detailed

suggestions).</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Overall, the presentation of the study’s methods and

results is not very strong due to the textual limitations and missing information.

I have read the discussion, and found a lot of the relevant information missing

in sections 2 and 3 scattered throughout. Due to time constraints, I have

confined my comments to the introduction, methodology and results section. All

sections of this paper need thorough revisions and careful proofreading. Only

then can the discussion and conclusions be assessed in a meaningful way. </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<h2>Detailed suggestions for improving the paper</h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Line 3 in abstract - Missing word:

because of uncertainties</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 7 Repeated word use, suggest to

replace different forest with forest</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 13 Please be specific and update to

anthropogenic emissions for clarity. C fluxes into the atmospheric from natural

sources are also C emissions.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 19-21 Please clarify that the step from soil

respiration to heterotrophic respiration is made here in reference to Shao et

al. (2013). The previous sentence only mentions soil respiration, and no

information on the composition of Rs (Rh + Ra) is introduced. In addition, it

is not clear to me why this study is an example of model equifinality on soil

respiration, as Shao et al. are specifically targeting Rh? This paragraph would

benefit from further clarification, so that it makes evident why it is so

important to reduce model equifinality (which I totally agree is needed!).</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 31-33 I do not understand this sentence structure and

its reasoning. Why does the range of models (by which I now assume the authors

mean the diversity in model structural<span lang=EN-US> representations?)

reflect the importance of ‘contextual understanding’ at a specific site (by

which I assume </span>the authors<span lang=EN-US> mean the understanding of

the respiration fluxes at a specific site given its specific characteristics?),

and why does this mean we need to unify modeling frameworks? I would rather

argue that the large range of predictions coming from different modeling

approaches is a reflection of how much of the respiration processes and site-specific

variation in respiration data we still do not understand. Uncertainties arises

from different model mathematical structures, parameter uncertainties, as well

as uncertainties in the experimental data with which a model is verified. Although

more focused on the soil model components of ESMs (and thus on C stocks and

Rs), here are two nice references to consider in this context. </span><span

lang=NL>1) Ben Sulman et al. 2018: </span><a

href="https://doi.org/10.1007/s10533-018-0509-z"><span lang=NL>https://doi.org/10.1007/s10533-018-0509-z</span></a><span

lang=NL> and 2) Shi et al. </span><span lang=EN-US>(2018): </span><a

href="https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-04526-9"><span lang=EN-US>https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-04526-9</span></a><span

lang=EN-US>. If the authors chose to keep the focus on the cited model studies

to predict soil respiration and/or heterotrophic respiration (l. 34-35), this

distinction should be made clear in this entire part of the introduction.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 39-40 Check grammar and remove double

wording</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 42 Explain what is ‘site’? Site is

not an effect in itself.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 83-84 Please be more specific in the

evaluation goal. The authors wish to evaluate the effects of ‘site and model

parametrization on what, exactly?</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 42-58 It feels like only now the

factors that the authors consider to be important for site specific variability

are introduced. This feels very much ad-hoc, and I think this should be made

clear earlier in the text by reorganizing the argumentation and paragraph

structure of the introduction a bit. This would greatly improve the readability

and textual flow.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 50 Remove ‘known’, or provide

references mid-sentence.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 56 remove in-text reference from [36].

Also, to further illustrate this point, more recent estimates from different

data sources exist nowadays, e.g. see Fan et al. (2022): </span><a

href="https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-12-2517-2020"><span lang=EN-US>https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-12-2517-2020</span></a><span

lang=EN-US> (Table 2 in particular). </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 60-61. Unclear, check grammar of this

sentence</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 59-79 Please reorganize the end of

the introduction for better clarity and readability of the studies’ goals and

research approach. Specifically:</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>- move very specific methodology to the

methods section (and keep a more generalized description of what was done and

to serve which purpose)</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>- Clarify what the former studies found

and how this new study logically follows and reaches its own goals</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>- Remove the bullet points from the

introduction and rewrite in clear, short sentences.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Sections 2.1 and 2.2 and Supplement

material. Please describe during which time periods the different measurements

and forcing data were collected.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 82 What does briefly mean here? Are

the main site characteristics summarized?</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 92 What is a microbial biomass

‘assay’? I did not find a relevant dictionary explanation after some google

searching, but am not an expert in laboratory techniques and simply might not

know this term.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 101-102 Unclear due to double word

use for incubation data</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Fig. 1. Please describe in the caption that

b) and c) are insets of a), and add a general and/or names to describe the

different shaded areas and boxes. It is also unclear what the difference is

between a ‘fire area’, a ‘fire site’ and a ‘fire boundary’, as these terms are

used interchangeably. What are the areas in the blue/red boxes, and why were

they not color coded using the same pink and orange used for the shading in the

inset Figs. b) and c)? What is the purple/blueish shade? Please add all the

shaded areas with a description to the legend, are these the fire boundaries? And

how does the pink shade differ from the orange and the purple one? You can also

add the black parallelograms boxes for the Modis pixels to this legend as well.

It is also unclear what “For the 2012 site used MODIS pixels entirely contained

within the fire boundary” means. Lastly, a spatial scale indicator (in text of

a graphical one) is needed for these maps. </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 110 Where is ‘here’? In the study

areas?</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 108 Please describe in section 2.2.1

for which time periods the 8-day Modus images were collected. Are these the

same time spans as for the other site data?</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 114-135 Please state why two

different estimates for LST, GPP and NDVI were needed? Was there a difference

in spatial/temporal coverage between the two? If I recall correctly, Modis aqua

and terra have different overpass times which might relevant for the time of

day of each respective measurement. In light of the diurnal cycle, this should

be mentioned. </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 133 Explain the acronym QA. It’s

probably quality assurance, mentioned first a few lines earlier. Please also do

this for the term QA/QC in the Supplement material.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 136-145 Please connect the text with

the requested visual updates of Fig. 1, so that it is very clear what the

different areas on the maps represent. Right now, it is it for example not

possible to see from Fig. 1d) which MODIS pixel was used for the 2012 site, as

there are two parallelograms that fully fall within the burned area.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 154-212 Section 2.3 needs to be

reorganized and cleaned up. There are many mistakes in the sentence structure,

equations, and even missing parameters in the equations.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 158-159 Please explain why the model

simulations spanned these 13 years? There is no information in the manuscript

on when the site-measurements were taken (sections 2.1 and 2.2).</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Figure 2. The use of colored lines is

obsolete in this figure. If kept, a legend should be provided for each color.

The temperatures at 5 and 10 cm could be displayed in one panel, so that it is

easy to spot the difference between soil depths.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Figure 3 is missing in-line from the

manuscript (but fortunately attached at the end, as well as all following

Figures 5-10). Similar to the solid and dashed arrows, please add the rectangular

boxes to the visual descriptions at the end, e.g. “Boxes represent the different

soil C pools in each submodel.” </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Specifically, in In Fig. 3c), it is not

described what the dark grey vertical dashed lines represent. These dashed

lines, for some unknown reason, do not reach the very end of the Soil

compartment box at the right-hand side of the figure, beyond L<sub>T</sub>. Maybe

they should be drawn as another type of rectangular box, as they depict the

partitioning of the different litter inputs to form C<sub>A</sub>. The acronym

C<sub>A</sub> is not explained in the caption, and why are these 3 different soil

C pools not named after their respective litter inputs? I.e., C<sub>VP</sub>, C<sub>ML</sub>

and C<sub>T</sub>?</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 163 Additionally, the models differ

in their consideration of different litter inputs (C substrate quality).</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Below L. 165 Number the equations

according to the journal template, i.e. (1), (2), …, (n).</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 166 Please indicate that these are

model parameters and refer to section 2.4. </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 168 Please rewrite and clarify. It is

unclear how the formula </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>ℎ</span><span

lang=EN-US>(</span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝑆𝑊𝐶</span><span

lang=EN-US>) = 3.11 </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝑆𝑊𝐶</span><span

lang=EN-US> − 2.42 </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝑆𝑊𝐶</span><sup><span

lang=EN-US>2</span></sup><span lang=EN-US> is used. Do you fit each SWC value

from the forcing data to find a value for </span><span lang=EN-US

style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>ℎ</span><span lang=EN-US>? </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 174 Refer to Table 1 for the model

parameters</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Eq. 2.4 Please explain what the star

notation in C<sup>*</sup><sub>R</sub> means (I guess I is the analytical

solution for C<sub>R</sub> in quasi steady state?). Same thing for equation

2.5.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 193 Parameters k<sub>A</sub> and mu

are missing in equation 2.4.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 197 This partitioning seems important

for understanding the overall model behavior. Please elaborate what the method

by Bosatta and Ågren does, especially with respect to the first order rate

constant (turnover time) for the different soil types. Which soil types are

considered in the Quality model, and how does this affect the turnover times?</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 199-201 This information should be

included in the design and caption of Figure 3c.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 219 Why was this assumed? Please explain

why the parameters (</span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝐿𝑉𝑃</span><span

lang=EN-US>, </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝐿𝑀𝐿</span><span

lang=EN-US>, and </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝐿𝑇</span><span

lang=EN-US>), root turnover (</span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝛿𝑅</span><span

lang=EN-US>) and respiration (</span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝑘𝑅</span><span

lang=EN-US>, </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝑘𝑀</span><span

lang=EN-US>, and </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝑘</span><span

lang=EN-US> </span><span lang=EN-US style=’font-family:“Cambria Math”,serif'>𝐴</span><span

lang=EN-US>)) were expected to be sensitive for soil respiration, and why these

could not be estimated from literature or were badly constrained in Zobitz et

al. [103], so that parameter estimation using the modified Metropolis-Hastings

methods was needed.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>L. 231-232 Please describe in the

methods how FireGrow model spinup was conducted.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Figure 4 needs a y-axis for each

parameter. It is not acceptable to refer the reader to the minimum and maximum

values in Table 1, so that they can reimagine what the range of values is in

each tiny boxplot. A possible solution could be to normalize the ranges between

e.g. 0 and 1, so that at least all boxplots can be displayed using the same

y-axis.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 233-285 In the results section there are quite some

methodological aspects that need to be moved to the methods section (e.g.

statistical tests, model run protocol, and the argumentation to report 25<sup>th</sup>/75<sup>th</sup>

percentiles rather than standard deviations is missing). Furthermore, the

results are not presented in a very descriptive way, and the figure captions

often lack information that is scattered throughout the paper. For example, the

authors refer to a link between SWC and drops in Ra in Figures 6 and 7, but the

figures do not illustrate this example. It would be helpful if the information

from Figure 2 and 6 & 7 could be visually combined. It also remains a

mystery what the grey blocks around August inside the Rsoil panels in Figs.

6&7 represent until one reads the first paragraph of the discussion.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing style=’text-indent:36.0pt'>Additionally, I recommend to

visually combine the results of Figures 6 and 7, and 8 & 9 into one Figure

to reduce the large number of graphs, and make it easier to see the distinction

between the model results for the two soil depths. These differences between

depths and their relative contributions to the modelled fluxes should also be

separately discussed.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing style=’text-indent:36.0pt'>It is also a complete surprise

that in Fig. 10, three different reported empirical relationships between

litter and respiration from literature are presented. While I appreciate that

this is an interesting analysis to support the model results, the authors

should properly introduce the background as to why this analysis was conducted

in the introduction and methods section of the paper.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing style=’text-indent:36.0pt'>The methods section also needs

to be revised in such a way that the differences between the null, microbial,

and quality model can be better understood. Right now, the reader is left to

deduce all the information from the figures, without any textual support to

explore the differences (and reasons for these differences) between the large

amount of model data presented in this study. The field data are not presented

at all in the results section, but mentioned in the first paragraph of the

discussion.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<h2><span lang=EN-US>References</span></h2>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Fan, N., Koirala, S., Reichstein, M.,

Thurner, M., Avitabile, V., Santoro, M., Ahrens, B., Weber, U., and Carvalhais,

N.: Apparent ecosystem carbon turnover time: uncertainties and robust features,

Earth Syst. Sci. Data, 12, 2517–2536,

https://doi.org/10.5194/essd-12-2517-2020, 2020.</span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Shi, Z., Crowell, S., Luo, Y. et al.

Model structures amplify uncertainty in predicted soil carbon responses to

climate change. Nat Commun 9, 2171 (2018). </span><a

href="https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-04526-9"><span lang=EN-US>https://doi.org/10.1038/s41467-018-04526-9</span></a><span

lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US>Sulman, B.N., Moore, J.A.M., Abramoff,

R. et al. Multiple models and experiments underscore large uncertainty in soil

carbon dynamics. Biogeochemistry 141, 109–123 (2018). </span><a

href="https://doi.org/10.1007/s10533-018-0509-z"><span lang=EN-US>https://doi.org/10.1007/s10533-018-0509-z</span></a></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><span lang=EN-US> </span></p>

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Recommendation: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R0/PR4

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Dear authors,

Many thanks for submitting your manuscript to our journal! We have now received two reviews from highly qualified colleagues in the field. Both reviewers are surprisingly consistent in their assessments. Reviewer #1 is particularly concerned that the paper has a significant overlap with previous work, while Reviewer #2 more generally struggles to see the novelty of the study. Both reviewers suggest that clearer explanations are needed regarding how this study extends previous work and why the chosen methods are preferable.

Additionally, both reviewers express concerns about the methodology. The use of the modified Metropolis-Hastings algorithm is not sufficiently justified, and it is unclear why this method is preferred over previous methods. Reviewer #2, more generally, argues that the methodology is poorly organized, with unclear or missing information, making it difficult to follow the study’s approach. Furthermore, the meaning of the parameter spread/uncertainty obtained from the Metropolis-Hastings algorithm remains unclear, and the lack of comparison with other baseline methods or goodness-of-fit measures weakens the method’s validation. The discussion of uncertainty is also lacking.

Interestingly, the reviewers differ in their assessment of the presentation quality of the paper. I would recommend addressing the specific points raised by Reviewer #2, who is requesting substantial improvements in this regard.

In summary, the paper requires very thorough revisions, including a clearer justification of the proposed approach or comparison with other methods.

Looking forward to a revised version of the paper!

Miguel Mahecha

Decision: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R0/PR5

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<p class=MsoNoSpacing><b>Review of Zobitz et al. </b></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The authors have already done a good job revising the

manuscript, especially improving on clarity of the methods and results, clarity

in language as well as visual presentation of the results. With the improved

clarity, it is evident that this study is particularly relevant to model

developers, as it highlights the sensitivity of soil respiration estimates and

it components to model parameterization choices.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The manuscript is listed as an application paper and the

authors address two questions 1) to what extent does site-specific variability,

measured across the fire chronosequence, influence parameterization for this

quasi-steady-state model? 2) How does soil carbon model structure influence the

predicted components of soil respiration?</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>After reviewing the manuscript again, I found these

points should be revised before the manuscript is ready for final publication: </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Firstly, there is a disparity between the results

presented and their discussion. The results section is structured such that the

two research questions are answered chronologically which is nice, but the text

is very condensed without much reference on what the results of the different

model tests indicate. As a result, I found myself going back and forth between the

results, discussion and figures way too many times to try and figure out how

the discussion points related to the results. I recommend another iteration to

try and improve the clarity of the presentation of the results and their

discussion, especially with regard to their meaning in a broader context (see

specific comments).</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Secondly, the parameters for each model were estimated

using the measurements and minimizing the error between modelled and observed

Rs, but the authors do not present the updated model fluxes against the site

observations. Therefore, it is difficult to assess whether the presented model

with additional parameter estimates actually improves predictions of the soil

respiration flux and its components (Ra, Rh and Rg). While the Supplementary

Information provides RMSE values as an indication of model fit, it would be

very informative if this is additionally shown with data points or a line in

Fig. 6 (panel Rs). Additionally, it is very hard to visually compare individual

model performance for Rs as the model lines and confidence intervals overlap so

much between the 3 models. This might be improved by generating a higher

resolution image, or by additionally showing relative differences between

models in a separate subpanel in Fig. 6.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Third, the authors use a well-known empirical equation (L.

212) to modify respiration according to soil water content. However, Moyano et

al. (2013) developed this equation for soils with less than 5% OC. Since the

study sites are described as permafrost soils, which typically have high

organic carbon content, and the study references substantial soil carbon

storage (L. 43-44), it is possible that these sites exceed the 5% OC threshold.

If the chosen optimum for the soil moisture rate modifier is too high, this may

lead to unintended biases in the simulated respiration rates, especially under

saturated conditions. Therefore, the authors should explore how sensitive the

model results are to the use of different soil moisture rate modifiers that are

more representative of the organic soils featured in this study. Furthermore,

the discussion should address the sensitivity of the model results to the

choice of the function h(SWC), but also to the derivation of soil water content

from MODIS data without direct site measurements. The study assumes that the

averaging method used is sufficient, but without validation, this approach may

introduce biases that remain unexamined. A more thorough discussion of these

potential uncertainties and their impact on model outcomes is needed.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Lastly, I recommend another round of detailed language

editing throughout the document, as it still contains several typing errors,

unclear sentences, and incorrect use of verbs and plural/singular nouns. </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><b>Specific comments:</b></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>The last 5 lines of the abstract are unclear, this might

be a Latex related error when rendering the PDF? E.g., I don’t understand what “(1)

developed algebraic expressioosequence sites” means, and what the authors

recommend in the final sentence. Please check and rephrase.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 14/15 This sentence is unclear to me, what is meant

with carefully characterizing? </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 56/57 I think soil respiration (Rs, first mentioned in

L. 29) and its components, Ra (not mentioned until L. 57) and Rh (first

mentioned in L. 23/24), should be introduced a bit earlier and then used

consistently. In this light, I recommend the authors briefly describe each

respiration component that will be assessed in the manuscript early in the

introduction, and then use these terms consistently – different terms (e.g.,

soil respiration, soil microbial respiration, heterotrophic (microbial)

respiration) are used intermittently throughout the introduction. Microbial

growth respiration (Rg) is separately assessed by the authors, but not

mentioned in the introduction at all.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 129-131 Please clarify that Ts was measured at the

site and those data were used to reproduce daily values following an annual

cycle as described in the supplement (described in L. 124-125 but without

explicitly mentioning Ts), whereas FGPP and SWC are completely derived from the

MODIS products as described directly below. </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 207 If the units of Ra and FGPP are gC m−2

d−1, then why is the unit of root turnover yr-1? I do not see where the

time conversion is made in Eq. 2.1. or the supplement (around L. 89). So,

either the unit is wrong, or a time conversion is missing from the equations.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 273 Please clarify. What is meant by the second

rejection rule ‘R<sup>2</sup> is greater than a uniformly distributed random

number between zero and unity’. I would expect all R<sup>2 </sup>values to not

exceed a value of 1, nor can they be negative. </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 299 Briefly describe how this meta-analysis as conducted</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 322-323 This lack of a meaningful trend is actually

not so obvious on visual inspection, because of the different scaling of the

y-axis for the different paramters. Maybe these non-significant parameters can

be visually marked in the figure or mentioned in the figure caption?</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 335 .</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 341-342 It is not clear to me why Rh and Rg are not

similarly affected? Since they share the same soil moisture function

proportional to the C pools.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 343-345 This decrease is related to the empirical

representation of oxygen limitation on respiration in the Moyano function. Related

to my general comment on the use of the function h(swc), these results are

beyond the optimum and could be affected by the use of an inappropriate soil

moisture function for soils with high OC content.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>From L 350 For clarity, perhaps it would be good to

briefly restate the goal and what exactly is compared for each of these three

empirical relationships from the literature (Davidson, Bond-Lamberty, Subke)

before listing the results.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 416 It is not explicitly mentioned in the results that

model parameterisation is sensitive to chronosequence age (can only be

inferred).</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 426-432 Please be a bit more descriptive. What are the

implications of the (lack of) agreement between the models and these empirical

relationships from the literature?</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 501-502 Please rephrase. This is not really a

conclusion but an obvious result of the methods, since the model was calibrated

to fit the data by minimising the errors… </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing><b>Minor comments:</b></p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 184 Propose to rephrase to ‘… , <u>and</u> soil water

content SWC;’ assuming all inputs are needed to run the model.</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 189: Please clarify the use of ‘similar to’. If these

models are not identical to Zobitz et al. [114], the authors should briefly

describe and motivate these modifications since the previous model version

(possibly referring to Fig. 2).</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 210 remove ‘in’</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 215 Equation 2.3, not 2.4</p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>L. 337 Remove ‘we discuss reasons for these differences

later’. </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing> </p>

<p class=MsoNoSpacing>Fig 7. Spelling mistake in ‘proprtion’</p>

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Review: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R1/PR8

Conflict of interest statement

Reviewer declares none.

Comments

Review #2: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence.

Questions, comments and suggestions:

The changes made it clearer to me what novelty the work brings in comparison to a previous publication by the authors. I do believe it is an interesting, relevant investigation (understanding site- and model-specific differences in soil respiration) and promising well-structured factorial study design (comparing sites, models, and depths). However, the revision has also reinforced my concerns regarding their applied parameter estimation method, which is the so-called modified Metropolis-Hastings algorithm, which puts in question many claims.

1) Their modified Metropolis-Hastings is a heuristic approach to explore the parameter space for optimization. It is not truly a proper uncertainty quantification method. They highlight that it is a stochastic optimization method but finally, they use it for capturing parameter distributions.

2) Their rejection of standard MCMC (or even Levenberg-Marquardt optimization) is weak - it’s more about practicality than theoretical necessity.

3) The Wilcoxon and Kruskal-Wallis tests may not be valid because the ‘parameter distributions’ they analyze are biased, optimization-driven outputs rather than true independent samples from some distribution. This violates the independence assumption and most likely stationarity, i.e., the distribution from which you sample your parameters may change during your training process. Furthermore, the Wilcoxon test requires samples that are naturally paired, which is not given here.

4) Their interpretation of statistical significance is flawed (including dismissing Wilcoxon results as spurious when Kruskal-Wallis is not significant; see L329).

I see two options from here:

A) The authors should not conduct statistically invalid statistical tests and clearly state that the obtained parameters mainly serve to give an intuition on how constrained the model is and if alternative parameter regions exist. As this also does not justify confidence bands for the ensemble predictions, this would also need to be addressed and restated.

B) The authors should use a proper MCMC technique or a theoretically justified approximation that fulfills the computational/data constraints. Besides that, they should use a visual inspection with violin plots of the parameter distributions.

While addressing these issues is possible, it would require fundamental changes to the parameter estimation method and a reanalysis of the results. To make the study valid, the authors would need to switch to a proper MCMC or a justified approximation, revise their interpretation of statistical results, and restructure how they assess parameter uncertainty. Given the scope of these changes, this goes beyond what is typically feasible within a revision cycle. I, therefore, recommend rejection.

Further minor comments:

- Figure 4: Violin plots are much more meaningful than the boxplots if one wants to describe the distribution of the parameters.

- The authors should also state how they propose a new set of parameters.

- In the convergence analysis, 10 simulations were conducted. The authors should specify what varied between runs—was it the initial value, the random seed, or another factor?

- For the convergence analysis in the appendix, the RMSE plots would be more meaningful in log-scale and the x-axis should be the same across sites. It is noteworthy that for 1968, it seems to be very hard to find a good fit.

- I think more meaningful would also be to show the chains of RMSE values.

- Something happened to the text of the abstract as some part seem to have been cut out. I could infer from what you meant from one of their answers to the reviewers.

- L291-292: The reason for the correction that should be given here is the repeated statistical tests.

Language/Grammar/Typos:

- In the last line of the abstract, multiple occurrences of ‘and’ appear in succession. The first ‘and’ should be replaced with a comma.

- L17 Missing Comma: ‘Currently,’

- L215: I guess it is suppose to be Eq 2.3

- Figure 3 Caption Typo: ‘include gross primary productivity’

- Figure 7 Caption Typo: ‘p_A: proportion’

- L228 Typo: recalcitrant

Recommendation: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R1/PR9

Comments

Dear Authors,

Thank you very much for your revised manuscript and for your patience throughout the extended review process.

Unfortunately, this has developed into a somewhat difficult editorial situation, as I now have one recommendation for major revisions and one for rejection.

One reviewer raises serious concerns about the parameter estimation method itself—specifically the validity of using a modified Metropolis-Hastings algorithm for uncertainty quantification—and also critiques the application of the chosen statistical tests. This reviewer suggests either re-framing the approach without statistical inference or confidence bands, or adopting a more theoretically sound parameter estimation method.

The second reviewer is generally more supportive and acknowledges that the revision has improved clarity. However, they also raise substantial concerns, particularly regarding the alignment between the results and discussion, as well as methodological aspects—most notably related to the soil moisture function and other elements not covered by the first reviewer.

In light of these reviews, I would like to offer you the opportunity to address these issues through a major revision. If you decide to undertake this revision, I would be happy to consult the same reviewers again based on the updated manuscript.

Please carefully consider both reviews and respond to each point in a detailed rebuttal letter alongside your revised submission.

Best regards, Miguel Mahecha

Decision: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R1/PR10

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Author comment: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R2/PR11

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Review: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R2/PR12

Conflict of interest statement

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Comments

Reviewer comments on Zobitz et al., 2025

The authors have made commendable progress in improving the language and overall structure of the manuscript, which has significantly enhanced its readability and clarity. The study presents results that are of clear value to the scientific community, and I am supportive of its eventual publication. However, I believe that at least one more round of major revisions is still necessary before it can be accepted. In light of the fact that this is already the third round of major revisions, my current recommendation to the editor is to reject the paper with a note to consider major revisions.

In particular, substantial improvements are needed in the structuring of the Results and Discussion sections to ensure that the narrative is coherent and logically developed. The Conclusions section should also be revised to better reflect the main findings of the study, as outlined in the abstract. See major and specific comments below.

Ultimately, it is at the editor?s discretion whether to invite another revision. Should the authors be given a further opportunity, I strongly encourage them to address all reviewer comments thoroughly and provide a clear, point-by-point response in their rebuttal letter. This will help ensure that the revised version is structurally sound and allows reviewers to focus fully on evaluating the scientific content of the work rather than any structural shortcomings.

Major comments:

There is an issue with the description and notation of the litter inputs and parameters to the FireGrow model that needs to be resolved before the article can be published. In all equations (main text and supplement) the notation LVP, LM and LT is used to describe the litter inputs to the model (gC m−2 d−1, L102 in the Supplement). LVP, LM and LT are also clearly marked as model inputs in Figure 3. However, Table 1 and section 2.4 then suddenly state that the input rates themselves were estimated with the optimization method ? also note that the units of LVP, LM and LT have suddenly changed from gC m−2 d−1 to d−1 in Table 1. Furthermore, and very much confusing, additional parameters related to these input rates (called LW, LM and LS) are suddenly presented in Figure 4 without any mention of their relationship to the input rates anywhere throughout the manuscript or supplement.

The authors need to add a clear description to the manuscript for the relationships between litter input rates LVP, LM, LT, and parameters LW, LM, LS. Either in the form of equations or with a textual description in the methodology section of the paper. If for some reason there has been a typing mistake in Figure 4 and LT, and LW, LM, LS are not new parameters, but rather similar notations for the litter inputs themselves, this should be clearly defined and stated in the manuscript. Model inputs are by definition not the same as model parameters!

The manuscript needs another in-depth iteration with regards to the structuring of the results and discussion (see specific comments for examples). In general, authors have not or only very marginally described the results of the study, in particular for figures 4-7, and scattered such results without a follow-up discussion or interpretation throughout the discussion. The two sections should be thoroughly evaluated and information moved to the relevant section (result or discussion point). For the sake of time I have not listed all examples in the specific comments, but they unfortunately occur in each subsection of the discussion. In addition, the conclusions section needs a rewrite to better reflect the key findings and recommendations of the study as outlined in the abstract.

Specific comments:

L-2 ? L1 (abstract). How do the previously mentioned findings link to data collections during freeze/thaw transitions? I can think of a few reasons, but this is not clear from the abstract summary.

L9. Suggest to rephrase ?In a similar manner?. Actually, the opposite direction of the trend is true, as soil respiration declines when the soil freezes.

L27. To me it seems there is a disconnect between these two sentences with regards to model equifinality. Do the authors want to illustrate that ?the models broadly align? with empirical measurements while they have different models/assumptions behind them? Then this (or another argument) should be stated explicitly.

L30 ? L32. Loose sentence. In line with my suggestion during the previous revision, this definition of Rs and its components should be moved up to the start of the paragraph: i.e., before starting the comparison of RH between models and observations and the problem of model equifinality.

L33. For improved readability, I suggest to integrate the earlier sentences on model equifinality from the previous paragraph here.

L37 ? L38. Q10 models are also empirical models, so what is different here? Please rephrase.

Fig 1. It looks like the captions describing panels a) and b) are accidentally mixed up. Please also include a description of the colours in the panels (blue for northern, red for southern sites) in the caption.

L123 ? L124. From Supplement figure 2 it looks like there was not much difference in the observed (and hence the modelled) soil temperatures between chronosequence sites. Was this also quantitively assessed? If so, it would be worth to briefly mention it in support of the assumption (Supplement, L56-57) that taking the chronosequence site average temperature is valid, despite its likely different successional state such a long time post-burning.

L191 ? L192. See major comments related to the litter parameters and inputs. It is important to mention that the litter inputs to the model are actually estimated in this study using the parameter optimization method as described in section 2.4.

L221 ? L222. The authors do not mention where in the supplement these alternative formulations are described, nor how and for what purpose they were applied in the analysis (they?re not included in Supplement section 4, nor is there any description of what was done in Supplement Section 8). This was one of the major comments in my previous feedbacks, and while I appreciate that the authors added two additional comparisons to the appendix, they still haven?t provided any scientific context in the manuscript as to why this was a useful exercise, nor written much reflection upon this point in the discussion of the results (i.e. mentioning the positive outcome that the model results were robust) despite highlighting it in the abstract.

L277. Is it accepted when the log-likelihood decreases? In L266 it was stated that the log-likelihood is maximized, so this seems counter-intuitive.

L312. The factorial design of what exactly? The experiment, I presume?

L.318 ? L336. A description of the results is missing for Figures 4 and 5. The reader is left to look at the plots without any guidance as to what can be deduced from them. Trends across the chronosequenses and between model subtypes (x is higher than y, upward trend in parameter x with time since burning, etc) should be properly described to guide the readers towards the upcoming discussion! The authors should at a minimum describe the trends in parameter values across the chronosequenses and between model subtypes (fig 4), and report the differences in R2 across the chronosequenses and between model subtypes in Fig 5.

L351 ? L353. Same comment as above, please provide a clear description of the results of Figure 7. The authors did a very good job at this with Figure 8 and can use this as inspiration for improved descriptions of figures 4, 5 and 7.

L. 361 ? L367. I suggest to integrate these two paragraphs, or to reverse their order and start with the description of the 3 empirical relationships in panels 8a-8c (L368-376), as this is very helpful for the interpretation of the statistical results.

L404 ? L411. Multiple results are listed here (and in other parts of section 4, e.g. L421 ? L 426) that belong in the results section 3, as no discussion is included. For example, the sentence ?The depth at which ?. Components (Figures 6 and 7).? describes a single result and the authors do no not discuss this finding or interpret in a broader context (which is the whole purpose of a discussion).

L482. While the results of the study do support this claim, this recommendation comes somewhat out of the blue without the proper description of the results for figure 7 in section 3 or discussion of the differences between the Null model and the other two in the previous paragraph.

L485. If this is such an important consideration, then differences in fire intensity at the different chronosequence sites should be mentioned and discussed here. Was the fire intensity equal for the years 1968, 1990 and 2012? Or can some of the site differences perhaps be explained by differences in fire intensity versus time since burning?

L505 ? L 513. The conclusions section needs a complete rewrite. First of all, there are some sentences that are not grammatically sound. E.g. L 504 starting at ?? and to examine forecasted? ?, please check. Apart from the linguistic irregularities, the conclusion does not mention one of the study?s main findings on the inclusion of microbial dynamics for such models (key finding 1 in the abstract). It also does not mention root turnover (instead vaguely mentioning ?parameters related to litterfall? for the abstract?s key finding #2. Neither is the suggestion on data collection from the abstract mentioned in the conclusions. Please elaborate and revise.

Supplement Table 1. Please provide a unit for the computed mean uncertainty.

Supplement L45-46. Please mention these local weather stations and their data source, or at least provide geographical locations for reproducibility of the study. If weather data was provided by local PI?s these should be credited in the manuscript?s acknowledgements or data availability statement.

Supplement L89. There is still a unit imbalance here! Similar to my feedback in previous revisions, the authors have to either provide a temporal unit and for delta_R matching the daily time step, or add the conversion for annual root turnover rates to the daily time step directly in equations 5.2 and onward. I later read that this information was added in L215 of the manuscript, so this can simply be repeated in the supplement.

Minor comments:

L149 Small grammatic error. Suggest to change to ?to account for the temperature and?? or to ?taking into account the temperature and??.

L146-166 Please check consistency of inline citations for the whole manuscript, but especially this section. The in-line citation style used alters between ?author, [number]? and the short notation ?[number]?.

L154. Delete repeated info from L144-145.

L165-166.? Delete repeated info from L144-145.

L286. Missing word. Insert ?at? between phase and 2000.

Figure 4. The caption is missing a description of the vertical panels (rows) for the two different soil depths.

L341 ? L 342. Please add a specific reference to Supplement Table 2.

L357. Please add a specific reference to the Supplement location for this information.

L362. Typo in ?signficantly?

L364. Typo, replace ?association? with ?associated?.

L435. Suggest to replace ?literature has? with ?previous studies have?.

L501. Latex rendering error for Figure.

Supplement L32. Define acronym GSVD here (used in line 35).

Supplement figure 1. Please provide a legend or caption description for the grey areas in the right panel.

Recommendation: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R2/PR13

Comments

Dear Dr. Zobitz and colleagues,

Thank you for submitting the revised version of your manuscript. The paper was re‑evaluated by one of the original reviewers. While s/he underscores that you have made commendable progress in improving the language and overall structure, they also identified a number of substantive issues that prevent the paper from being acceptable in its current form. After reviewing these concerns, I unfortunately must concur with the reviewer’s assessment.

In particular, the reviewer highlighted inconsistencies in notation and units (!!!)—most notably regarding the litter input variables and parameters in the model—which require substantial clarification. The relationships among variables such as LVP, LM, LT, and LW, LM, LS remain unclear and are inconsistently presented between the text, figures, and tables. These issues must be resolved for the study to be scientifically sound.

Beyond these technical inconsistencies, the reviewer also noted that the Results and Discussion sections require significant restructuring. Key findings from several figures (notably Figures 4–7) are insufficiently described, with results scattered throughout the Discussion without adequate interpretation. The Conclusions section also needs to be revised to more clearly reflect the main findings etc..

As this is already the third round of major revisions and the outstanding issues are substantial, my current decision is to reject the manuscript in its present form. However, should you wish to undertake another round of major revisions, I encourage you to carefully address the reviewer’s comments in full, as doing so could make the paper publishable.

The full reviewer report is appended below for your reference.

With best regards,

Miguel Mahecha

Decision: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R2/PR14

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Author comment: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R3/PR15

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Recommendation: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R3/PR16

Comments

Dear authors,

thank you for your efforts in revising the manuscript. I apologize for the delay in getting back to you. Overall, I am happy to recommend acceptance of the paper. I only have a few minor points that I would ask you to address before final publication:

I am confused by the sentence “Here we apply a series of mathematical models with a machine learning method to quantify annual patterns in the contribution of soil respiration from roots or microbes.” There is no machine learning method used in the paper. Please revise this wording accordingly.

The paper starts with an inaccuracy: “At present, the net exchanges among the terrestrial, oceanic, and atmospheric carbon pools are larger than total anthropogenic carbon emissions, and uncertainties in the terrestrial carbon cycle remain greater than the global carbon imbalance itself.” This statement is not correct. The gross fluxes (e.g. GPP and ecosystem respiration) are much larger than anthropogenic emissions. However, the net natural sink (land + ocean uptake) is smaller than anthropogenic emissions, not larger. The cited reference [35] explicitly explains this distinction. Or did I misread the sentence?

What is meant by “Aears web service”? This appears to be a typographical or encoding error (presumably AppEEARS). Please correct.

I find that the terminology used for k_R is misleading. In Equation 2.2, k_R is a kinetic rate constant, not a respiration rate. Referring to it as such (as I read it) seems to obscure the distinction between process rate constants and realized respiration fluxes which have units of flux densities (R_A, Eq. 2.1). Please revise the terminology to avoid conceptual confusion.

With these minor points addressed, I see no remaining obstacles to recommend publication to the EIC.

Best regards,

Miguel Mahecha

Decision: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R3/PR17

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Author comment: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R4/PR18

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Recommendation: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R4/PR19

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Decision: Combined effects of site and model parameterization for soil respiration components in a Canadian wildfire chronosequence — R4/PR20

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