Conventional academic interpretation ascribes the influence of Nathaniel Hawthorne on Melville's narrative style, structure, and subjects to indications present in the fabric of Pierre, his sixth romance. However, Melville dedicated Moby-Dick, not Pierre, to Hawthorne, which implies that he had something important to do with the earlier book. The other factor that suggests active influence relates to the publishing history of Moby-Dick. While Melville had told several persons that the book was “half-done,” “mostly done,” or that it would be completed by autumn 1850, the manuscript did not make it to press until many months later in 1851. During that time, Melville plainly made extensive emendations and revisions, and as far as we can tell today, his characters evolved in traits and motivations along an outline suggestive of a newly tapped paradigm. In fact, scholars agree that his most extensive revisions had to do with adding, eliminating, enlarging, or changing the characters of the drama. Moreover, Melville had not been happy with his two previous romances, despite their positive contributions to his popularity. He had written to his father-in-law in this regard as he left for Europe in 1849: “But no reputation that is gratifying to me can possibly be achieved by either of these books [Redburnr and White-Jacket].
They are two jobs which I have done for money–being forced to it, as other men are to sawing wood.”
While most critics agree that Melville was then undertaking a mixed-form novel5 like Balzac's usual mélange of science and passion, it probably was more linearly connected than truly mixed. Like White-Jacket, Moby-Dick was likely written in accumulating stages: the simple narrative version first, although quite a different narrative than exists now. From remarks and conversations that have been recorded, there was no serious uncertainty about the nature of the ending, with the whale ultimately bringing down the ship, which Melville appears to have had in mind from the first as the “wild legend.” After that initial direction of the story, and possibly some of the commentary on whaling, Melville dedicated himself to two additional phases developing some of the more difficult dramatic passages or supplementary essays and consolidating rewrites to make the book appear to present a continuous flow of ideas.