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Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  13 March 2023

Dylan E. McNamara*
Affiliation:
Department of Physics and Physical Oceanography, University of North Carolina Wilmington, Wilmington, NC, USA
Eli D. Lazarus
Affiliation:
Environmental Dynamics Lab, School of Geography & Environmental Science, University of Southampton, Southampton, UK
Evan B. Goldstein
Affiliation:
Department of Geography, Environment, and Sustainability, University of North Carolina Greensboro, Greensboro, NC, USA
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Author for correspondence: Dylan E. McNamara, Email: mcnamarad@uncw.edu
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Abstract

Given the inevitability of sea-level rise, investigating processes of human-altered coastlines at the intermediate timescales of years to decades can sometimes feel like an exercise in futility. Returning to the big picture and long view of feedbacks, emergent dynamics, and wider context, here we offer 10 existential questions for research into human–coastal coupled systems.

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Author comment: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R0/PR1

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Review: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R0/PR2

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Comments to Author: This paper presents ten compelling questions for the study of dynamically coupled human-coastal systems. The language used by the authors is raw and sometimes cutting, but for the most part, I think it is effective in conveying the message (in my words) “the inevitable is on the horizon, but there is still some science to be done that is interesting, and may be useful, if we focus on the long timescale dynamics by which these systems are governed”.

I have a few minor comments/suggestions:

1) I appreciate the Titanic reference in the abstract – it is effective – but the figure makes the analogy overdone and feels insincere. I suggest removing it.

2) In Q1: “Although the complete story arc of these emergent behaviors – cyclical boom and bust in coastal real-estate, chaotic shoreline change along managed coastlines – has yet to be observed outside a numerical model (McNamara and Werner, 2008a and 2008b), we are witnessing a progression through its plot points.” This statement can be bolstered with a comment on the timescales of these emergent behaviors.

3) In Q3, I find the argument and hypotheses a little oversimplified.

First, I agree that over long timescales, there is an increase in systemic fragility due to SLR, but in some respects, things do get less fragile on sandy coastlines at intermediate timescales...houses get elevated and rebuilt with more wind-resistant roofs. Probably good to qualify (again) here that you are talking about systemic fragility over long timescales.

As to “why” events that should offer a chance to reset increase fragility, there is no mention of 1) risk tolerance – that there are significant benefits to people living where they are, and that the risks are worth it (e.g., connection to place, community), 2) the fact that the government supports/enables the status quo, and 3) migration constraints – there are complex social, psychological, and financial contexts in which decisions to rebuild or migrate are made. How long has the frog lived in the pot? Is the pot the only pot the frog has ever known? Is the pot the only asset the frog has? The hypotheses should be extended to include some of these factors.

This is up to the authors, but issues of climate justice could be included here. For example, the fact that wealthier communities get more aid after disasters: under the current paradigm, more infrastructure at risk means wealthier communities have more to lose. As Hino and Nance (2022) put it “...it is currently harder to protect a poor household than a rich one”. So as we think about who is going to be most affected by SLR, or have the greatest burden, I think it is marginalized groups that live in low-lying coastal areas who are not elevating or “building back bigger” and maybe don't have the capacity to migrate.

4) “What can we discern and learn about modern human–coastal coupled systems from reconstructing dynamics of abandonment, and the environmental artifacts and evidentiary legacies that remain?” – shouldn’t this really be “....learn about the future environmental impact of human–coastal coupled systems from reconstructing dynamics of abandonment…”? Seems like too general of a statement for this question.

A typo: There is an extra period after “away”: “In both cases, hazardous debris was soon bobbing around hundreds of meters offshore, and washing up on beaches over 20 km away. (Crist, 2022; Gleeson, 2022; Fausset, 2022; NPS, 2022a, 2022b; Price, 2022).”

Review: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R0/PR3

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Comments to Author: Review of initial content for Cambridge Prisms: Coastal Futures

McNamara et al. present a research agenda for the study of coupled human-natural coastal systems. They draw on a body of work that has evolved mainly over the past few decades but that many coastal scientists (including myself) are not as familiar with as they probably should be. With that in mind, I believe their contribution can serve a useful purpose.

While I appreciate the Titanic deck chair metaphor and illustration (I have to look up that AI tool!), in its present form I feel this remains a bit detached from the substance of the contribution. It speaks to the Introduction, but not a whole lot beyond that. I partly say this because the piece ends rather abruptly. The authors discuss their ten selected questions, but an overarching conclusion is lacking. Is there a way to circle back to the opening statement? Along the way, I do think they offer some thoughts (e.g., in Section 2.10) that could be used to argue that rearranging the deck chairs may not prevent the sinking of the Titanic but could perhaps slow it down. This is more important than it might appear; buying time may well prove pivotal to enable managed retreat as opposed to chaos. I would suggest that doing something along these lines would make for a more well-rounded paper.

Since this is clearly aimed at a broad audience, avoiding technicalities and jargon seems important. I found some portions of the text (e.g., Section 2.5) a bit challenging for those not well versed in dynamical systems theory (attractors, dissipation, and so on). To me, this reads too much like inside baseball, so please try to make things as accessible as possible. (Would an illustration help?) Likewise, the authors lost me in the next section that invokes Thomas Kuhn (i.e., scientific revolutions) but how that relates to the persistence of indigenous oyster fisheries escaped me.

The referencing needs work – I found it somewhat unbalanced. For example, in Section 2.7, the authors mention the collapse of a few homes along the NC coast. This serves a purpose, but in the grand scheme it is a relatively minor element. Yet they list no fewer than six references in association with this. In contrast, other aspects that are arguably at least as important are not backed up by any citations at all (I provide an example below). This needs to be ironed out.

The section on model testing (2.4) is interesting but largely lacks references. This seems like a missed opportunity; what the authors advocate for is not unlike what has been done in climate modeling where we are now able to evaluate predictions that were made in the past (e.g., Rahmstorf et al., 2012, ERL; Hausfather et al., 2019, GRL). I think their argument would be much stronger if they would build on such efforts in closely related research fields. Quite frankly, and for the purposes of the present piece, this may be more compelling than studies of eolian bedforms.

On a related note, the authors could do a better job ensuring that they use the most current information. With respect to sea-level rise and its impacts they cite Nicholls & Cazenave (2010) and Wong et al. (2013) which are somewhat dated sources within this rapidly advancing field. Why not cite work from the latest (AR6) IPCC report or the SROCC report? More broadly, I was wondering why there are no references to some of the most influential recent work on coastal hazards due to climate change within a decision-making framework. Papers by Jeroen Aerts, Marjolijn Haasnoot, and A.R. Siders (among others) come to mind; they advance well beyond Kabat et al. (2005). It seems imperative for this inaugural content in a new and ambitious journal to exhibit a full and balanced grasp of the most recent, relevant international literature.

Torbjörn Törnqvist

Review: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R0/PR4

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Comments to Author: This is an interesting commentary raising a series of important points about human-coastal coupled systems. The range of questions and the topics covered are relevant, but there are a few aspects that I would encourage the authors to consider for improving the clarity of the text and better convey the main message of the manuscript.

In specific:

Abstract

1) Consider using a different metaphor to “rearranging deck chairs on the Titanic”. While it may be relatively clear for readers in English-speaking countries, it isn’t necessarily evident to readers in other Geographies. In fact, it may actually be more appropriate to avoid metaphors altogether in the abstract and ensure that is a clear and direct presentation of the scope and main topics of the commentary.

2) Additionally, because of the format of the submitted document, it is not clear if the Twitter quote is part of the abstract or the introduction, but given that social media posts and accounts can be temporary, it may be preferable to cite is as a web reference including the year, with the URL in the reference list instead of directly below the quote.

Introduction

1) the introduction starts with some provocative statements, which is perfectly fine for a commentary of this nature. However, I do question if one meter of sea level rise will lead to human-altered low-lying coastal systems that are “fundamentally” different from their current states? Fundamentally in this context seems to suggest almost completely different types of coastal system, potentially with different physical processes operation. However, coastal systems, even human-altered ones are likely to exhibit “significant” changes, but perhaps not fundamental.

2) In the final paragraph of the introduction, there is a mention to a corpus of research on human-dominated barrier systems, but no mentions to works that explore this is presented. It would be important to add few examples of such “corpus of research”.

3) The long-time scale mentioned in the abstract and introduction should be clarified here. Is this multidecadal, centennial or millennial? Does it cross these time periods?

4) Figure 1 refers to the metaphor in the abstract but is neither mentioned nor contextualised in the introduction. Perhaps the metaphor can be better incorporated (and contextualized) in the introduction, and in that case it would make sense to retain the figure.

5) Besides stating that the work explores ten questions, it would be important to provide some additional context for the work, particularly what makes them “existential” questions, and perhaps indicating the overarching themes that the 10 questions explore. As it stands, the introduction doesn’t really place the work into a context or sets the scene for the analysis of each question.

Questions

2.1 – What emergent dynamics have resulted from strong coupling between human activities and physical processes at the coastline?

The argument that economic recessions occur at long timescales that are beyond the scales where coupling of human-natural coastal change occurs is an odd one. For example, recent economic recessions (e.g. 2008) occurred at multiannual to decadal timescales and have driven austerity measures, which are likely to have impacted coastal processes by reducing financial resources to maintain regular beach nourishment interventions, or even interrupted detrimental infrastructure development in coastal areas given lower investment capability by local to national governments.

2.2 – What is necessary to dynamically influence the coastal system on long timescales, when the future fate of the system is forced by sea level?

The argument on legally acknowledging the intrinsic value and right to exist of a coastal landscape is an interesting one, and this could be reinforced by a mention to a very recent case in Spain, described in Stokstad (2022, https://doi.org/10.1126/science.adf1848).

2.3 – Why do events that should warn us about the future and offer a chance to reset lead to decisions that increase systemic fragility?

When discussing the hypothesis for increased fragility, perhaps it is worth considering also place attachment, particularly by some communities (e.g. small-scale fishers), who may have strong cultural and economic reasons to remain in vulnerable coastal locations, despite being repeated impacted by storm hazards (e.g Costas et al., 2015: DOI: 10.1016/j.ocecoaman.2015.05.015).

2.7 - It would be interesting to include in this argument the fact that not only buildings or infrastructure exists at the coast and its destruction causes environmental pollution. Along estuarine shorelines, reclaimed land or made ground, often associated with derelict industrial and commercial buildings, is being eroded and contaminating saltmarshes, estuaries and back barrier environments.

2.10 – This question focusses on intermediate timescales (are these decades or centuries?), but the temporal aspect is not really clear in the argument. Are the authors suggesting that collapse of coastal communities can happen in a few decades of aggressive exploitation of coastal resources (just like the cod stocks)?

Conclusion

1) Here the issue is actually the lack of a conclusion (or something to that effect). The manuscript ends abruptly and for a commentary type paper, it would be important to provide either an overview of the main argument or perhaps discuss if some of the topics that are presented in the various questions should be prioritized in relation to others. The 10 questions prompt consideration of multiple aspects of human-coastal systems, but the reader is left hanging without a clear conclusion conveying the main message of the commentary.

Minor language comments and suggestions are included in the annotated manuscript.

Recommendation: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R0/PR5

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Comments to Author: All three reviewers have noted the timely and compelling nature of this manuscript and are in broad agreement that, whilst agreeing the overall content, that there are aspects of the text that should be modified and improved. The reviewers have made a very thorough evaluation with strong recommendations and guidance for improving the text and I encourage the Authors to closely follow that advice. I look forward to the submission of a revised text.

Decision: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R0/PR6

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Author comment: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R1/PR7

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Review: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R1/PR8

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Comments to Author: The revisions and clarifications provided by he authors appropriately addressed my comments and criticisms of the original manuscript. Best wishes, Carlos Loureiro

Recommendation: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R1/PR9

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Comments to Author: The Authors have clearly made a very thorough revision based on the Reviewer comments and addressed their concerns and recommendations in full. This paper will be a significant contribution to the Journal and should be accepted.

Decision: Human–coastal coupled systems: Ten questions — R1/PR10

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